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===[[List of WarCry band members]]===
I'm nominating this list because in my opinion, meets the FLC. It shows the references (are from spanish sources but well-quoted and showing the actual names and dates of retrievement. It tells "everything" related to how the members joined and departed from the band. It shows a timeline with the dates for "album releases" and when the members formed part of the group. I really think this article meets the FLC. [[User:Rockk3r|<span style="solid red;padding:1px;"><font size="-1" style="color:red;">''''' Rockk3r '''''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Rockk3r|<font size="-4" color="Navy">Spit it Out!</font>]] 06:09, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
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* "from Avalanch." – "from another band, Avalanch."
* "with the songs they had composed in their spare time. " – "with songs they composed in their spare time. "
* "Avalanch disapproved of the project, and expelled them from the band. " – up until this point I thought they were already expelled. It's gotta be made clearer that the events before this sentence took place before their expulsion.
* "as soon as they were joining the band." – "as soon as they formed the band."
* "Their second work was" – "Their second album was"
* "at the end of 2002" – "in late 2002"
* "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." – "The band embarked on a year-long supporting tour throughout Spain."
The article still needs a copyedit. I stopped at "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." <font face="Verdana">[[User:Gary King|<font color="#02e">Gary</font> <font color="#02b"><b>King</b></font>]] ([[User talk:Gary King|<font color="#02e">talk</font>]])</font> 20:55, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
'''Done'': I already fixed all the mistakes you found.[[User:Rockk3r|<span style="solid red;padding:1px;"><font size="-1" style="color:red;">''''' Rockk3r '''''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Rockk3r|<font size="-4" color="Navy">Spit it Out!</font>]] 02:40, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
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List of WarCry band members
I'm nominating this list because in my opinion, meets the FLC. It shows the references (are from spanish sources but well-quoted and showing the actual names and dates of retrievement. It tells "everything" related to how the members joined and departed from the band. It shows a timeline with the dates for "album releases" and when the members formed part of the group. I really think this article meets the FLC. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 06:09, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- "from Avalanch." – "from another band, Avalanch."
- "with the songs they had composed in their spare time. " – "with songs they composed in their spare time. "
- "Avalanch disapproved of the project, and expelled them from the band. " – up until this point I thought they were already expelled. It's gotta be made clearer that the events before this sentence took place before their expulsion.
- "as soon as they were joining the band." – "as soon as they formed the band."
- "Their second work was" – "Their second album was"
- "at the end of 2002" – "in late 2002"
- "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." – "The band embarked on a year-long supporting tour throughout Spain."
The article still needs a copyedit. I stopped at "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." Gary King (talk) 20:55, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
'Done: I already fixed all the mistakes you found. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 02:40, 10 October 2008 (UTC)