Susan Barrie

Hi. As you people may know I am Blacky98. I am 10 and I am some type of tomboy but doesn't show it often. I am very shy and I don't tattletale. I am NOT a mean person and I always try to be fair. My dad. He's a famous dermatologist in Miami and my grandma is ALWAYS very proud on him. He wants me to follow his path. I think I'm going off to a good start, as a 5th grade. A's, and B's. What do you think? I think it's good, right? I allow people to add pictures of anime people. But don't put something uappropriate. I shall erase it. I want to make this page more beatiful and creative. You may also add poems, stories, ANYTHING! Make this page like your own page! But don't delete.

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Autographs:

Ah, yes, autographs. Can you all please sign and put 4 tildes to sign! Thanks you! If space is running out please enlarge it! Thank you!

Randomnessssssss!!!!!! Write something here. Diary, note, pic. what EVER appeases you. Thanks. Oh yeah, don't forget to sign your masterpeice!

                                   Haiku
                                Two Frogies!! :)

Explanation: A haiku is a Japanese art of poetry. It paints a picture in a mind. There are three sentences. In the first sentence it must have 5 syllables In the second on it must have 7 syllables And in the last one it must have 5 syllables, yet again!

Example:

Two frogs are hopping (5 syllables!)

Bounce, bounce, bounce! They hop SO high! (7 syllables)

Yay! Both of them win! (5 syllables

--Blacky98 (talk) 21:20, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

                                 Ballad
                       Black, the color of darkness!

Explanation: A ballad is also a poem. In ballads the last word in the second and fourth sentence both have to rhyme. If the sentences are TOO long it just won't be right! The sentences have to be short and sweet, but not TOO short, like one VERY short word (Like "A") !!!! Also, ballads must have 5 paragraphs, or should I say 5 stanzas! stanzas are paragraphs,but only paragraphs for peoms. NEVER use say that a poetrical paragraphis a paragraph! A poetrical paragraph is a stanza. Remember that.And also, NEVER use stanza in class, instead of paragraph. You'llget an F- on your test about paragraph (JUST KIDDING!)

Example:

Black, oh so very

mysterious! Loking at it

makes me feel calm,

maybe a bit!

It is the color of

the night sky!

You must see the

night sky! OH MY!

So very dark,

so very scary!

If you black out

you were weary!

Movies, old-fashioned.

All of them were

black and white!

Though most of it were blur...

Aghhhhhhh!!!!

Light has come!

Now, black has

no more freedom....

--Blacky98 (talk) 21:20, 10 October 2008 (UTC)