Talk:Protoss Empire

Additions to article

Well, I said I'd have some edits Clawed One, so here's my plan. As you can already see I've extended the history section substantially (although I feel like its a little too much, if someone can cut it down but keep the current timescale I'd appreciate it), my next moves are to define the society and the government. The end structure should look something like this:

• History
• Government and politics

• The Khala - essentially a constitution section, details on the Khala ideology and the codified Khala's Law.
• Political institutions - what we know of the Conclave and Judicator Assembly.
• Dae'Uhl - essentially a foreign relations section, details on Dae'Uhl policy and implications - notably the existance of other species (from the manual: "...bringing the fruits of their great civilisation to... the more advanced races they encountered.)

• Society

• Castes - elaborated details of the individual castes.
• Tribes - just the current list of tribes with a couple extra notes.

• Inspirations - real world comparisions.
• References - will be added after I complete the rest. It's much easier for me to do the article all at once rather than as I go along.

In addition to this, I'd propose that at some stage we get around to a complete overhaul of the Protoss, Zerg and Terran species pages, making them more akin to the page on humans, focusing on them as a species rather than as factions. This is mainly because most of the history stuff in those articles is also contained in articles such as this. We can then provide some nice pictures of some brains from the campaign selection menu. ☺ -- S@bre 16:42, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

I agree entirely, many of the StarCraft pages need large overhauls. As for the above edits, they sound like a good idea, provided adequate info on each can be found. The Clawed One 16

58, 26 June 2007 (UTC)