Talk:Motorcycle oil

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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by DaveDodgy (talk | contribs) at 18:39, 12 October 2008 (→‎Needs work.). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

??? some big porkies ???

There are some major porkies in this article. I'm trying to clean it up, so it would be good if others could double check my edits. -- Teutonic Tamer 18:56, 19 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Needs work.

The information on this page is largely a repetition of marketing literature and since the claims of motorcycle oil's unique qualities have been strongly contested in the one citation provided, I feel the majority of this article is unsupported and biased. Additionally, since we are discussing motorcycle oil specifically, the sections: engine, transmission, clutch and cooling should probably be within the main section because they represent what is supposedly unique among motorcycle oils. Cooling could possibly be eliminated, as all engines which use oil are effectively cooled by their oil. Again, due to the unsupported claims and contested nature of the subject I intend to edit all or most of this article. Please provide citations if you believe otherwise.

This is also my first edit so feel free to tell me if I'm going about it wrong. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Stupid user (talkcontribs) 06:09, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You neglected to use the 4 ~ at the end of your comment, that's all.DaveDodgy (talk) 18:39, 12 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]