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*"'''2002 Atlantic hurricane season'''" should not be bolded, it's not the page title. |
*"'''2002 Atlantic hurricane season'''" should not be bolded, it's not the page title. |
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**The 2002 Atlantic hurricane season is still the topic of the page, so it seems it should still be bolded. –[[User:Juliancolton|Juliancolton]] [[User talk:Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''T'''ropical</sup></font>]] [[Special:contributions/Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''C'''yclone</sup></font>]] 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC) |
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*Check dash spacing in the dates, dates like "July 14 – 16" should be: "July 14–16". |
*Check dash spacing in the dates, dates like "July 14 – 16" should be: "July 14–16". |
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**Actually, per [[WP:MOSDASH]], items with a space within either or both of them should contain an enspaced en dash. –[[User:Juliancolton|Juliancolton]] [[User talk:Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''T'''ropical</sup></font>]] [[Special:contributions/Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''C'''yclone</sup></font>]] 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC) |
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*"October 14 - 16"—Hyphen needs to be an en dash, and like I said, should not have spaces. |
*"October 14 - 16"—Hyphen needs to be an en dash, and like I said, should not have spaces. |
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**En dash added. –[[User:Juliancolton|Juliancolton]] [[User talk:Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''T'''ropical</sup></font>]] [[Special:contributions/Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''C'''yclone</sup></font>]] 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC) |
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*"The season ended early, with no tropical storms forming after September 21." Awkward. |
*"The season ended early, with no tropical storms forming after September 21." Awkward. |
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*"and it ties [[2007 Atlantic hurricane season|2007]] for the"—Change 2007 to "the 2007 season" so that it doesn't look like a solitary low-value year link. |
*"and it ties [[2007 Atlantic hurricane season|2007]] for the"—Change 2007 to "the 2007 season" so that it doesn't look like a solitary low-value year link. |
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*"the bounds of the season are from June 1 to November 30" Why is this information repeated? |
*"the bounds of the season are from June 1 to November 30" Why is this information repeated? |
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[[User:Dabomb87|Dabomb87]] ([[User talk:Dabomb87|talk]]) 17:23, 12 October 2008 (UTC) |
[[User:Dabomb87|Dabomb87]] ([[User talk:Dabomb87|talk]]) 17:23, 12 October 2008 (UTC) |
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**Fixed everything else. Thanks for the review. :-) –[[User:Juliancolton|Juliancolton]] [[User talk:Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''T'''ropical</sup></font>]] [[Special:contributions/Juliancolton|<font color="#66666"><sup>'''C'''yclone</sup></font>]] 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 17:34, 12 October 2008
List of storms in the 2002 Atlantic hurricane season
- A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.
I've listed this article for peer review because this needs to be audited for quality for a current FT nomination, and possible instability related to a discussion at WT:WPTC prevents it from becoming featured at the moment. Thanks, –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 14:55, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
- "2002 Atlantic hurricane season" should not be bolded, it's not the page title.
- The 2002 Atlantic hurricane season is still the topic of the page, so it seems it should still be bolded. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Check dash spacing in the dates, dates like "July 14 – 16" should be: "July 14–16".
- Actually, per WP:MOSDASH, items with a space within either or both of them should contain an enspaced en dash. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- "October 14 - 16"—Hyphen needs to be an en dash, and like I said, should not have spaces.
- En dash added. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- "The season ended early, with no tropical storms forming after September 21." Awkward.
- "and it ties 2007 for the"—Change 2007 to "the 2007 season" so that it doesn't look like a solitary low-value year link.
- This is a matter of personal preference, but I think that the lead sentence should be split up: from "The 2002 Atlantic hurricane season was an average Atlantic hurricane season, officially starting on June 1, 2002, and ending on November 30."-->"The 2002 Atlantic hurricane season was an average Atlantic hurricane season. It officially started on June 1, 2002 and ended on November 30." Tell me if you like that.
- "the bounds of the season are from June 1 to November 30" Why is this information repeated?
Dabomb87 (talk) 17:23, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed everything else. Thanks for the review. :-) –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:34, 12 October 2008 (UTC)