Effects of climate change: Revision history

17 May 2024

• curprev 16:1116:11, 17 May 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 178,713 bytes +1‎ →‎Wildfires: typo fix
• curprev 11:5611:56, 17 May 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 178,712 bytes +110‎ →‎Wildfires: added wikilinks and paragraph break Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 11:3311:33, 17 May 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 178,602 bytes +21‎ →‎Wildfires: I think evapotranspiration fits better here than evaporation, also added a mention of soils Tag: Visual edit

12 May 2024

• curprev 08:1208:12, 12 May 2024‎ Femke talk contribs‎ 178,581 bytes −330‎ Undid revision 1223457706 by Sujasi (talk) copyvio, not a great source, specific to some Indian states Tag: Undo
• curprev 07:4507:45, 12 May 2024‎ Sujasi talk contribs‎ 178,911 bytes +330‎ →‎Social impacts on vulnerable groups: updated impact on children Tag: Reverted

8 May 2024

• curprev 10:0610:06, 8 May 2024‎ Mathglot talk contribs‎ 178,581 bytes +644‎ Replaced VE ref names using RefRenamer.

6 May 2024

• curprev 04:1604:16, 6 May 2024‎ OAbot talk contribs‎ m 177,937 bytes +35‎ Open access bot: hdl updated in citation with #oabot.

2 May 2024

• curprev 19:2719:27, 2 May 2024‎ InformationToKnowledge talk contribs‎ 177,902 bytes −830‎ Undid revision 1221915604 by RCraig09 (talk) Misleading graphic. See the talk page. Tag: Undo
• curprev 19:1619:16, 2 May 2024‎ RCraig09 talk contribs‎ 178,732 bytes +830‎ →‎Impacts on societies: adding File:2050 Production risk of commodities due to climate change.svg Climate change increases heat stress and droughts, disrupting miners and farmers.<ref name=PWC_2024/> Climate change thus enhances production risk for metals used in manufacturing, transport, and infrastructure; for minerals integral to electronics and clean-energy technologies; and for essential food crops.<ref name=PWC_2024> Tag: Reverted
• curprev 15:5415:54, 2 May 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,902 bytes +29‎ Rewording outdoor labor sentence as per discussion.
• curprev 15:4015:40, 2 May 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,873 bytes −9‎ Cutting tourism as per talk page discussion

30 April 2024

• curprev 16:1616:16, 30 April 2024‎ AnomieBOT talk contribs‎ 177,882 bytes +810‎ Rescuing orphaned refs (":192" from rev 1221551726)
• curprev 16:0516:05, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,072 bytes +165‎ Adding in "please do not edit lead without discussion first" comment. We wordsmithed all this with a lot of discussion already, further edits need to be discussed.
• curprev 16:0316:03, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 176,907 bytes +37‎ Adding back in mention of ecosystems and societies to end of first paragraph, as per prior discussion.
• curprev 15:5715:57, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 176,870 bytes +114‎ Heat stress and impacts on outdoor labor are critical and need to be mentioned in lead.
• curprev 15:5515:55, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 176,756 bytes −149‎ Article specifically calls out tourism as highly effected. Sentence edit had typos. Please review main document before making changes to lead like that.
• curprev 15:5215:52, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 176,905 bytes −1,102‎ No need to isolate ocean currents to AMOC or to separately mention marine heatwaves. Condensing wording back.
• curprev 15:5015:50, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 178,007 bytes +20‎ Ocean current changes need to be in the lead. Marine heat waves lead to stratifcation which leads to deoxygenation and changes to ocean currents, so put the effects in that order.
• curprev 15:4515:45, 30 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,987 bytes +12‎ Backing out recent edit to lead sentence. Saying "profoundly" is pure bias and judgmental, we need to use technically defined terms here.
• curprev 04:3704:37, 30 April 2024‎ RCraig09 talk contribs‎ 177,975 bytes −42‎ →‎top: Replacing awkward intro sentence . . . (also: using verb "impact" to avoid clumsily saying "The Effects ... affect") . . . . Removing phrase from near the end of the paragraph since it's a near duplicate of the very first sentence . . . Bolding first four words, moving Climate change wikilink downward

29 April 2024

• curprev 20:4320:43, 29 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 178,017 bytes +39‎ trying to find simpler wording; also I think tourism is the least of our worries here. And three sectors is sufficient in this kind of enumeration, the list could get very long if we wanted to list all possible sectors. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 20:3920:39, 29 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,978 bytes +34‎ trying to find simpler wording. Also I think the text and the wikilink are better off to be identical here; as it's not just about warming. There are other effects, too. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 20:3320:33, 29 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,944 bytes +345‎ replaced the chapter 3 ref with one that was better formatted Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 20:2920:29, 29 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,599 bytes +233‎ made a correction to the oxygen sentence. It's not the marine heatwaves primarily that cause oxygen loss, it's the increasing stratification. Added separate sentence about marine heatwaves becoming more common and intense. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 20:1920:19, 29 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,366 bytes −11‎ proposing shorter hatnote; it's the Industrial Revolution (1750) that can be regarded as the start for the current global warming, right? Tag: 2017 wikitext editor

15 April 2024

• curprev 23:2023:20, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,377 bytes −656‎ Deleting ancient reference from the lead. I don't think we need a source for that statement, as it is well backed by the article and the related articles that are linked to.
• curprev 23:1623:16, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 178,033 bytes 0‎ Moving sentence in last paragraph of lead to spot where it makes more sense.
• curprev 23:1423:14, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ m 178,033 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 23:1323:13, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 178,032 bytes +13‎ Attempt to clarify last sentence of lead.
• curprev 23:0323:03, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 178,019 bytes +185‎ Adding sea level rise sentence to human effects paragraph of lead. Island nation shout out!
• curprev 22:5222:52, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,834 bytes −36‎ Removing women from groups most at risk from climate change. Issue is not substantiated to any real level. We could mention the elderly instead, since they have less ability to regulate their temperature.
• curprev 22:4622:46, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,870 bytes −60‎ Edit pass on last paragraph of lead. Much tightening up of wording and resequencing for better flow. No changes of substance.
• curprev 22:2222:22, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,930 bytes +58‎ Undid revision 1219125831 by Efbrazil (talk) oops, didn't mean to save yet Tag: Undo
• curprev 22:2122:21, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,872 bytes −58‎ Partial edit pass on human effects paragraph of lead Tag: Reverted
• curprev 22:1722:17, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,930 bytes −20‎ Sentences should not start "so they". Combining wealthy country sentences.
• curprev 22:0722:07, 15 April 2024‎ Ehrenkater talk contribs‎ 177,950 bytes −23‎ →‎Changes in temperature: Minor copy edit
• curprev 22:0522:05, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,973 bytes +17‎ Combining heat effects in ecosystem section
• curprev 22:0222:02, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,956 bytes −20‎ Wording simplification
• curprev 22:0122:01, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,976 bytes +10‎ Wording tweak to help make it clear that the most threatened ecosystems suffer from environmental changes caused by heating, not just heat itself.
• curprev 21:5421:54, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,966 bytes +1‎ Wording tweak as desertification is not threatening the amazon, just soil moisture loss
• curprev 20:2820:28, 15 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,965 bytes −24‎ removed "to greater depths", even though it says so once in the primary source that is given at a ref. To me this sounds far too simplistic. Not many marine animals can simply move to greater depths as there is less nutrients there, less oxygen, less light, higher water pressure and so forth. Does not need to be in the lead in any case. Also they are not moving to the poles but towards them... Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 20:2420:24, 15 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,989 bytes −3‎ we had "threaten" 3 times in this para. Replaced one of them with "damaging". A threat is something that might occur, whereas these things are already happening... Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 20:2220:22, 15 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,992 bytes −7‎ changed because we had two sentences in a row starting with "surface air temperatures" (?) . Not elegant. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 19:4919:49, 15 April 2024‎ RCraig09 talk contribs‎ 177,999 bytes +66‎ unifying images at upright=1.35
• curprev 17:5917:59, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,933 bytes −61‎ Tightening up wording on species migrating to colder areas. In general, one idea = one sentence where possible.
• curprev 17:5717:57, 15 April 2024‎ Efbrazil talk contribs‎ 177,994 bytes +12‎ Adding back in sea level rise threat to coastal wetlands, but without everglades mention. Qualified loss of soil moisture as a localized phenomena (many locations will become wetter). Adding desertification impact from loss of soil moisture. Removed evapotranspiration explanation as loss of soil moisture will be largely due to changing precipitation patterns. Also, this paragraph should be focused on ecosystems, not physical impact causes (which is the previous paragraph).
• curprev 09:0209:02, 15 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,982 bytes −58‎ removed "Different physical effects threaten different ecosystems." as this sentence was flagged up in red from the readability tool. I've thought about a different way of saying this but now I think it's basically not really adding value. The examples in this section already show how different effects affect different ecosystems. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 09:0009:00, 15 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 178,040 bytes +44‎ broke long sentence in two. Included the concept of increased evapotranspiration (important). Added wikilink to soil moisture. Removed "with dieback" as I don't think there is benefit in introducing the jargon term "dieback" here. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 08:5108:51, 15 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,996 bytes +562‎ →‎Tipping points and irreversible impacts: added ref that was broken when this image was copied from the other article Tag: Visual edit

14 April 2024

• curprev 19:5619:56, 14 April 2024‎ EMsmile talk contribs‎ 177,434 bytes −104‎ took out Florida example that was neither in the main text (lead is meant to be a summary), nor in the ref that followed for the next sentence. Furthermore it was a Global North centric example (would be OK if the other two issues were not also there). Tag: Visual edit