Talk:Born Free (Dexter)/GA1

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Hello. I've reviewed this article per the criteria in WP:GA?. I have never watched an episode of Dexter.

• Images: no images to check
• MOS, neutrality and sources/sourcing okay
• Lead:
  • It's a season finale but of which season?
  • Is there a reason why the fist Canadian broadcast is mentioned, but e.g. not the first UK and Australian broadcast?
  • "with his long lost brother" -> "with his long-lost brother"
  • "Dexter is up to something" may be to colloquial
• Plot:
  • "Dexter searches his house for clues left by the "Ice Truck Killer"," -> can you add a little more context to this? E.g. why Dexter is searching his house in the first place, a name of the episode where the "Ice Truck Killer" plot was introduced if it wasn't this episode (it really makes no sense to me). Just a few words...
  • I can follow the rest of the plot
• Production:
  • The lead implies that the finale is based on based on Darkly Dreaming Dexter, while here it says the whole season is -> rewrite either one
  • Broad in coverage issue: Is there really nothing about actual production (not just differences between the novel)? You can repeat the writers and director here. Other possibilities are the time and location of filming, hired guest stars.
• Reception:
  • "He made sense of Rudy making Deborah the brothers' first victim" sounds very strange to me
  • "but speculated that it could be discovered the next season." should mention again that Toomey speculated, not no one from the subsentence before

Good article all in all, but the missing context in the Plot section and the lack of broadness in the Production section make me put the article on hold. Please address the above issues within the next seven days per common sense rules. I have this page on my watchlist, so just drop a note here when you think you're done. – sgeureka ^t•c 14:03, 11 October 2008 (UTC)