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== Tipitaka ==
You wrote, "the Tipitaka is central to all Buddhist schools." This is not true. The third pitaka, the abhidhammapitaka, is exclusively Theravada. Other early schools had very different ones, and the Mahayanists still refer to the Sarvastivada one. Also the Vinaya and agamas are slightly different for different schools. [[User:Mitsube|Mitsube]] ([[User talk:Mitsube|talk]]) 04:25, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
== Paella ==
Hello Luis. I saw that you removed every one of the changes I made.
Now let me tell you why this changes were made.
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The article is not giving any information on the dish in the begining, exept mentioning rice.
.That's why I added '''“usually containing vegetables and meat or seafood”'''. One have to present the topic in the begining, see “How to write an article”. People want to read about the dish , not about the Valencians. You have to think about the readers too.
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Not everybody knows who the Valencians are. Things which are obvious to you, a Spanish talking person – well, they might not be that clear for others, you know. That is why mentioning the language, some illiterate people from U.S. may think that they are Italian ppeople from Venice or get confused in other ways. You need to mention that when you introduce the information, not later, or below.
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'''It's these ingredients that Valencians insist go into making.'''
Well, this sounds like: the Valencians insist , but you disagree. Anyway it is not a neutral way of expressing something. It is better to use some other , more neutral way of expressing this.
You got used to this article, editing it a lot. But when somebody is reading it for the first time, from the outside, like me, than I get a first impression, and discover things you maybe have stopped thinking about, since you are so familiar with it.
Ok?
[[User:Warrington|Warrington]] ([[User talk:Warrington|talk]]) 20:13, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
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Tipitaka
You wrote, "the Tipitaka is central to all Buddhist schools." This is not true. The third pitaka, the abhidhammapitaka, is exclusively Theravada. Other early schools had very different ones, and the Mahayanists still refer to the Sarvastivada one. Also the Vinaya and agamas are slightly different for different schools. Mitsube (talk) 04:25, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
Paella
Hello Luis. I saw that you removed every one of the changes I made. Now let me tell you why this changes were made.
!.
The article is not giving any information on the dish in the begining, exept mentioning rice.
.That's why I added “usually containing vegetables and meat or seafood”. One have to present the topic in the begining, see “How to write an article”. People want to read about the dish , not about the Valencians. You have to think about the readers too.
2
Not everybody knows who the Valencians are. Things which are obvious to you, a Spanish talking person – well, they might not be that clear for others, you know. That is why mentioning the language, some illiterate people from U.S. may think that they are Italian ppeople from Venice or get confused in other ways. You need to mention that when you introduce the information, not later, or below.
3
It's these ingredients that Valencians insist go into making.
Well, this sounds like: the Valencians insist , but you disagree. Anyway it is not a neutral way of expressing something. It is better to use some other , more neutral way of expressing this.
You got used to this article, editing it a lot. But when somebody is reading it for the first time, from the outside, like me, than I get a first impression, and discover things you maybe have stopped thinking about, since you are so familiar with it. Ok?
Warrington (talk) 20:13, 11 October 2008 (UTC)