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The last FAC was closed by a non admin/bot without very much discussion-I detected vandalism so have re-instated the debate. This article, currently a GA, appears to pass the criteria. Comments? <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]]</span> 09:58, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
The last FAC was closed by a non admin/bot without very much discussion-I detected vandalism so have re-instated the debate. This article, currently a GA, appears to pass the criteria. Comments? <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]]</span> 09:58, 25 July 2007 (UTC)


* '''Done and Comment'''- <s>The awards section needs wikification.</s> [[User:Sushant gupta|Sushant gupta]] 12:17, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
* '''Comment'''- <s>The awards section needs wikification.</s> [[User:Sushant gupta|Sushant gupta]] 12:17, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
{{done}} Those awards that have articles have been wikified! <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]] | <small>[[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Apprentice (UK)|The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say!]]</small></span> 17:02, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
{{done}} Those awards that have articles have been wikified! <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]] | <small>[[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Apprentice (UK)|The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say!]]</small></span> 17:02, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
: okay thats fine, but can you please expand the related programmes section in order to make it more comprehensive. otherwise the article looks nice. thanks, [[User:Sushant gupta|Sushant gupta]] 10:05, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
: okay thats fine, but can you please expand the related programmes section in order to make it more comprehensive. otherwise the article looks nice. thanks, [[User:Sushant gupta|Sushant gupta]] 10:05, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
:: yes, you got it right. those section needs expansion. and may i know why the headlines are in italics. Ummhhh... rest the article is nice. thanks, [[User:Sushant gupta|Sushant gupta]] 10:26, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
:: yes, you got it right. those section needs expansion. and may i know why the headlines are in italics. Ummhhh... rest the article is nice. thanks, [[User:Sushant gupta|Sushant gupta]] 10:26, 27 July 2007 (UTC)


{{tick}} '''Comment'''- the titles are in italics per [[WP:MOS]], I have not carried out the section expansion request, as reliable sources (if any) are hard to come by about these short, one-off episodes. Any infomation added may also cross [[WP:TRIVIA]] and [[WP:POV]]. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]] | <small>[[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Apprentice (UK)|The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say!]]</small></span> 11:07, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
{{tick}} '''Done and Comment'''- the titles are in italics per [[WP:MOS]], I have not carried out the section expansion request, as reliable sources (if any) are hard to come by about these short, one-off episodes. Any infomation added may also cross [[WP:TRIVIA]] and [[WP:POV]]. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS,Arial,Tahoma;">[[User:Dalejenkins|Dalejenkins]] | <small>[[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Apprentice (UK)|The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say!]]</small></span> 11:07, 27 July 2007 (UTC)


* '''Comment''' - Much better than its been before, good job. But still some things: Remove the scrolling ref thing, the specific template was [[Wikipedia:Templates for deletion/Log/2007 June 11#Template:Scrollref|deleted for a reason]].
* '''Comment''' - Much better than its been before, good job. But still some things: Remove the scrolling ref thing, the specific template was [[Wikipedia:Templates for deletion/Log/2007 June 11#Template:Scrollref|deleted for a reason]].

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The Apprentice (UK)

previous FAC

The last FAC was closed by a non admin/bot without very much discussion-I detected vandalism so have re-instated the debate. This article, currently a GA, appears to pass the criteria. Comments? Dalejenkins 09:58, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment- The awards section needs wikification. Sushant gupta 12:17, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Those awards that have articles have been wikified! Dalejenkins | The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say! 17:02, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

okay thats fine, but can you please expand the related programmes section in order to make it more comprehensive. otherwise the article looks nice. thanks, Sushant gupta 10:05, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
yes, you got it right. those section needs expansion. and may i know why the headlines are in italics. Ummhhh... rest the article is nice. thanks, Sushant gupta 10:26, 27 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

checkY Done and Comment- the titles are in italics per WP:MOS, I have not carried out the section expansion request, as reliable sources (if any) are hard to come by about these short, one-off episodes. Any infomation added may also cross WP:TRIVIA and WP:POV. Dalejenkins | The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say! 11:07, 27 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment - Much better than its been before, good job. But still some things: Remove the scrolling ref thing, the specific template was deleted for a reason.

 Done Deleted. Dalejenkins | The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say! 12:17, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Also, the merchandise section. Are those subsections all needed? Most of them are just one sentence. I suggest you remove the subheadings and have all of the info in one or two paragraphs. Gran2 08:14, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Created a table, as the removal of subsections looked messy. Dalejenkins | The Apprentice (UK)'s FA plea-please have your say! 12:17, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]