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== GA Review == |
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These are some of the reasons that I failed this article: |
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*There are Spelling errors in the lead. |
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*There are [[WP:ACCESS]] violations at every opportunity, and are especially egregious in the lead. |
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*The article is short to the point that it may not be comprehensive. |
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*The explanation of Dvorak T-numbers is clumsy and probably unnecessary. |
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*Other instances of jargon (i.e. deep convection) are unlinked and unexplained. |
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*The citations are bare. |
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*<s>The Reference heading is a casual "Refs", and External links has been abbreviated to "Links".</s> |
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*There is no "See also" section, which may or may be justified. |
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I would continue, but I think these are sufficient grounds. [[User:Plasticup|<b><font color="#0080FF">Plasticup</font></b>]] [[User_Talk:Plasticup |<font color="#2A8E82"><sup><small>T</small></sup></font>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Plasticup|<font color="#2A8E82"><small>C</small></font>]] 20:57, 11 October 2008 (UTC) |
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Mabey I can fix this up a little. Add see Also, an External links, and a references section.[[User talk:Yellow Evan|Leave Message]] or[[User:Yellow Evan|Yellow Evan home]] |
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:You have fixed one of the many problems. That is good, but this article is still a long way from Good Article status. [[User:Plasticup|<b><font color="#0080FF">Plasticup</font></b>]] [[User_Talk:Plasticup |<font color="#2A8E82"><sup><small>T</small></sup></font>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Plasticup|<font color="#2A8E82"><small>C</small></font>]] 03:40, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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"The last advisory was issued by JTWC that afternoon." - Am I missing something here? -<small>[[User:CWY2190|<font color="black">CWY2190</font>]]</small><small><small>([[User talk:CWY2190|<font color="red">talk</font>]] • [[Special:Contributions/CWY2190|<font color="darkblue">contributions</font>]])</small></small> 04:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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I ma justing saying it a little differently. More in a moment.[[User talk:Yellow Evan|Leave Message]] or[[User:Yellow Evan|Yellow Evan home]] 04:07, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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I have fixed two. i will be fixing one more.[[User talk:Yellow Evan|Leave Message]] or[[User:Yellow Evan|Yellow Evan home]] 04:11, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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== Plagiarism == |
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I've removed most of the Impact and forecasting section because it was an obvious copy directly from the TCR. This article also needs improved referencing. [[User:Cyclonebiskit|Cyclonebiskit]] ([[User talk:Cyclonebiskit|talk]]) 16:22, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 16:22, 13 October 2008
 | Tropical Storm Dora (2005) was nominated as a Natural sciences good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (October 11, 2008). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
GA Review
These are some of the reasons that I failed this article:
- There are Spelling errors in the lead.
- There are WP:ACCESS violations at every opportunity, and are especially egregious in the lead.
- The article is short to the point that it may not be comprehensive.
- The explanation of Dvorak T-numbers is clumsy and probably unnecessary.
- Other instances of jargon (i.e. deep convection) are unlinked and unexplained.
- The citations are bare.
The Reference heading is a casual "Refs", and External links has been abbreviated to "Links".- There is no "See also" section, which may or may be justified.
I would continue, but I think these are sufficient grounds. Plasticup T/C 20:57, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
Mabey I can fix this up a little. Add see Also, an External links, and a references section.Leave Message orYellow Evan home
- You have fixed one of the many problems. That is good, but this article is still a long way from Good Article status. Plasticup T/C 03:40, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
"The last advisory was issued by JTWC that afternoon." - Am I missing something here? -CWY2190(talk • contributions) 04:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
I ma justing saying it a little differently. More in a moment.Leave Message orYellow Evan home 04:07, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
I have fixed two. i will be fixing one more.Leave Message orYellow Evan home 04:11, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
Plagiarism
I've removed most of the Impact and forecasting section because it was an obvious copy directly from the TCR. This article also needs improved referencing. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 16:22, 13 October 2008 (UTC)