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===[[List of WarCry band members]]===
'''Literature of Goan Catholics''' refers to the diverse literature of the [[Goan Catholics]] of [[Goa]].
I'm nominating this list because in my opinion, meets the FLC. It shows the references (are from spanish sources but well-quoted and showing the actual names and dates of retrievement. It tells "everything" related to how the members joined and departed from the band. It shows a timeline with the dates for "album releases" and when the members formed part of the group. I really think this article meets the FLC. [[User:Rockk3r|<span style="solid red;padding:1px;"><font size="-1" style="color:red;">'''''&nbsp;Rockk3r '''''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Rockk3r|<font size="-4" color="Navy">Spit it Out!</font>]] 06:09, 9 October 2008 (UTC)


'''Oppose'''
==History==
* "from Avalanch." – "from another band, Avalanch."
{{See also|Konkani language | Goan literature}}
* "with the songs they had composed in their spare time. " – "with songs they composed in their spare time. "
[[Image:A Description in Konkani.jpg|thumb|150px|A Description in Konkani by Matthew Almeda]]
* "Avalanch disapproved of the project, and expelled them from the band. " – up until this point I thought they were already expelled. It's gotta be made clearer that the events before this sentence took place before their expulsion.
The first book in Konkani and any Indian language was ''Dovtrina Christam em Lingoa Bramana Canarim'' (Christian Doctrines in the Canarese Brahmin Language), published by the English Jesuit [[Thomas Stephens (missionary)|Thomas Stephens]] in 1622 in Goa.<ref>{{cite web
* "as soon as they were joining the band." – "as soon as they formed the band."
|url=http://theory.tifr.res.in/bombay/history/ethnic/konkani.html
* "Their second work was" – "Their second album was"
|title=The Konkanis
* "at the end of 2002" – "in late 2002"
|accessdate=2008-09-07
* "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." – "The band embarked on a year-long supporting tour throughout Spain."
|publisher=Department of Theoretical Physics ([[Tata Institute of Fundamental Research]])}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.v-ixtt.com/archive/13-10-2007/Rongit.html|title=Vavraddeancho Ixxt|accessdate=2008-09-07}}</ref>


The article still needs a copyedit. I stopped at "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." <font face="Verdana">[[User:Gary King|<font color="#02e">Gary</font>&nbsp;<font color="#02b"><b>King</b></font>]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Gary King|<font color="#02e">talk</font>]])</font> 20:55, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
The origin of literature dates back to 1563 when the first Konkani grammar was published in by a Fr.Andre Vaz, Goan priest at St. Paulo College at [[Old Goa]].<ref>{{cite web
|url= http://www.goakonkaniakademi.org/konkaniweb/language-literature.htm
|title=Konkani Language and Literature
|publisher=Goa Konkani Akademi
|accessdate= 2008-09-14}}</ref>In 1989, Fr.Matthew S.J., published a linguistic grammar book named ''A Description in Konkani'',<ref name="ko">{{harvnb|A Description in Konkani|1989|p=[http://books.google.com/books?q=A++Description+in+Konkani&btnG=Search+Books]|Ref=ko}}</ref> explaining the phonology, morphology and syntax of the Konkani language of Goa and its surrounding districts. Popular forms of their literature include, the ''TSKK Konkani Basic Course'' by Matthew Almeida, S.J. (1991), is a course book for beginners to learn Konkani. Fr.Moreno de Souza published a book, ''Tisvaddecheo Igorzo'',(1994) that gives a panoramic view of the churches of [[Tiswadi]] or Ilhas. The TSKK Linguistic Glossary: ''English-Konkani and Konkani-English dictionary'' by Matthew Almeida, S.J. and Pratap Naik, S.J.,(1994) are some examples of their literature. The ''Sonvsarak Jezu Diat'' by Vasco do Rego, S.J.(1995), contains sermons preached by [[St.Francis Xavier]] at [[Basilica of Bom Jesus]]. Other forms of their literature include Lambert Mascarenhas' ''Sorrowing Lies My Land'' and Fernando de Noronha's ''Nostalgic Memories of the Past''.<ref name="sar254">{{harvnb|Saradesāya|2000|p=254|Ref=sar}}</ref>


'''Done'': I already fixed all the mistakes you found.[[User:Rockk3r|<span style="solid red;padding:1px;"><font size="-1" style="color:red;">'''''&nbsp;Rockk3r '''''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Rockk3r|<font size="-4" color="Navy">Spit it Out!</font>]] 02:40, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
==Notes==
{{reflist|2}}

==References==
<div class="references-small">
*{{cite book
|last=Vaz
|first=Dr.J.Clement
|publisher=Fredrick Noronha
|year=2007
|url=http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Forum/1503/eminent-goans.html
|title=Goans All Over the World are Doing Great Things
|accessdate=2008-08-24
|ref=ma}}
</div>

==External links==

[[Category:Goa]]

Revision as of 03:00, 10 October 2008

List of WarCry band members

I'm nominating this list because in my opinion, meets the FLC. It shows the references (are from spanish sources but well-quoted and showing the actual names and dates of retrievement. It tells "everything" related to how the members joined and departed from the band. It shows a timeline with the dates for "album releases" and when the members formed part of the group. I really think this article meets the FLC.  Rockk3r Spit it Out! 06:09, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  • "from Avalanch." – "from another band, Avalanch."
  • "with the songs they had composed in their spare time. " – "with songs they composed in their spare time. "
  • "Avalanch disapproved of the project, and expelled them from the band. " – up until this point I thought they were already expelled. It's gotta be made clearer that the events before this sentence took place before their expulsion.
  • "as soon as they were joining the band." – "as soon as they formed the band."
  • "Their second work was" – "Their second album was"
  • "at the end of 2002" – "in late 2002"
  • "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." – "The band embarked on a year-long supporting tour throughout Spain."

The article still needs a copyedit. I stopped at "The band embarked on a supporting tour throughout Spain, which lasted a year." Gary King (talk) 20:55, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

'Done: I already fixed all the mistakes you found. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 02:40, 10 October 2008 (UTC)