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== How is the extent of a group's entry into the "mainstream" to be measured? ==
==External links==
===American Academy of Ophthalmology===


How is the extent of a group's entry into the "mainstream" to be measured? John, you have sought to balance the fact that cult groups are concerned about the JA against what is only really an unsubstantiated claim that you have entered the charismatic mainstream. Even if others have claimed as much, how is acceptance into the mainstream measured? Allusion has been made to membership of the Evangelical Alliance, but my understanding is that membership of the alliance does not imply acceptability, but merely that members ascribe to basic tenets of faith accepted by evangelical Christians. My understanding is that the EA make clear that they do not police people's belief systems or practices, but just act as an umbrella group for members; that if it ever implied respectability for members in the past, that certainly is not its role now. Should membership, in itself, be used as a measure, then? And what proportion of evangelicals are charismatic or regard charismaticism with the mainstream; and more widely, what proportion of Christians in the UK generally would regard evangelicalism as a measure of respectability?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 19:39, 22 September 2008 (UTC)


John, if you want to set your mainstreamness against your being thought of as a cult by some, how are we to measure the extent to which you are in the mainstream at all? And beyond the limits of christendom, couldn't it be argued that your being thought a cult is a secular opinion (except in the case of Reachout) which must be set against the views of other non-Christians? How will their approval be measured?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 19:39, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
:I cited a [[WP:RS]] and quoted what the author had to say. See the footnote: 'Hunt in Pneuma, p. 24: "marked by ... the entry of the Jesus Fellowship into the charismatic mainstream"'. That is what Wikipedia is about after all, not my or your [[WP:OR]] [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:30, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
::Who is Hunt, what measures did he use for determining whether or not you are mainstream; what authority does he have, and did he interview elders of the church and take it from you that you are mainstream? I mean, take an example we both know: Stanley Jebb's article had lots of phrases which he presumably thought were his own, but which were actually in Jesus Fellowship vernacular already, like the thing about churches not wanting to be judged by the attitudes of its ex-members, etc. It was undoubtedly a sincere article, but it could have been written by a fellowship member.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:16, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
:::I think my answer above deals with the key point and says all that needed to be said. The article by [[Stephen J. Hunt]] has already been accepted as a [[WP:RS | Reliable Source]]. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:40, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
:::: Hunt was accepted as a reliable source for another point being made. He was not accepted as an authority on whether you are a mainstream church or not. Did Hunt's book/article cite references to back his claim that you were part of the mainstream, or was he just expressing his personal opinion? (I see you couldn't resist reminding me what a reliable source is. Pity)[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 18:11, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
::::: I also linked to [[Stephen J. Hunt]]'s article on Wikipedia in response to your request. You are not the only person reading these Talk pages now or in the future, and the links exist for the sake of us all. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:55, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::Thanks, it was very useful. I have written to him asking if I could possibly have a copy of his article and asking if he wouldn't mind telling us what objective basis he had for determining the extent of your mainstreamness. I have also been talking to Ian Haworth who is having a think about how best to reference the CIC's listing of the JA as a cult. He suggested that a different way to approach the matter might be for a group which now speaks of having left its cultic image far behind to explain to the wider world the reforms it felt it necessary to make in order to find greater acceptance. I suppose it demonstrates a group's willingness to be open if it is willing to admit its past mistakes. That is something that was touched upon in the article when you said that you no longer practice corporal punishment, for instance. Would the JA be willing to detail its reforms in order to demonstrate its greater openness and put to rest any suggestion that it is a cult? [[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 16:14, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::::I don't think we can here within the contraints of Wikipedia, nor indeed can you do a great deal with whatever Stephen Hunt sends to you, for reasons which you would rather I didn't spell out. We have to rely on what others have already published. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 16:33, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::That sounds a bit ominous. Why wouldn't I want it spelt out? If you mean that Hunt's impressions of you were favourable, is that a problem? My impressions of you have been favourable too in the past, the JA is a radical people and bound to impress people. As Hunt is your source, though, why do we need to seek another one? If his comments to me favour you and support your claim to mainstreamness, I will accept him as a source, as long as it is clear that he has some objective way of measuring your respectability within the church, which as an academic interested in pentecostalism, I presume he does?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 16:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::::::I'd have thought that in the context of the article, where you say that since your earlier history of being regarded as a cult you have reformed, you could very easily show the extent of the change to being a respected church, by briefly detailing the reforms. I can't see what wiki constraints would stand in your way of being open as a church; and I am confident that whatever openness there has been to others has been accompanied by an article in the Christian press about how your respectability has come about?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:02, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::::I keep coming back in my mind to you saying that we need another source other than the one you suggested, Stephen Hunt; that nothing he sends me is likely to be useful. He was YOUR reference. but the trouble is that his article is not publically available. Unless he sends me a copy, there is no way of verifying it. Why, when he has been your source for so long, do you now seem to feel he is no longer sufficient for the purpose? What is he going to send me?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:23, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::::What I was trying to avoid saying, for your sake, is that what you are attempting to engage in is [[WP:OR]]. We are limited to working with [[WP:RS]], such as already-published scholarly articles and books. Hunt's article is fine; the article that I said wouldn't make the point you wanted was the BBC one, due to its date being before the Jesus Army rejoined the EA. I was as even-handed as I know how with the sources, and the text we agreed previously was virtually at the limits of what has already be published in that area. I can't write just what I want to say in this article any more than you can. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 17:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
OK, I see what you are saying, John, but I am not looking to express my views as original research on this. I have asked Stephen Hunt to give me a copy of the article you cited because it is not otherwise available and I want to read it and see what he said, so that, like you, I can use it, if relevant, to support the idea of your church now being more mainstream. According to his Wiki article he is an authority on pentecostalism, so presumably knows the best measures of what makes a church part of the mainstream of charismaticism in this country. The irony is that while whatever he has written is doubtless Original Research, it is allowed. If the article you cited does not serve the purpose, I have asked if he can suggest anything else he has had published which might serve the purpose. Hard to see how you could object to that. [[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 18:17, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
:That sounds perfectly sound. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:41, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
::Good, then I think we can work together on this. I will let you know what Stephen Hunt says/sends.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:24, 26 September 2008 (UTC)


== Please could you stop preaching at me ==
I removed the following, since it doesn't even mention Bates method by name. I read through it, hoping it might be used as a ref, but I don't see how. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 16:54, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
*[http://one.aao.org/CE/PracticeGuidelines/Therapy_Content.aspx?cid=d7238b2b-a59f-49f6-9f30-64d1e84efc3b ] American Academy of Ophthalmology : Complementary Therapy Assessments: Visual Training for Refractive Errors 2008
:Ronz, Not true. Bates is mentioned in the reference section. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:54, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
:Slightly to my surprise, I find myself in complete agreement with Ronz about that. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 17:06, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
:: Absurd removal. Read the references. You will find W.H. Bates. This article is about the Bates method and / or Natural vision improvement. If there is a number one reliable link and source in this article. This is the source and this the link. Read also the paragraph unique in the paragraph opthalmological research in the archive. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 17:28, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
::: I re-added the link. You both do not understand and know there is article [[bates method]] and there is a article [[natural vision improvement]]. If we editors say these subjects are different we have to change the article natural vision improvement.
:::See the link :
::: * http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Natural_vision_improvement&redirect=no
::: Maybe it is a good idea to separate Natural vision improvement from the Bates method article. : - ). It is true Natural vision improvement and Bates method are not the same. See the available definitions of Thomas Quackenbush and Janet Goodrich. ![[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 15:33, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
::::Instead of ignoring all other editors perspectives on the issue, in violation of [[WP:CON]], please respect your fellow editors and follow [[WP:DR]]. Thanks! --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 16:19, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
:::: I do not understand can you explain ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 16:37, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
My initial inclination was to agree with Ronz and SamuelTheGhost here, but after some reflection I now tend to think Seeyou is correct on this. [[Natural Vision Improvement]] ''does'' redirect to [[Bates method]], and the third section is [[Bates method#Modern variants|Modern variants]], so this article is not only about the Bates method ''per se''. Now, there is some merit to the idea of making [[Natural Vision Improvement]] into a separate article, but quite a bit of overlap would inevitably occur, and [[content forking]] would be an issue.<br>
In light of that, the AAO report ''does'' seem to me to meet the [[Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Further_reading.2FExternal_links_sections|Further reading section guidelines]] of "covering the topic beyond the scope of the article" and "having significant usefulness beyond verification of the article". So at this point my vote is to re-add it to Further Reading. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:03, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
:I'll explain my view. The AAO report is about "visual training". There's no coherence in the various techniques covered, and no indication that the training was carried out by people who believed in it or wanted it to work. Since an admitted key element in the Bates approach is the psychological one, the attitude of the teacher can be crucial. What was covered was a hotch-potch of methods, some of which might be benefical, some neutral, some harmful (by increasing "stress" in the Bates sense). Where statistically significant positive results were obtained the article uses weasel words to discount them. The "objective" criterion of whether you can see clearly is whether you can see clearly, not how it shows up on optometrists' instruments. The final conclusion, "There is level I evidence that visual training for control of accommodation has no effect on myopia" is just a lie, since the failure to find a significant effect is by no means a proof that no effect exists. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 21:18, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
::You are right, Sammy, the failure to find a statistical difference is not "proof". It is, however, ''"evidence"'' (or ''"support"'') for the lack of an effect, which is what the quote from the AAO report says! Let me reiterate: "There is level I ''evidence'' that visual training for control of accommodation has no effect on myopia" (my emphasis). Once again, science's major strength (its conservatism) is used against it! [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 14:03, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
:::For further Arguments. See the cabalcase below :
:::* http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Mediation_Cabal/Cases/2008-08-03_Bates_method
:::[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:57, 14 August 2008 (UTC)


John, I wonder if you could possibly talk to me without quoting wikipedia rules at me. It strikes me as deliberately provocative. And quite honestly it is also rather rude and unnecessary. If I get lost, I will ask the way or read up on the rules myself. But the way you do it is not designed to help me, but rather to win arguments...and to do so by bringing your dad with you. That is not the way to win with me. I respond to civility. For someone who would doubtless rather I just went away, and who knows I would dearly like to, your tactics strike me as counter-productive. If you needle me, which I am quite certain quoting wiki is all about, I am bound to stick around; it is in my bloody-minded nature. Others may read civility in your words, but your tone is frankly insolent. You will say that I am no better, of course. But at least I do not preach at you with every posting. And you are not in an insecure position because the consensus here is made up of pro-JA people.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:30, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
The AAO article is clearly about the Bates method and its descendants. I think that justifies some mention of it. [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] ([[User talk:Phil Sandifer|talk]]) 20:31, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
::::::If you wish I would go away, stop giving me so much reason to stay. I don't go away when I am bullied, I become more determined to stand my ground.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:30, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
I'm sorry if that's how you see it. You asked a perfectly reasonable question above and I gave a perfectly reasonable answer. John <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/89.193.195.197|89.193.195.197]] ([[User talk:89.193.195.197|talk]]) 18:12, 23 September 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
::Are you willing to give me perfectly reasonable answers that don't include links to guidelines which both of us are perfectly well aware of? Now that you are aware that it strikes me as provocative, can I assume you will do your best to avoid it?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 20:48, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
:::The problem is that the answer I gave above hinged on the need to utilise Reliable Sources and avoid Original Research. Personally, I find your approach both rude and bullying. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:44, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
::::Perceptions are a funny thing. How can I bully you, John, when I am clearly in the minority here and when I know that no edit I make to the article will be allowed to stand? I don't think I do badly when it comes to being pleasant to everyone here, considering that whatever the claims to fairness, you not only over-rule every suggestion I make but also change things I write in the discussion and accuse me of vandalism or tendentious editing when I just happen to disagree with you.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:48, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
::::And not to mention manipulative. Aren't we are all here to see this article improved to the best it can be? We can only do that within the rules of wiki so what does it matter if someone is quoting them, after all 'assuming good faith' seems to be quoted often enough. Lets keep focused on the balance of things in line with the rules.[[User:Manicpixie|Manicpixie]] ([[User talk:Manicpixie|talk]]) 10:09, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::How do I manipulate you, Manic? What possible influence do I have when I am a minority here, beyond the fact that I know rather more about the JA than some of you would wish? What you have to decide between you is whether you really want to deal with me as amicably as possible or whether you want me to feel provoked. I am pointing out that repeatedly quoting the same rules as if you think of me as a law-breaker who must be repeatedly rebuked, is just plain rude and unlikely to make the discussion a smooth one. I have more than proved that I can work with others to improve the article, as when we negotiated the now largely stable article (you may find it useful to read the archived negotiations before you judge me too easily, ManicPixie). It was only when largely pro-JA editors started undoing the work or suggesting/making edits which unbalanced the article in the JA's favour that I felt the need to consider edits which would redress the balance (or at least anticipate some edits which might later be used if the article becomes too pro-JA). I am not going away, so you decide whether you want war or a respectful exchange.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:48, 24 September 2008 (UTC)


If we are going to have a respectful exchange you will stop accusing me of being a bully, manipulative, of tendentious editing, vandalism, mischief etc. I am just as committed as anyone else here to making the article fair. I have never added anything to it without raising it here first, though I would be within my rights to do so. Nothing will be gained by painting me as a bad guy who wants to break the rules. I do not always agree with them, but I have always been constrained by them and I am quite sure I would have been censured by admin if that had not been the case. You are right that I have repeatedly referred to the need to assume good faith, but the simple fact is that your accusations, all of which are quite unfounded, seem designed to either blacken my image on here or to bully me into not coming back here. Above all, they are not about treating me with the respect wikipedia says is due to us all. What you will find, however, is that I have used plain English when asking for respect, rather than providing links; the latter always strikes me as rude because I know you already know the rules and don't need me to tell you where they are.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 18:02, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
: I think I went through the same though process as PSWG1920. Since this article is where the [[Natural Vision Improvement]] redirect resolves, this external link seems appropriate. This article should discuss the general concept of Natural vision improvement with the first mention of it in '''bold'''. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 21:12, 14 August 2008 (UTC)


== Jesus Centre (Creative Workshop Drama) ==
SeeYou asked me on my Talk page for my comments. I haven't been following the editing debate or editing history in any detail and may be missing subtleties. These comments apply to the two paragraphs following the "Ophthalmology research" section in [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&oldid=231838995#Ophthalmological_research this version] of the article.


Creative workshop (Drama) is one of the groups running at the Northampton Jesus Centre.
I like what's there in its present form.
Since going I have found confidance and developed many friends.
It's also helped with my speech as I have tended not to be clear in talking.
Drama is not the only group running there is prayer support in the healing rays group, friend ship in the scrabble group expressive art does not matter if your not too good at drawing and so many more groups.
Northampton is just one of many Jesus Centres helping people.
There are centres such as these in London and Coventry.


X <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/91.85.196.90|91.85.196.90]] ([[User talk:91.85.196.90|talk]]) 20:01, 26 September 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
This material seems to be to be totally appropriate for inclusion. It is a recent report from an impeccable mainstream medical source. Their research methods and judgement may be open to criticism, but it follows the basic verifiability rule: I have no doubt that AAO is a reliable source in the Wikipedian sense and I have no doubt that it really said the things it has said. The external link is appropriate because it's the source for the material. The second paragraph ("The AAO report states that... However, they also conclude...") presents their conclusions in their own words, and allows the reader to note that the AAO is expressing a nuanced and qualified conclusion.


== range of views - citation needed ==
I don't really have an opinion on what distinctions need to be made between various versions of the Bates and similar systems. I ''think'' it's appropriate for a general-purpose encyclopedia to treat e.g. all versions of [[Chiropractic]] in a single article, and deal with the various systems by side comments or sections within the context of the article. Similarly I think it's reasonable to treat all of the Bates-like systems together. If advocates of particular methods feel that it's very important to add qualifiers to fine-tune the material... e.g. to say more about what ''specific systems'' the studies cited by the AAO did or did not actually review... I'd regard it as clutter, but ''acceptable'' clutter. Incidentally, I think it's reasonable to use the "ref" mechanism to add footnotes as well as references, and advocate using them as a compromise when editors agree that something ''bears'' on neutrality but disagree on how ''important'' it is.


Which part of the edit that you wrote, John, do you feel is unsourced? Are you referring to the inclusion of the JA in the list of NRMs and cults which are of concern to the Cult Information Centre? If so, why cannot the online list itself be provided as a primary source? It seems perverse to look for a secondary source which confirms the existence of a primary source, when we have the primary source readily available. Providing the source does not give it intrinsic worth. You are saying that there is a range of views; it is a subjective matter whether one agrees with one or the other. We are not saying that CIC's list is a good one, only that it exists and represents one POV.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 18:41, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
In other words, if someone wants to add a "Note: AAO article does not mention Bates method by name" ''in the footnote'' ... maybe following the reference itself... that would be OK with me. If someone wanted go through the AAO article and add a ''list,'' i.e. "This article reviews studies of the X system, Y system, Z system, etc." that actually would be a useful addition IMHO.


I have heard back from Stephen Hunt who is looking out a copy of his Pneuma article and we have corresponded a bit about your mainstreamness. I am more in the picture now, but until the article comes, I will not feel on an equal footing with you - to fairly assess its content...unless you are willing or able to provide a PDF link to the entire article, so that we can all see it? It is unfortunate that the citation you provide is not readily available[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 18:41, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
In general, we need to be sure that the reader can judge what the AAO article is ''about.'' In its present form I think it's ''perfectly clear'' to a reader that


: Use of secondary sources is a key part of Wikipedia. The stance of Wikipedia, which springs from academe, is that reputation counts. A researcher with a history of published articles on a subject is more likely to be careful with their statements than will someone with no reputation to lose, as well as having a greater background knowledge of the subject and an understanding of the proper techniques of research. The worth of the article stems from the reputation of the author. Like any other academic article, the Hunt article is available in academic libraries, or from the publisher. However, here is a link to a transcript of [http://www.jesus.org.uk/vault/articles_pneuma.shtml Hunt's article]. Personally, I'm inclined to take out that sentence in its entirety. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:30, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
1) the AAO article is about visual training for myopia in general, not specifically about the Bates method as presented in 1920;
::Thanks, will look at the transcripts. I understand the need for the Pneuma citation, of course, but I can't see why we need a secondary source to confirm the existence of a primary source for the CIC list. It seems perverse. The implication seems to be that without someone academic saying that the primary source exists, you can say that it doesn't. I do not think that you are saying that the CIC list does not exist, are you, and that being the case, surely it is not in dispute? Naturally, you would rather it didn't exist, but that isn't the same thing, is it?[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:28, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
:::I can't keep saying the same thing over and over again. Wikipedia is based on secondary sources as they a viewed as reliable indicators of notability and balance. For example, without a secondary assessment of CIC's view you cannot tell if others consider it an extreme minority viewpoint. In other fields, primary sources have primacy, but Wikipedia has decided that as its editors are of unknown qualification we must depend on the assessment of others via secondary sources. It's not an issue of what ''I'' am saying, but of Wikipedia's basis. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:16, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
::::That strikes me as a very convenient way of suppressing the existence of evidence which shows you in a bad light. By analogy, if the Law worked that way, the existence of a dead body with a knife in its back could be suppressed if there was no academic paper which claimed that a body with a knife in its back had been found. It is an absurd application of the Wiki rule, which is about the credibility of a source. We are not saying that the CIC is a credible or even a balanced or impartial group. We are only saying that it exists and that it lists the JA as a group about which it is concerned. It seems weasly to try to suggest otherwise, or indeed to suggest that wikipedia rules make it impossible to say it.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:45, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
:::::And while you and I am others here are of unknown qualification, the existence of the list can be proved unequivocally by simply linking to it.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 17:48, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
::::::Existence of that list doesn't make it academically acceptable according to the ethos of what wiki is about, it is wiki that says we need a secondary source for it to be acceptable not anyone that is showing an interest in this article. What I don't get Peter is that just today I've seen you going on about 'keeping to the rules' elsewhere so what is the problem about keeping the rules here? If that list was to be allowed without a secondary source how much more could be allowed that you'd object to?[[User:Manicpixie|Manicpixie]] ([[User talk:Manicpixie|talk]]) 19:44, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
:::::::Rather too convenient, it just seems to me. Ah well, I am close to giving up with this particular citation. I can always link to the archive here on my blog and let others decide about your position. I think they may well feel as I do that wiki rules are less what you are concerned about than the reputation of the JA and a desire to exclude any reference in the article to the fact that anti-cult groups regard yours as one. After all, if we let the edits stand and used the link to the primary source stand as the citation, I wonder how many mods would come and tell us to get rid of it. [[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 21:40, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::You misunderstand me if you think of me as someone who believes in obeying rules religiously, manicpixie. I have never been a sheepish type. I believe that rules need to make sense, or else they should be challenged and, if you are willing to accept the consequences, even disobeyed or ignored. It would be impolitic for me to ignore wiki rules, because I wish to continue to have a voice here, but I do think that if you are right that they can be used to suppress evidence which can plainly be seen by anyone who knows where to look, they are as idiotic as the emperor's new clothes. In this particular case, the emperor is quite plainly naked as the day he was born, but if you and John are right in your interpretation of wiki rules, they will allow you to pretend that he is beautifully clothed. Ah well, there is more than one way to skin a cat.[[User:Bristol Sycamore|Bristol Sycamore]] ([[User talk:Bristol Sycamore|talk]]) 22:15, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
::::::::::The use of secondary sources is fundamental to Wikipedia. In this case, the issue is one of notability and the reliability and balance of academic (secondary) sources. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:33, 10 October 2008 (UTC)


== Multiply Christian Network ==
2) Wikipedia's [[Bates method]] article is about the Bates method ''and related method.''


During the edit process we lost all reference to the Multiply Christian Network without discussion. I think it was intended to move it to elsewhere in the article but that didn't happen. There are Wikilinks from elsewhere to this article that reference Multiply, so we ought to mention it somehow.
3) the Bates method is indeed a form of visual training and is indeed used for the purpose of improving myopia, and therefore the AAO article would be relevant ''even if'' this article that were narrowly limited to the 1920 Bates method.
William Kay states that it is notable: "The Army is noted for ... its linkage with more than 40 other independent Christian churches in the Multiply Network." (William Kay in C. Partridge (ed), Encyclopedia of New Religions, a Guide (Oxford: Lion Publishing, 2004).) Another reference to Multiply is ''idea'' (Evangelical Alliance magazine), May 1999: "... Multiply Christian Network, which links more than 30 churches in England and Wales with others abroad. Multiply was initiated in 1992 by the Jesus Fellowship Church." Since the date of those two articles the number of groups has grown to around 250[http://www.multiply.org.uk/multiply/yourarea_index.shtml].

I'm not sure I quite know what to make of the ''interleaving'' of the material on "A 1946 study." Seems to me it oughta be AAO quotation, followed by presentation of AAO conclusions, ''then'' "A 1946 study." Actually I guess I'll go change that myself now. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 13:47, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
The article used to say: "The Jesus Fellowship is also linked to other churches and groups in the UK and elsewhere through the Multiply Christian Network." which is probably the minimum that is usable. [[User:John Campbell|John Campbell]] ([[User talk:John Campbell|talk]]) 08:55, 8 October 2008 (UTC)


Good to see some new editors weighing in. I've two concerns:
#Why does this link, which has little relevance to this article, need to have the extra visibility beyond just being used as a reference?
#This article is not about [[natural vision improvement]]. We've tried to make it so as much as possible in [[Bates_method#Modern_variants]], but that section of the article is probably the most contested section of all. See other discussions on this page and a summary of the problem in [[Wikipedia:Fringe_theories/Noticeboard#Bates_method_sources]].
--[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 17:23, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

:# This is a divisive question in the wording. I wouldn't say that the link has little relevance to this article. In terms of [[WP:OTHERCRAPEXISTS]], this article uses a source entitled "Eye-Related Quackery" as both a reference and an external link. Perhaps it has extra visibility to help readers who have poor vision. ;-)
:# [[Talk:Natural_vision_improvement|Here is the discussion]] defining why the Natural vision improvement article redirected to this one. It seems that this article should discuss "natural vision improvement" within the context of the Bates Method.
:: -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 17:55, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou says I commented on the wrong issue, and wants my views specifically on also listing the AAO article under "external links."

The key point here is serving the reader. Personally, '''I am sort of an inclusionist''' when it comes to external links. They're OK bye me so long as the quantity of encyclopedic information in them is high and the amount of commercialism is low.

In the case of an article on a controversial topic, a reader may well be interested in locating material on ''either'' side of the controversy, so such an article not only may but ''should'' include links to sites that represent non-neutral points of view. The links should be reasonably balanced, and identified as to their point of view. Thus, if the AAO link were to be included, it shouldn't be just a bare link, but have a one-line summary such as "AAO article that is unsupportive of the merits of visual training for refractive errors."

If someone wants to include the AAO link, it's a good article and I don't see any reason to remove it. But since it's also in the references, I don't see that it's important to include it. I suggest here that we err on the side of inclusion: anyone who does think it's important should be humored.

Wikipedia is not a link farm, but collecting good external links is a useful service to the reader.

(With regard to pro-Bates or pro-natural-vision improvement, a difficulty here is that many of these sites actually '''are''' connected with commercial promotion of specific books, courses, materials, or practitioners... but its up to Bates supporters to find those that aren't. I'd be equally leery of an link to an article on, say, LASIK, however well written, that was on a website for a surgical practice offering LASIK). [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 21:36, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

===Central-fixation===
Since we're discussing external links, I'd like to bring up one which has been rejected in the past. Central-fixation.com [http://www.central-fixation.com/bates-medical-articles/ contains a collection of articles by Bates which were published in medical journals], most dealing directly with his method of treating eyesight. These are independent of his self-published works. To me this is highly relevant, and I don't understand the problem with linking to it. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 22:33, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
: This appears to be a wonderful resource. It contains meaningful, relevant content that may not suitable for inclusion in this article. I don't see any commercial interests or advertising. By all means, I think it would be a pity not to include a link to this website. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 23:49, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
::I suggest a quick search through the talk archives to see why it was removed, summarizing the reasoning, then providing new comments that address past concerns. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 03:20, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
::: If I recall this correctly, there was this one editor who threw around a bunch of scary policies. WP:NPOV. WP:SPAM. WP:EL. But he never told us why he thought those applied. Except with WP:EL. He claimed that WP:EL is not satisfied because the hosting site (central-fixation.com) "misleads the reader by the use of factually inaccurate material or unverifiable research". And then this other editor asked for an example from the hosting site where it offers factually inaccurate material or unverifiable research. But you know what? That first editor never did give an example. And months later, still no example. And with still no example, I think it is high time this link was restored. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 03:42, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

:::'''I don't see any need to search through the Talk archives.''' I wasn't involved in the earlier discussions, but I have ''very'' strong feelings about this.
:::It is '''patently obvious''' that links to a collection of articles by W. H. Bates is relevant to an article on the Bates method. This is a large collection of articles. I don't know how easy it would be to find them via JSTOR or Medline or what have you; they might actually be hard to find or they might be fairly easy to find, but having them collected in one place is valuable.
:::This is a legitimate collection of source material. If the website has any commercial connection at all, it's not obvious. In any case, the ratio of encyclopedic material to promotion is very high.
:::As for the criticism of "factually inaccurate material or unverifiable research," [[WP:V]] is about "verifiability, not truth." The only reason to object would be if the articles were fabricated, altered, distorted, etc. and since the website gives their sources it's easy to verify whether they are or or not.
:::That is: only two questions need to be asked. a) Are W. H. Bates' published writings relevant to an article on the Bates method? b) Does the website accurately present this material--that is, is an article that claims to be "Reprinted from the New York Medical Journal for September 3, 1921" in fact an accurate copy of an article printed in the New York Medical Journal for September 3, 1921.
:::Note, too, that the fact that these articles were published in a medical journal is irrelevant. That fact may be relevant in judging the validity of Bates' writings, or the position of Bates within the medical mainstream during his life... but it has nothing to do with whether it's a useful external link.
:::Just to make myself perfectly clear, I'm a Bates skeptic. This has nothing whatsoever to do with the validity of the Bates method. Notice that someone seeking to build a case against the validity of the Bates method might find this collection just as interesting and useful as a supporter. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 20:25, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

:::Performing due diligence on verifying the material at the central-fixation site, I note that Google Books does turn up an image of a book by Health Research Books, 1993, which presents itself as a collection of reprints of articles by W. H. Bates. In particular, Google Books shows me [http://books.google.com/books?id=N4ZB77Yu61YC&pg=PT56&dq=%22New+York+Medical+Journal%22+%22w.+h.+bates%22+vision+eye&ei=RzmnSO3UHZegiwHKubn7BA&sig=ACfU3U2lLPpR2gASqm6ona4toTp5lj8XwA this page image] which certainly has the look of a copy of page image from an old journal, and which corresponds to the text at http://www.central-fixation.com/bates-medical-articles/shifting-aid-vision.php . Not that anyone has challenged the accuracy of the text posted at central-fixation... I'm just saying I tried making one quick spot-check and things jibed. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 20:38, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
===Imagination Blindness===
How about [http://www.iblindness.org/articles/ this one]? A reference to the site was just removed from the article per below discussions, however, I think this is useful enough to be in the external links. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 16:25, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
:See [[WP:LINKSTOAVOID]], especially #2, #11, #13. We need information specifically about Bates method. Anything else is a distraction at best. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 18:58, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

==List of poor sources==
* http://www.iblindness.org/articles/kiesling-rebuttal.html
* http://www.visionsofjoy.org - 3 links
* http://visionimprovementcenter.com/disclaimer.htm
* http://archive.mailtribune.com/archive/99/sept99/92099n2.htm
* http://www.visioneducators.org/reducedlenses.htm
--[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 15:21, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
:See my last comment directly above. And as for the disclaimers (currently referenced [[Bates method#Avoidance of conventional treatment|here]]), I think that is a significant aspect which would be difficult to touch on directly without using such sources. These disclaimers ''could'' be seen as Bates method teachers' own words condemning themselves. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 15:44, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
I do nonetheless see your basic point. It would be difficult to justify referencing a random personal website for its author's opinion on an aspect of the Bates method. Now, to me, for practical purposes, the sites in question are more than just random personal websites, but I'm fairly certain you would argue (with apologies if I have assumed too much) that what I call "practical purposes", are irrelevant. I looked through [[WP:FRINGE]], since that's the most directly applicable guideline for this type of article, and I couldn't find anything addressing this type of situation, though [[WP:PARITY]] comes somewhat close. Perhaps we should try the Fringe theory noticeboard again, ask for help with this specific issue, and point out that the Fringe guideline could better address the question of what ''individual'' fringe sources are acceptable to cite. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 01:37, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
:I think that's a good idea. This issue is very specific, so it should be fairly approachable for someone new to the article. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 16:22, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
::I think the final comment in the article, about Bates practitioners issuing disclaimers, is unnecessary and could be removed. Presumably Bates teachers ''should'' do this ''by law'' and showing that they do (do something that they ''should'' do) serves only to show them in a positive light. Removing this rather pointless sentence has the added benefit of removing ''two'' contentious sources. (However, I'm not doing it 'cause I'll get shouted at!) [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:38, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
:::First of all, just because it may in a sense show Bates teachers in a positive light does not mean it should be removed, and your assessment that it shows them in ''only'' a positive light is questionable. Secondly, I don't see how these disclaimers are "contentious". At any rate, this is a very relevant point. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:02, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

I have [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=232412401&oldid=232264842 removed] the iblindness reference and one of the references to visionsofjoy, replacing them with a similar discussion derived from Elwin Marg. Now, I would be okay with deleting the other "poor sources" if we could find independent sources for the points they are used to reference. Absent that, I think they should be permitted to stay per above discussions. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 16:09, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
:Thanks. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 19:00, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

I should add that I would have no problem with the removal of the Mail Tribune reference. I added it because I thought it was an independent source which would help the subsection, [[Bates_method#.22Natural_Vision_Improvement.22|"Natural Vision Improvement"]], but at this point I would not defend the subsection if it were deleted. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 17:51, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
:I have removed the Mail Tribune reference, so we are now down to four: 2 to visionsofjoy.org, 1 to visionimprovementcenter.com, and 1 to visioneducators.org . All of which I believe are legitimate uses of fringe sources, but would have no problem with the removal of if independent sources were found for the points they are used to reference. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 18:18, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

How is [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=236267199&oldid=236266863 this] original research, and what does it matter if the source is "reliable" when it's only being cited for an ''opinion''? [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:05, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:I saw no evidence that the opinion was worthy of being cited. I've repeatedly asked for such evidence. At this point, I think it best to prune out these poor sources. We're writing an encyclopedia article, after all.
:The source, even if we did accept it, does not verify all the information that was in the article.--[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 21:04, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

==Change title from Bates Method into Bates method / Natural Vision improvement==

Since the article Natural vision improvement directs directly to the Bates method article, I think the current title of the article is not right. The Bates method is not equal to Natural Vision improvement and Natural Vision improvement is not equal to the Bates method.
Janet Goodrich provided a defintion of Natural vision improvement, which unfortunatly is removed. And T. Quackenbush provided one for the Bates method currently present. For how long ?
Based on these facts a title merge is an improvement. Correct me if I am wrong. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 16:32, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

:I see no reason for it, especially given the article as it exists.. Please list some independent, reliable sources on the subject of "natural vision improvement." --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 19:11, 18 August 2008 (UTC)
::Ronz, Every source is reliable unless unreliability is proved by a reliable source. Assume good faith ! [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:57, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
:::Nope. See [[WP:RS]]. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 00:06, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
::::I studied [[WP:RS]] I do not understand. When is a source independent and reliable and when is a source not independent and reliable ? The [[WP:RS]] reference does not make this clear. In contrary it says : Reliable sources are credible published materials with a reliable publication process; their authors are generally regarded as trustworthy or authoritative in relation to the subject at hand. So whether or not a source is reliable depends on us. In my opinion the Janet Goodrich publications are reliable. If I am wrong please correct me. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:54, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
:::::Here's my current understanding. Reliable sources are generally considered to be "third-party" publications. "Third-party" meaning (it took me a while to realize this) that the author and the publisher are not one and the same, and both are independent of the subject. Janet Goodrich fails the latter portion of that test, since she obviously is not independent of "Natural Vision Improvement". While sources promoting the Bates method can be cited in the Bates method article, it needs to be based around independent, third-party sources. Currently the "Natural Vision Improvement" subsection is very shaky in that regard. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 17:01, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

:I think it's better to leave the title as it is (Shorter, easier to type.) But if it's changed, the word "vision" should not be capitalized, and probably not the word "Natural" either. <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> [[User:Coppertwig|Coppertwig]] ([[User talk:Coppertwig|talk]]) 12:44, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
:: Coppertwig welcome are you also going to really contribute to this article like ronz ? Above you only give your opinion. Can you also react on the given arguments. Like the article Natural vision improvement directly directs to the bates method article. As you can see by the given defintions ( referenced ! ). The bates method and Natural vision improvement are not completly equal. From a mathematical point of view this is not right. Is it ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:29, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

"Natural Vision Improvement" is a phrase used by one particular set of Bates Method teachers, associated with the names Quackenbush and Goodrich as Seeyou keeps reminding us. There are other Bates Method teachers, particularly outside the USA, who don't use that phrase and who trace their influence back to Bates by different routes. Although the relationship between the different schools seems to be fairly friendly, they are completely independent of each other. So to change the name as suggested would pointlessly introduce another bias (as if there aren't enough already). So I'm against it. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 18:18, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

:Sammy I suggest you read the archive for better understanding.
:But since discussion should be based on arguments and facts and not just on your personal opinion I will give you the explanation I have given earlier.
:Can you explain, when you go the one of the biggest bookstores on the net today Amazon.com and you search for bates method or Natural vision improvement, you will find a bestselling book on top of the list. So according to this bookstore also Bates method and Natural vision improvement are equal. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:46, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

::Nein, nein, nein, Seeyou. Just because a bestselling book is about the Bates Method ''and'' Natural Vision Improvement does not mean that the method and Natural Vision Improvement are one and the same. Besides, any move to the title you wish would rightly be rejected on the basis of [[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view]].
::Frankly, Seeyou, I'm getting a bit fed up with this warlike attitude you've exuded. You've been using [[WP:MEDCAB|the Mediation Cabal]] as a bunker to take potshots at your enemies for the pettiest sleights (note that practically all your MedCab cases have been closed without ruling), and you have, on this very talk page in the past, accused another editor of a posts-for-pennies deal. What I'm seeing from you, Seeyou, is a defender of [[WP:TRUTH|The Truth<sup>TM</sup>]] who will not hesitate to assume an attitude not unlike that of the Japanese during WWII, and it's going to end up getting you blocked someday. -<font color="32CD32">''[[User:Jéské Couriano|Jéské]]''</font> <font color="4682B4"><sup>([[User talk:Jéské Couriano/Discussions|v^_^v]] [[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Bodging WP edit by edit]])</sup></font> 19:56, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
:::I agree they are not equal. That why the sourced definitions are so important. The Bates method in this article should be everything bates has published. And Natural Vision improvement is : A lifestyle method of improving eyesight by wholistic means without the use of optical devices. The Bates method merged with modern theories of brain function, character and responsibility for one’s self and state of being.
:::This bookstore represents information which indicates that in the outside world the Bates method and Natural vision improvement have a strong connection. Which is true. And this article does not represent this fact when you read the header. ( Do not forget there is still an article NVI directing to the BM article. ) Arguments, Facts that is the way to discuss Jeske. Focus on improving this article. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:50, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

::::"This bookstore represents information " No it doesn't. Please stop it with the soapboxing. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 21:19, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
:::::Bookstores aren't sources (why do you think Amazon can't be used for release dates?). Now, before you ask for barbecue sauce to make your foot taste better, stop putting it in your mouth. -<font color="32CD32">''[[User:Jéské Couriano|Jéské]]''</font> <font color="4682B4"><sup>([[User talk:Jéské Couriano/Discussions|v^_^v]] [[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Bodging WP edit by edit]])</sup></font> 04:16, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
::::::This is not discussing a topic. This is avoiding the real discussion. Why can't you just simply explain why Amazon has no value. Because that is your statement. Amazon is a great source for statiscal information and can be very helpful in deciding which books on the bates method or natural vision improvement are dominant and important. If we had not a tool like amazon we could keep on discussing for ages. Don't forget this article is for the public. The public gives a very clear and strong direction. Correct me if am wrong. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:40, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
:::::::Bookstores aren't sources as they do not actively review books. You want a book review site, which Amazon ain't. -<font color="32CD32">''[[User:Jéské Couriano|Jéské]]''</font> <font color="4682B4"><sup>([[User talk:Jéské Couriano/Discussions|v^_^v]] [[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Bodging WP edit by edit]])</sup></font> 01:13, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
Jeske Amazon is not a source. Amazon is a tool to determine which Bates method advocate is the dominant one. If the skeptics really want to score points they should attack the strongest advocate not a weak one. The real subject of this discussion is the change of the title. I will make a summary with the arguments for the RFC. At this moment, I have not read any real argument against the change. Please I you are against the change provide your arguments. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:21, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
:The way you're talking, it is a source for the purposes of the name change. Show me ''irrevocable'' proof that natural vision improvement and the Method are commonly conflated (not just one book available for sale on Amazon) and you'll see no further opposition from me. -<font color="32CD32">''[[User:Jéské Couriano|Jéské]]''</font> <font color="4682B4"><sup>([[User talk:Jéské Couriano/Discussions|v^_^v]] [[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Bodging WP edit by edit]])</sup></font> 20:35, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Proffesional Engineer Doug Marsh in his book states :

::<blockquote>The reason my glasses were in my pocket that day wasn’t because I’d broken them. Rather I’d been purposely not wearing them for long periods as part of my experiment with Natural Vision Improvement, (NVI), also called the Bates Method. .<ref>{{cite book | last = Marsh | first = Doug. | title = Restoring your eyesight a taoist approach | publisher = Healing arts Press | date = 2007 | pages = page 2 | isbn = 1-59477-150-2 }}</ref></blockquote> [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:12, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

=== Definitions ===
Current Definition of the Bates method :

Natural vision teacher Thomas R. Quackenbush defines the Bates method thus: <blockquote>An educational program created by ophthalmologist William H. Bates, M.D., in which natural, correct vision habits&mdash;based on relaxation of the mind and body&mdash;are taught; optional self-healing activities and games are often included to accelerate integration and self-healing; commonly misunderstood as only "eye exercises"&mdash;even by many "Bates Method" teachers.<ref>{{cite book | last = Quackenbush | first = Thomas R. | title = Better Eyesight: The Complete Magazines of William H. Bates | publisher = North Atlantic Books | date = 2000 | pages = page 643 | isbn = 1-55643-351-4 |url=http://books.google.com/books?id=ufOSikwYsrwC&pg=PA643&lpg=PA643&dq=&source=web&ots=6h_kRZAKCc&sig=b9N5xGyUbpoSFzQtla6B4EaVWKI}}</ref></blockquote>

Currrent Defintion of Natural Vision improvement :

According to Janet Goodrich : <blockquote> Natural Vision Improvement : A lifestyle method of improving eyesight by wholistic means without the use of optical devices. The Bates method merged with modern theories of brain function, character and responsibility for one’s self and state of being..<ref name="Goodrich">{{cite book | last = Goodrich | first = Janet. | title = Natural vision improvement | publisher = Cellestialarts | date = 1986 | page = 211 | isbn = 0-89087-471-9 |url= http://books.google.com/books?id=NRYEAAAACAAJ&dq=natural+vision+improvement }}</ref></blockquote>[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:53, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

== Elwin Marg was an optometrist ! ==


Wow Ronz you are fast.
See :
* http://brain.berkeley.edu/marg/cv.html
Facts and should be presented about the references and sources. RFC ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] So again Elwin Marg was an Optometrist !([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:25, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
:How is this relevant? --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 21:32, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
:I changed it to a standard citation. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 21:38, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

::Ronz, I am amazed you do not understand my point.
See : http://www.medicinenet.com/script/main/art.asp?articlekey=22559

An Optometrist is a health care professional who is licensed to provide primary eye care services:

An Ophthalmologist is an eye M.D., a medical doctor who is specialized in eye and vision care. Ophthalmologists are trained to provide the full spectrum of eye care, from prescribing glasses and contact lenses to complex and delicate eye surgery. They may also be involved in eye research.

I assume you undestand my explanation now, so I readded optometrist Elwin Marg. Time is now 22:27 [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:27, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
:How is this relevant? --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 21:19, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
:: When you read the information above. You read an optometrist is not the biggest authority on the subject of eyesight. He or she is less educated. I think other users will agree with me this fact is valuable and important fact. Why is not an ophthalmologist chosen to comment on the Bates method my dear friend ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 08:19, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
Since you say "I think other users will agree" I must tell you that I don't. Once more (this mustn't become a habit!) I agree with Ronz. And for the following reasons:
*There is no general policy in wikipedia of prefixing their professions to names of cited authors, and no need to in this case. We don't for example say "journalist Martin Gardner" though that would be a much more revealing qualification.
*The process of peer review of academic papers is an attempt to judge the merits of the paper on what is said, not on who said it. Some review processes are undertaken in conditions of author anonymity, in accordance with this principle. The Marg paper that the article quotes has been peer reviewed. Admittedly that doesn't guarantee that it is of high quality, but in my opinion it is. If you disagree, give your reasons.
*The CV for Marg you gave a link for is indeed interesting. It makes it quite clear that Marg is a respectable and respected scientist. Furthermore it includes that fact that he spent five years in post-doctoral research, including four years as "Research Associate in Surgery (Ophthalmology)" so your statement "He or she is less educated" looks downright silly as applied to him. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 12:08, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
:::Re: ''so your statement "He or she is less educated" looks downright silly as applied to him.'' Worse, it looks like a deliberate attempt to violated NPOV, OR, and FRINGE. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 14:38, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

What are the two proposed pieces of language here? [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] ([[User talk:Phil Sandifer|talk]]) 21:52, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
:Pardon? Could you explain please? [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 22:31, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
:: :: I do understand your question Phil. See below :

Edit Seeyou :
* http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=233410307&oldid=233400663

Edit Ronz :
* http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=233613387&oldid=233604691
[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 11:06, 24 August 2008 (UTC)


Seeyou has asked me to comment about whether to include the optometrist title. In terms of readability, I don't think it makes much difference, and it rather explains who this person is. Although an Ophthalmologist may have more stature wrt to vision problems than an Optometrist due to the medical training, when it comes to commenting on lenses and optics I would think that a researcher in the field of Optometry would have the edge. Bottom line is I don't have strong feelings either way. --[[User:Vannin|Vannin]] ([[User talk:Vannin|talk]]) 22:44, 23 August 2008 (UTC)



IMHO Marg's credentials probably '''should''' be mentioned, because they help the reader judge the reliability of the source. The reader shouldn't need to download the PDF of his paper to find out. Of course, the fact that the paper was published in the American Journal of Optometry in itself lends credibility (and creates an assumption that the author would be an optometrist).

As it reads now, "Berkeley optometry professor Elwin Marg" inline in the text, is, perhaps, putting too much stress on his credentials, as if trying to emphasize credibility. I would probably change the language to something like "optometry professor Elwin Marg," or simply say "Elwin Marg" in the main text and identify him as a "Berkeley optometry professor" in the footnote.

Better yet, if Marg is not a famous name, just say "A 1952 review article in the American Journal of Optometry pointed out..."

Seeyou is wrong in suggesting that optometrists are inferior to ophthalmologists. It's a bizarre and touchy issue and I've never quite figured it out, although there are parallels in other medical fields. I saw a podiatrist the other day, and my wife commented on there being friction between podiatrists and orthopedists. I learned to my surprise that podiatrists, like optometrists, are "doctors" who are not MDs. (My podiatrist is a "DPM," Doctor of Podiatric Medicine).

I've seen some hints... old articles in which optometrists refer to ophthalmologists as "allopaths..." that make me think there may be a parallel with osteopaths vs. medical doctors, that is the optometry and ophthalmology professions may have had separate historic origins and may represent rival factions, rather than different levels of competence.

In any case, optometrists are highly trained professionals and are "real doctors."

Furthermore, informally, my impression is that optometrists seem to focus on obtaining optimum vision in healthy eyes, while ophthalmologists are rather more like specialists in disease states, so if anything optometrists might have higher credibility with regard to questions regarding how eyes focus. I even have the impression that optometrists may tend to take a little more time on refractions and do better refractions than ophthalmogists.

In the area where I live, the norm seems to be for ophthalmologic practices to include an optometrist who does the refractions.

In any case, it doesn't matter. The reader needs to know that Marg was a professor of optometry, and can judge for himself how credible that makes him. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 00:55, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

Ah. This is over mentioning his position in the external links section. In that case, I do not think we should do so - it seems awkward to me to do so. [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] ([[User talk:Phil Sandifer|talk]]) 13:08, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
: I do not understand why awkward ? The other links have a similar reference like quackwatch or ophthalmology. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 17:19, 24 August 2008 (UTC)
:::Well, a reference to Quackwatch is a reference to the source. In this case, I think clearly noting the journal is sufficient. [[User:Phil Sandifer|Phil Sandifer]] ([[User talk:Phil Sandifer|talk]]) 21:37, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

I was also asked by Seeyou to comment. I looked at it, and, basically, the link already says that it's published on a optimetrist journal, so there is no real need to repeat the information, it would be like saying "yes, it's published on a journal of ''optimetry'', which is published by an association of ''optimetrists''. Oh, right, ''and the author is an optometrist''". Also, notice that the link was probably not included due to the credentials of the author, but due to the source it was published on, so it's more natural to give more weight to the source.

If the link only had the author's name, then it would be better to include his credentials, in order to make clear to the readers why his paper is considered important enough for inclusion, but this is not the case. The journal publication is probably enough by itself. --[[User:Enric Naval|Enric Naval]] ([[User talk:Enric Naval|talk]]) 21:38, 24 August 2008 (UTC)

:This whole argument is b*llsh*t. Optometrists are not less clever, less well-read, less scientific or less talented than ophthalmologists, just because the latter has a medical degree. It's just a different specialism. I know several optometrists who are world experts on amblyopia (and several ophthalmologists who aren't). This smacks of an attempt to discredit a perfectly creditable writer on the subject of the BM, rather than address their criticisms. Go ahead, refer to Marg an optometrist if that was his qualification. It doesn't discredit anything he said regarding the BM. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 14:39, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

:: Having an opinion is not the same as having arguments and references. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 11:17, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:::Its not an opinion. My ''argument'' (as clearly set out above) is that you are attempting to ''discredit'' Elwin Marg, by insisting that he be referred to as an optometrist - mistakingly believing that an optometrist is somehow less credible than an ophthalmologist. Otherwise, why would you care sooooooo much about his proper job title? [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 17:54, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

== contact lens-like effect of moisture on the eye ==

"As noted above, the "clear flashes" often spoken of by Bates enthusiasts have been found to be a contact lens-like effect of moisture on the eye."
This is definitely false. The referenced article suggests this as an explanation. It hasn't found it to be the explanation.[[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 08:21, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
:I've tweaked it further for accuracy. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 11:11, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
::Nice work! --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 15:07, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

== Selection bias ==

The section on [[selection bias]] in the "claimed successes" section is currently labeled as "original research." I really don't think this is a valid tag, but I can see why it has been added. There is no source mentioned that discusses selection bias ''in relation to the Bates Method specifically.'' However, selection bias is a general concern that should apply to all "evidence" put forward to support the efficacy of a therapy. Selection bias ''always'' occurs and it is something that all experimenters should take into account. It is not "original research". It occurs in ''all'' studies of ''all'' purported therapies and is a perfectly valid statement without a citation attached to it. Thoughts? [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 15:08, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
:I placed that tag, but I wasn't sure if it was original research or not; the tag has a question mark. But I am fine with letting that paragraph stay in the article. And the tag can be removed if no one objects. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 15:39, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
::I too think the paragraph is uncontroversial, and doesn't need the "original research" tag. And btw., good job with the edits everyone - especially you PSWG1920. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 21:10, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
:::It would be best if we had a source which made the point about selection bias in relation to the Bates method, and without one I think it technically meets the definition of [[WP:OR|original thought]]. But I also now think it should probably be allowed to [[WP:COMMON|go under the radar]]. I tagged it originally because I had just removed a rather bloated warning template from the top of the article (which has since been partially restored) and in its place I was individually tagging problematic parts. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:33, 31 August 2008 (UTC)

== Scientific evidence that irreversible changes in the shape of the eyeball cause refractive errors ==

I find this sentence in "Cause of sight problems" troubling, as I've searched for and never have found any such evidence.
On the contrary, I've found numerous animal studies that show the opposite. Much research has been done on animals by inducing different refractive errors by introducing a lens corresponding to that refractive error in front of the animals' eyes. The experiences from these experiments tell us that in the animals the changes in the shape of the eyeball are ''reversible'', as the animals return to an emmetropic shape of the eyeball, after these experiments have ended.
To the best of my knowledge there has never been produced any scientific evidence that the changes in the shape of the eye in humans are irreversible. This is a view only concluded from the fact that the refractive errors in humans are thought to be irreversible.
So until references are found that back up the "scientific evidence" part of the sentence, I'm in favour of changing it back to the original "mainstream view". [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 15:25, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

:I've taken this matter up with ScienceApologist‎ on our respective Talk pages. You may be interested to have a look. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 15:48, 2 September 2008 (UTC)

::I have cited a fairly good review piece that indicates directly that refractive errors are anatomical and not physiological. That is not a "point of view": that is reported blandly as a fact. Unless you can find a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] which indicates that this is not a fact, you're going to have to live with this. [[User:ScienceApologist|ScienceApologist]] ([[User talk:ScienceApologist|talk]]) 18:08, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
:::Sorry, ScienceApologist - this is just not correct. On the good side the paragraph no longer claims scientific evidence exist that changes in the shape of the eyeball are irreversible. The problem now is that it wrongly states that Bates disregarded the anatomical features in refractive errors. The source you refered to also says nothing about whether refractive errors are anatomical and not physiological (I believe functional would be a better word here). Note that one doesn't exclude the other. On the contrary, it is quite usual for physiological changes to produce anatomical changes (I see this when I go to the gym to work out). [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 18:45, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
* I did some quick browsing and [http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/11304585 Animal Models of Myopia: Learning How Vision Controls the Size of the Eye] says that ''The causes of refractive error, especially myopia, have been the subject of debate for more than a century. Some have held that myopia is primarily an inherited disorder, and others, that myopia is caused by protracted near work and, especially, by accommodation during protracted near work. It has not been possible, based solely on clinical observations, to resolve the relative roles of heredity versus environment in the development of refractive error.'' We should not therefore suggest that there is a certain explanation of this. It would be simpler to just put Bates' ideas forward without dwelling on competing theories. [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 20:33, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
::As the edit by ScienceApologist doesn't make any sense in any way you read it (it doesn't help either that the most common type of refractive error is called ''physiological myopia''), and the reference added says nothing about what is claimed it says (it only talks about the prevalence of refractive errors), I believe this edit should be reverted. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 21:54, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
:I agree. Go for it. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 21:57, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
::Take a look at [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories/Noticeboard#Bates method]] if you want to see something amusing. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 10:58, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Although what we've got back to is certainly better than the unsubstantiated claims of "evidence" and "fact", there is scope to make it better still. We could either say less here, as Colonel Warden suggests, particularly as it's just been discussed in the Accommodation paragraph, or reword and say rather more, citing the paper which the said Colonel Warden has given above. But it would probably be best to work it out here first. I'd certainly like to see that paper cited somewhere. Perhaps some of our usual editors would like to comment [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 15:18, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

:I did take a look at [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories/Noticeboard#Bates method]]. It comes across as somewhere between calling for the naive science self-styled sceptic cavalry and "running to mummy"; just because the concensus that a certain contributor, among many others, so often bray about is going the sensible way, for once. That probably means they will get their way in the end, like bullying the BBC Web Site Complementary Therapy pages off the Internet and, similarly it seems, bullying a Complementary Therapy Degree Course out of existence. If you cannot win the argument, get your way by force of numbers; quite the opposite of logic, reason and intellectual capacity. I long ago came to the conclusion that the "science", logic, reason and general approach of most Wikipedia editors was at the level of first year secondary school, especially the anonymous ones; though I readily acknowledge the much needed breath of fresh air brought by Samuel, Syd, et al (that translates as "and others", for the first year students). [[User:RichardKingCEng|RichardKingCEng]] ([[User talk:RichardKingCEng|talk]]) 15:28, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
::Yeah, we'll get our way eventually. That's just because there are better sources which disdain the Bates method than there are sources which support it. [[User:ScienceApologist|ScienceApologist]] ([[User talk:ScienceApologist|talk]]) 00:18, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::Actually, we have no sources that support it beyond Bates' own articles. Sadly, the article is written as if that were not the case. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 00:27, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::::Force of numbers, Richard? Oh, please... I think you'll find that sceptics are in the numerical minority, but it might not seem that way to you because the sceptical minority has the evidence decidedly in their favour. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:29, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::Thanks for spelling "sceptic" thus. I thought you must be a Brit, from your interest in Carlisle. However, "[[sceptic]]" means someone who is not credulous. Someone who believes unhesitatingly and uncritically in Bates method is indeed credulous, but so equally is someone who believes unhesitatingly and uncritically in the "orthodox" view. A sceptic is someone who doubts both extreme positions, and searches for the evidence in either direction. I count myself very much a sceptic in that sense. For the rest, please re-read what I wrote below; I do think we might reach consensus that way. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 14:24, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::Sure, but that criticism implies two assumptions: 1) that the orthodox view is an "extreme position". It is not. The weight of evidence favours it overwhelmingly. 2) that people supporting the unorthodox position believe unhestitatingly and uncritically in it. They don't have to, since the weight of evidence favours it overwhelmingly. The sceptic position is not a 50-50 neutral position inbetween Bates and the mainstream. It should be the mainstream. What's ''your'' interest in Carlisle? Or are you just trying to psych me out? ;-) [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 15:32, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

First, thanks to PSWG1920 for the latest edit, which I think deals with the current issue well enough.<BR>
In reply to Ronz, there are dozens of "sources that support it"; there is however a severe shortage of material (no books, too few articles) which fully meet the criteria of [[WP:RS]] on any side of the argument.
So we have to do our best without that. We need very consciously to stick to [[WP:NPOV]] and [[WP:V]]. If any policy has to give a little (under [[WP:IAR]]), it should be [[WP:OR]], but only in drawing very obvious conclusions from agreed facts, and after securing consensus to do so.<BR>
I'd like to suggest that we also need to extend the principles of [[WP:CIVIL]] and [[WP:AGF]] to the whole world, that is, to all the parties in this debate, living or dead. Most people, most of the time, believe they are in the right. If we recognise that, we are in a better position to understand what they are saying, and perhaps to gain some new insights. My original motivation for getting involved in this area of wikipedia wasn't anything to do with Bates method as such; it was my anger at the disgraceful rubbish directed at Huxley, which I think I've succeeded in correcting. The way in which Gardner attacks Bates at a purely personal level did not affect my view of Bates, but it drastically lowered my view of Gardner.<BR>
We also need to be very careful not to go beyond the evidence. The way to counter a mistaken view is not to aggressively assert the opposite view; it is to carefully explain what the real position is. The eye-care professionals don't know everything. With very few exceptions they don't claim to know everything. There is therefore no justification for our writing as if they did make that claim. There is room for doubt in all science, particularly in medical science.<BR>
Having said all that, I think we can do it, that is we can create an article that is accurate, informative and fair. Let's all try and do that. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 10:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

==Mainstream view==

There is a big problem with the term "mainstream view" as it was being employed in this article. Trying to attribute a generally accepted fact such as the anatomical shape of an eye is what leads to refractive errors rather than "stress" or "strain" is problematic. We should not attribute what is generally accepted as fact as the opinion of some nebulous "mainstream" group when most of the people who accept this fact do not consider it to be an opinion. Doing so takes an editorial side that is not seen in the sources and misleads the reader into mistaking what is generally considered (by the vast majority of sources) to be a fact as an opinion. As such, it is a violation of [[WP:NPOV]] and [[WP:SYNTH]] since there is absolutely no "mainstream" source which indicates that the point is a mainstream view in this instance. I have reintroduced an excellent layman's source which attributes refractive errors to the shape of the eye and does not attribute it to strain/stress. In that source, it is stated simply as fact -- not a "view". Therefore, we must do the same.

[[User:ScienceApologist|ScienceApologist]] ([[User talk:ScienceApologist|talk]]) 12:56, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:There is a misunderstanding here. You think I and others, objected to the fact that "the anatomical shape of an eye is what leads to refractive errors". This is not the case. I, at least, find this uncontroversial. The objection is to your statement that there is scientific evidence for "irreversible changes in the shape of the eyeball". This I strongly object to, and I asked you for some reference that proved this scientifically, showing that the myopic eye can only elongate, and the hyperopic eye can only shorten. As myopia and other refractive errors are known to sometimes increase, sometimes decrease, sometimes the myopic eye later can become hyperopic, and the hyperopic eye become myopic, and as I have a fairly good oversight over scientific research in this area, and I have never heard this claim before, I strongly believe that this is a false statement. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 13:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::"Irreversible" is a weird word. Certainly there are surgeries which exist that "reverse" the anatomical shape of the eye. What is without evidence is the belief that the shape of the eye can be affected by extraocular muscles. So Bates believed that the variability of refractive errors was due, in large part, to the way people used their eyes physiologically. This is without scientific evidence. Indeed the scientific evidence points toward anatomical features as being largely independent of physiological context. There are some indications of correlations between certain types of behaviors and a worsening of refractive errors: but these behaviors are seen in the literature to be strictly degenerative and there are no behaviors which are shown to reverse this. This is where Bates' pseudoscience departs from the scientific evidence. [[User:ScienceApologist|ScienceApologist]] ([[User talk:ScienceApologist|talk]]) 13:38, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

ScienceApologist, the source that you added does not address Bates, and the way it is used at least comes very close to being a synthesis; moreover, the referenced Time article already explains the concept being discussed: "''Orthodox explanation of eye function is that the shape of the eyeball is as unchanging as a glass eye; focusing is done by the elastic lens at the front of the eye; the six muscles around each eye have no function except to turn the eyeball. In myopia (nearsightedness) the eyeball is usually long from front to back; in far-sighted people it is often short. In a nearsighted eye, the image falls in front of the retina; in a farsighted eye, behind the retina. Astigmatism is usually laid to slight eye distortions. As orthodox doctors agree that a patient's efforts can not alter the shape of an eyeball, they accept distortions as final, prescribe glasses.
...
''Optical orthodoxy is just a finger-snap to many U.S. therapists, whose offices have as many discarded eyeglasses as Lourdes has crutches. They will try to fix almost any eye disorder (except infections, tumors, etc.) by exercise. Some follow the theory of the late Dr. William H. Bates (died 1931) that the six outside eye muscles not only turn the eye but change the shape of the eyeball.''"

How about "mainstream '''medical''' view"? [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 13:47, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:One problem with your latest edit, ScienceApologist, is that you falsely claims that Bates disregarded the anatomical anomalies in refractive errors. This would be [[straw man]] argument, as you suggest that Bates would have opposed this. He didn't. Everything that is on that page from National Eye Institute could just as well be written by Bates. If your point is only that orthodox ophthalmology doesn't accept the view that the extraocular muscles can affect the refractive state of the eye, I think you can easily put your point forwards in better ways than this. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 13:58, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

::The main issue is that the difference between Bates and the rest of the world isn't reliably defined as "mainstream" in any source I see: nor is it reliably defined as a "view". In fact, I see it as a fact of science. [[User:ScienceApologist|ScienceApologist]] ([[User talk:ScienceApologist|talk]]) 21:43, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

:::I have no objections (I'm neutral) about your latest edit, btw. But it would be interresting to hear in what way you have arrived at these facts. How can you be so sure that cocontraction of extraocular muscle pairs won't affect the shape of the eyeball? If you have seen any research into this, I would be very interrested to hear of it. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 22:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

===Recommendation===
While we do need to present the scientific facts and theories per FRINGE, I think it would be best to use the sources we have to discuss how absurd the Bates method truly is. None of the sources we currently have are supportive of it. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 14:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:Rather than "to discuss how absurd the Bates method truly is" I'd prefer "to discuss why eye-care professionals regard the Bates method as mistaken". But I'm sure that's what you meant. As for your second point, I've been mulling over the possibility of creating a new article [[List of books describing the Bates method]] (partly motivated by Seeyou's obsession with NVI). Do you think that's a good idea? [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 15:34, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::I prefer to follow NPOV and FRINGE. From my reading of the sources, "absurd" is an appropriate summary. "Ridiculous" is another.
::The list of books would be a [[WP:POVFORK]] and an obvious attempt to find further ways to violate NPOV, OR, and FRINGE beyond what's already being done with this article. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 16:01, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::Could I ask for clarification here? As I understand it, you don't regard the pro-Bates books as "sources". Then you speak of your "reading of the sources". So does that exclude the pro-Bates books? Have you in fact ever read any of them? [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 16:15, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::::By "sources", I mean the references used in the article. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 16:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::There are four pro-Bates books now being used as references in the article, so on that basis your "None of the sources we currently have are supportive of it." isn't true. And you've ducked my main question. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 16:30, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::There are already too many dispersed Bates-related [[WP:POVFORK|content forks]]. The solution is to ''edit'' this material, to merge and condense it into a concise, readable summary. Instead of spreading the few morsels of well-sourced information even farther apart, make them stand out by streamlining the material. Creating more Bates-related content forks would be a step in the wrong direction. '''[[User:MastCell|MastCell]]'''&nbsp;<sup>[[User Talk:MastCell|Talk]]</sup> 16:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::OK. I see your point. It was only a thought ... [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 17:14, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

* Regarding Ronz' point, my impression is that the article already gives undue prominence to ridicule in the reference to Martin Gardner's criticism in the lede. I like Martin Gardner's work but it does not seem that the opinion of a mathematical journalist is appropriate in this place. It should go as it gives the article the tone of an attack piece. [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 18:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::When all independent sources ridicule the subject matter, then we follow NPOV and report it. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 20:57, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::If the mission is to discredit the validity of the Bates method, I don't think the ad hominem attacks, straw man arguments and attempts at ridicule that many opponents of the method frequently uses, is the way to go. A pure fact-based rebuttal point for point of Bates' claims, based on valid and referenced research is far more effective. The point that all the sources we use ridicule the subject matter is a bit stupid, because it is a direct effect of the fact that we choose to only include the sources that ridicule the subject matter. There are a large number of books written by medical doctors, optometrists and ophthalmologists, several of them with PhDs, that embraces the method. But we don't use them here as sources because we consider them fringe sources. I agree with this decision. But even if the Bates method is a fringe theory, that doesn't mean the rebuttal shouldn't be fact-based and conducted respectfully. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 21:39, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::Follow the sources. At least one major [[WP:RS|reliable source]] ridicules the Bates method. It is not up to Wikipedia editors to censor this information from the reader. It is also not our job to take an opinion on whether one should or shouldn't ridicule proponents of Bates method. Nor is it Wikipedia's job to do the actual ridiculing or debunking. All we must do is report the facts surrounding the Bates Method, the general disdain and low-esteem it is afforded by the scientific and medical communities, and leave it at that. [[User:ScienceApologist|ScienceApologist]] ([[User talk:ScienceApologist|talk]]) 21:58, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::Agreed. Just read the sources. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 23:23, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::So it's okay to just use ad hominem attacks and straw man arguments (as some of the sources here do) to "debunk" Bates, while f.ex. PhD dissertations that supports Bates are not allowed as sources? [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 23:35, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::::PhD and Master's theses should be considered unpublished (or self-published) observations unless they have been published elsewhere in, f.ex, a peer-reviewed journal. Having experienced both, the peer-review process is far more rigourous than an oral defense. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:41, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::::"So it's okay to just use ad hominem attacks and straw man arguments" I believe this is a straw man argument, as no one here is doing any such thing, or even suggesting it. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 23:46, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::We're doing it indirectly by referencing sources that do just that. It leads to a bias, especially in consideration that none of the sources that supports Bates are allowed here. [[User:Syd75|Syd75]] ([[User talk:Syd75|talk]]) 00:01, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

* I'm not sure what has transpired here previously but it seems that the selection of sources may not have been NPOV. For example, I just searched for a reasonably reliable source and soon found this item from [[The Times]], the UK's principal [[journal of record]]: [http://www.timesonline.co.uk/tol/life_and_style/health/article1009583.ece Conditions: Refractive error]. This states, ''Vision education, or the Bates Method, is a programme of eye exercises that aims to improve sight without resorting to lenses or surgery. Although there have not been any recent clinical trials, ophthalmologists agree that the exercises may help some cases of short sight and certain types of squint.''. This not only does not ridicule the method, it indicates that it may be of some value. I look around a bit more and find this piece in the [[Wall Street Journal]]: [http://online.wsj.com/article/SB107998993412962051.html?mod=googlewsj A Workout for Your Eyes]. This is no enconium but does not ridicule and also says that eye exercises may help in some cases. I've seen enough and so am removing Gardner's opinion. [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 22:08, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
:::The sources you cite are journalism (with all the associated sensationalism and absence of fact-checking that goes along with it). Try finding a source in a peer-reviewed journal, written by a scientist perhaps, that concludes "hey, this Bates guy was '''right!'''" I think you will struggle. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:45, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
:::I also think it is telling that in the Times article, the "complimentary therapy" section that discusses Bates is squarely at the end and about 1/10 the length of the sections devoted to more "mainstream" treatments. It smacks of something added at the last minute to fulfill an obligation to provide "alternative views". Anyway, the Times is a bloody Tory rag that I wouldn't wipe my bottom with! [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:51, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
:::... and unfortunately, the Wall Street Journal article is not freely available, so I can't read all of it (and surely this excludes it from being sourced?), however it does begin "most eye doctors take a dim view of the idea." Hardly complimentary (pun unintended)! [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:57, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
::"I'm not sure what has transpired here previously but it seems that the selection of sources may not have been NPOV." Then I suggest you read the discussions here, read the sources, read this article, and follow [[WP:CON]]. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 23:32, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
* No, consensus may change and so we start afresh with your contention that this article should ridicule. This proposition violates our core policy of [[WP:NPOV]] which requires an impartial tone throughout: ''A neutral characterization of disputes requires presenting viewpoints with a consistently impartial tone, otherwise articles end up as partisan commentaries even while presenting all relevant points of view.''. Consensus may not override core policies and so that's that. Content which does not have a properly dispassionate tone, such as the Gardener piece, should be removed forthwith. There seem to be numerous better sources which summarise the method in a more objective and up-to-date way and so these should be substituted. [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 06:49, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
It's really striking how often people make an explicit claim of consensus when it is clearly absent. As in this case. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 08:11, 5 September 2008 (UTC)


"so we start afresh with your contention that this article should ridicule." Another straw man argument. Please do not misrepresent others. Thanks! --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 18:57, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

== Brain training ==

Much work is done by the brain in processing visual inputs to fill in the blind spot and otherwise improve visual perception. There is an experiment in which subjects have their vision inverted by means of a prism. They are able to adjust to this in time and then have to readjust when the inversion effect is removed. I myself have some personal experience of such adjustment to compensate for vision defects. This is sometimes exploited when contact lens prescriptions are set up to provide monovision in which the eyes separately cover different ranges of focus. My impression is that Bates did not address such issues but that his methods may have benefited from them. Do modern versions of the method, to which the article alludes, explore this aspect? [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 18:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

:This is not what is commonly referred to as "brain training", what you are talking about is simple visual adaptation. Its been known about for a long time, has been quite extensively researched and has, as far as I can tell, no relevance to Bates. It would count as original research to make any connection since most research on this topic post-dates Bates. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:29, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

== See Clearly Method ==

I disagree with the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=236408118&oldid=236340329 removal] of this section. There are four sources independent of SCM as well as Bates which link the two in some way. The [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=236340329&oldid=236340148 details] SamuelTheGhost added previously were summed up in the words "''among other issues''" (which one can go to the [[See Clearly Method]] article to find.) [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 13:07, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

:It's not a question of sources; the facts are clear. The question is, why should this material be included, and to say that we can "link the two in some way" is hopelessly inadequate as a reason. The reason the SCM got into trouble is that they charged a lot of money, made exaggerated claims, and didn't honour their money-back guarantee. That could have arisen in exactly the same way if they'd been teaching Hungarian. If they had, would that justify putting it into the article on Hungarian language? I put the full details in as a second-best option, to try and make the picture clear, but I'd much prefer to omit the incident altogether. It tells us '''nothing whatever''' about Bates method, and thus is completely off-topic. Its inclusion has always seemed to me a crude example of a "guilt by association" smear, and I'm a bit surprised you're so keen on it. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 13:33, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

::I do see your point, however, surfing the net I have noticed that some people think that the See Clearly Method ''is'' the Bates method. Having that section in this article set that straight. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 13:52, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

:::Well, I must admit that that had never occurred to me, but the article is hardly written as if that were the main message, and there's better ways of saying it if necessary. Maybe some people think BM is SCM; Seeyou keeps telling us that BM is NVI; it does make me realise that the words "Bates method" cannot be anyone's trademark, which means that anyone can use them. Perhaps that fact is worth drawing attention to. To be fair, the only options are either to atttempt to list all current purveyors of Bates method, which could only be done over Ronz' dead body, or simply to say there's lots of them out there, without identifying any particular one, and [[caveat emptor]]. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 17:52, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

::::The See Clearly Method is probably the most notable contemporary "variant" of the Bates method, as there are plenty of independent sources which address it specifically. Such does not seem to be the case with the Goodrich/Quackenbush approach of "Natural Vision Improvement", for instance. Perhaps the "See Clearly Method" subsection should be further rewritten, but I definitely think it belongs in this article. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 18:07, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
::::: I agree that it should be mentioned. I'm not sure how much we need to go into it, nor why we need to use self-published sources to partially verify original research. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 18:42, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

"The reason the SCM got into trouble is that they charged a lot of money, made exaggerated claims, and didn't honour their money-back guarantee. That could have arisen in exactly the same way if they'd been teaching Hungarian."

But if the See Clearly method actually '''worked,''' their claims wouldn't have '''been''' exaggerations, not very many people would have '''wanted''' their money back, and it would have been easy for the See Clearly Method people to '''honor''' their guarantee. The same issue certainly could arise in the context of teaching Hungarian, but it doesn't, because teachers of Hungarian are able to deliver what they promise. In fact there is a language school in Boston that has been running subway posters saying "Guaranteed Swahili!" for years and years, with no objection by the state attorney-general. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 01:44, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

:I'd be really interested to see the exact terms implied by "Guaranteed Swahili!" If there was an organised body of professionals dedicated to the notion that Swahili couldn't be learnt, don't you think the Boston school would be in trouble? In fact there are many dozens of BM teachers around the world who are functioning without complaint, because they avoid silly promises. There have been at least two other lawsuits in the US (Corbett and Hackett, see Pollack's book pp. 7-8) where the practitioners were acquitted. BM is an educational process, and every responsible teacher knows that you don't always win. Bates himself was inclined to exaggerate, which I think harmed his cause greatly, but most of his successors make more modest claims. Meanwhile, I'm tempted to go to Boston, fail to learn Swahili, and sue them. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 07:37, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

::Getting back to the question of whether the See Clearly Method should be mentioned in this article (remember this is not a forum for general discussion of the subject), I would respond to your original argument by pointing out that the Bates method is a much narrower topic than the Hungarian language. Thus applying the same reasoning to what should and shouldn't be in articles about the respective subjects is highly suspect. Moreover, if a company sold a "teach yourself Hungarian" kit with a money-back guarantee that they were found not to be honoring despite many attempts to get it, no remotely sensible person would deduce that ''everyone'' claiming to teach Hungarian is a quack. The same is not the case with the See Clearly Method and vision improvement, hence the need to address that here. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 22:50, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

:::Why aren't we including accounts of the many Bates teachers and schools, past and present, who have functioned without complaintt, and with apparently only satisfied customers? [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 10:31, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

::::I think we can do that if we have independent sources which discuss them in some detail. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 15:07, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:::::There is, as you know, a severe dearth of independent discussion of such things. The two exceptions I can think of are the cases of Corbett and Hackett mentioned above, both of which are described in Pollack's book. For Corbett most of it is in [[Margaret Corbett]] already, but that needn't be a bar given that [[See Clearly Method]] also has its own article. For Hackett, Pollack just mentions that she was tried and acquitted, saying only that it was "similar" to Corbett's case but in New York. The crucial point in both these cases, however, is that they could produce lots of satisfied customers as witnesses, and presumably the prosecution couldn't find unsatisfied ones, since if they had been able to they would have done. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 18:42, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

::::::Perhaps we could create an "After Bates" section to chronicle the history up to the present day. This could include what is currently in "Modern Variants" as well as Huxley's story, plus whatever else we could get away with adding. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 19:44, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:::::::I think that's an excellent idea. Would others agree??? [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 20:19, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:::::::: It is an option, but in my opinion a much simpler and correct solution is to stick to the literature. When we refer to the old Bates method we speak of the Bates method for Better Eyesight and when we speak of the Bates method of today we speak of the Bates method of Natural vision improvement. Ths is exactly what literature speaks of. It is important to understand we are only editors. We can not just present how we see the BM ourselves. It should be based on references.[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:01, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
Neither Corbett nor Hackett had anything to do with NVI. It might be possible to mention NVI as one of the many schools currently operating. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 21:41, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:I do agree with SamuelTheGhost here. I would add that attempting to distinguish between the "Bates method for better eyesight" and the "Bates method of natural vision improvement" will if anything only confuse the reader. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:55, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

==A note on the Huxley incident==
Another indirect source, but this one specifies when and where Cerf published the account:

{{cquote|Bennett Cerf wrote this account of the time Huxley addressed a Hollywood banquet in the April 12, 1952, Saturday Review:

When he arose to make his address he wore no glasses, and evidently experienced no difficulty in reading the paper he had planted on the lectern. Had the exercises really given him normal vision? I, along with 1200 other guests, watched with astonishment while he rattled glibly on . . . Then suddenly he faltered -- and the disturbing truth became obvious. He wasn't reading the address at all. He had learned it by heart. To refresh his memory he brought the paper closer to his eyes. When it was only an inch or so away he still couldn't read it, and he had to fish for a magnifying glass in his pocket. It was an agonizing moment.}}

--"Reality shopping; a consumer's guide to new age hokum. Alan M. MacRobert. Whole Earth Review (Autumn 1986): pp4(11).

MacRobert also says that "in 1956, a Manhattan optometrist, Philip Pollack, wrote the definitive book exposing [the Bates system's] failures, ''The Truth About Eye Exercises.'' [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 02:20, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:The Cerf quote is given in [[Bates method#The case of Huxley]]. It is given there with reference to <ref name="Gardner">{{cite book | last=Gardner | first=Martin | title=Fads and Fallacies in the Name of Science | year=1957 | chapter=Chapter 19: Throw Away Your Glasses! | pages = 230-241 | publisher=Reprint: Courier Dover | ISBN=0-486-20394-8 | chapterurl=http://books.google.com/books?id=kWoJ8mEEJ0wC&printsec=frontcover&source=gbs_summary_r#PPA232,M1}}</ref>. In that book by Gardner (I have it on my desk as I write) the details are given exactly as MacRobert has copied them. They aren't all in the BM article solely to avoid pointless clutter. As for Pollack's book (I have it on my desk as I write), it is referred to I think nine times (<ref name="pollack">{{cite book | author=Pollack P. | title=The Truth about Eye Exercises | publisher=Philadelphia: Chilton Co. | year=1956 | chapter=Chapter 3: Fallacies of the Bates System | chapterurl=http://www.quackwatch.org/11Ind/bates.html}}</ref> and <ref>{{cite book | author=Pollack P. | title=The Truth about Eye Exercises | publisher=Philadelphia: Chilton Co. | year=1956 | page = 40-44 | url=http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ&q=%22long+swing%22&pgis=1#search}}</ref>) in the [[Bates method]] article, starting with the lead section. Furthermore I referred to it in my message to you above, when I said "(Corbett and Hackett, see Pollack's book pp. 7-8)" which you obviously didn't study very carefully. But keep on trying. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 09:36, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
::''"...which you obviously didn't study very carefully. But keep on trying."'' Watch the personal attacks, Sam. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 14:09, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

== References ==
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== RFC Nr : 1 change of title Bates method into Bates method / Natural Vision improvement ==

RFC is to change the current title Bates method into Bates method / Natural vision improvement.

The arguments to do this are listed below :

The article Natural Vision improvement directs already to the Bates method article. See :
* http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Natural_vision_improvement&redirect=no

This is confusing since the Bates method and Natural Vision Improvement have a strong connection but are not exactly equal. See paragraph : Removal of sourced quotes to understand why.

In books published today and the Bates method and Natural vision improvement are used to describe the same subject. See the refererence book quote below :

Professional Engineer Doug Marsh in his book :

<blockquote>The reason my glasses were in my pocket that day wasn’t because I’d broken them. Rather I’d been purposely not wearing them for long periods as part of my experiment with Natural Vision Improvement, (NVI), also called the Bates Method. .<ref>{{cite book | last = Marsh | first = Doug. | title = Restoring your eyesight a taoist approach | publisher = Healing arts Press | date = 2007 | pages = page 2 | isbn = 1-59477-150-2 }}</ref></blockquote>

Also when you go to Amazon : And search for Bates method or Natural Vision Improvement you will find the same book listed at the top.

In the discussion above no valid arguments was given against the change.[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 08:55, 7 September 2008 (UTC)



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* '''Oppose''' - This seems like an odd name for an article. I have not seen any other article named as such (with a / in the middle). I would suggest dedicating one (new) section of this article to discuss NVI and how it differs from Bates Method. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 17:57, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

* '''Oppose use of slash''' because this creates a "subpage" which is probably not what was intended. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 18:20, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
:*[[Face/Off|No it doesn't.]] -<font color="32CD32">''[[User:Jéské Couriano|Jéské]]''</font> <font color="4682B4"><sup>([[User talk:Jéské Couriano/Discussions|v^_^v]] [[Special:Contributions/Jéské Couriano|Call me Mr. Bonaparte!]])</sup></font> 08:47, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

* '''Oppose''' because the naming convention is to ''use the most common name.'' I don't think there is a good, common, well-accepted ''generic'' name, like "Chiropractic" or "Psychoanalysis" or "Homeopathy" for "systems for correction of refractive error in the eye, without the use of lenses, by means of eye exercises." I don't think "Natural vision improvement" is such a name; it's just a description. "Bates method" returns forty thousand Google hits, "Natural vision improvement" only twenty thousand, and the naming convention is to use the most common name. If the name "Psychoanalysis" didn't exist, I'd want to see the article on psychoanalysis named "Freudianism," not "Natural mental illness improvement" or "Freudianism, Jungism, and similar systems of talk therapy." If I'm wrong in assuming that Bates was really the founder and that the various modern-day methods are descended from Bates' work, then it gets more complicated, though. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 18:20, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:: Seeyou's comment : Very strange. I also did a google test on Bates method and Natural vision improvement.
:: Result : Bates method : 362,000 hits
:: Result : Natural Vision Improvement : 14,700,000 hits ?! [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 18:41, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

:::Put them in quotation marks, which will find only pages which have the exact phrase. "Bates method" gets twice as many results as "Natural Vision Improvement". [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 19:06, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

:::: Thanks for your info, PSWG1920. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
::::: Still quite a lot of results for Natural Vision Improvement. So in my opinion the logical sequence should be Bates method / Natural Vision Improvement. 2 of the three times Bates mehhod is used and in 1 of the three times Natural Vision Improvement. By changing the title we would improve the article. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:23, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

== RFC Nr : 2 Removal of sourced quotes ==

The following request for comment regarding the removal of all the sourced valuable Bates / NVI quotes in the article. Since the BM / NVI article is controversial there are 2 parties with a very opposite opinion regarding the subject of this article.
I don’t think the current developments should be accepted.

This article should be written from multiple points of view not just one. Multiple points of view meaning the BM advocate point of view ( the dominant one(s)), the point of view of Ophthalmology, and the skeptic point of view. By doing so the result will be a neutral article in which the reader can read the different points of view ant conclude its own conclusion. Not the conclusion of only a skeptic or advocate editors. If this is not achieved censor is present.

The argument of Original research Ronz is using is complete fake, since bates is the original researcher so this complete article should not exist. Note Bates research is mentioned in the references of the American Academy of Ophthalmology. ( Also removed in the references ! ). Why ? It was present ! Anyhow nonsense and vandalism is currently present.

Note also in the past there has also been an attempt to vandalise this article by multiple virtual IP addresses. This is the same situation except for the strategy. The current editors are no longer multiple IP adressess but are all quite new in making edits in general and editing this article. Makes you wonder why.


Please give your arguments if the book referenced quotes should return in the article or should stay removed as the skeptics want. I repeat the neutrality of this article is completely gone.

=== Quote A The only available definition ===
Natural Vision Improvement teacher Thomas R. Quackenbush defines the Bates method thus: <blockquote>An educational program created by ophthalmologist William H. Bates, M.D., in which natural, correct vision habits&mdash;based on relaxation of the mind and body&mdash;are taught; optional self-healing activities and games are often included to accelerate integration and self-healing; commonly misunderstood as only "eye exercises"&mdash;even by many "Bates Method" teachers.<ref>{{cite book | last = Quackenbush | first = Thomas R. | title = Better Eyesight: The Complete Magazines of William H. Bates | publisher = North Atlantic Books | date = 2000 | pages = page 643 | isbn = 1-55643-351-4 |url=http://books.google.com/books?id=ufOSikwYsrwC&pg=PA643&lpg=PA643&dq=&source=web&ots=6h_kRZAKCc&sig=b9N5xGyUbpoSFzQtla6B4EaVWKI}}</ref></blockquote>

Seeyou's comment : Suppose this article was about the law of gravity and the only given definition would be removed ! A bit strange is not it. The only way to remove any definition in any article is to replace it be a new one ! This has not happened !

*I think I agree with that. The article should include a short, succinct definition of what the "Bates method" is, and the definition should be from a source sympathetic to the method. We should use the best source we can find, so if someone can find a better source than Quackenbush it should be replaced, but on the face of it a definition, made by an editor of a collection of Bates' work, sounds good to me. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 18:39, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Weak agree'''. Per PSWG1920. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 02:30, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Agree with serious reservations''' It should be made clear that this definition is coming from a practitioner and "believer" in Bates' methods. Otherwise it lends undue weight to the use of words like "educational", "natural", "correct", etc. All of which are ''highly suspect'' POV claims. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 17:45, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Disagree.''' We follow NPOV, OR, FRINGE, etc here. If we don't have a proper source, we don't mention it. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 19:41, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
** '''Comment''' - The Quackenbush source is a book published by [http://www.northatlanticbooks.com/ North Atlantic Books], a decently reputable publisher Certainly there are better publishers out there, though and sure, there may be better sources out there for this information, but overall, this one isn't bad and passes the [[WP:RS]] sniff test. I have no idea how you think OR applies here. This seems to be faithful to the original text. However, I would be extremely curious to read your explanation as to why you feel OR applies here. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 20:17, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Partially agree''' - The bit after the second semicolon is just a veiled attack on other Bates teachers, so should definitely be omitted. The bit after the first semicolon is fairly vacuous, and clumsy in including the words "self-healing" twice, so could with benefit be omitted. Since "educational" and "are taught" say the same thing, the "educational" could go, leaving just "A program created by ophthalmologist William H. Bates, M.D., in which natural, correct vision habits&mdash;based on relaxation of the mind and body&mdash;are taught." That would do nicely, and could still have Quackenbush's name on it. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 22:15, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Undecided / neutral''' - First of all, it should be considered that this definition [http://books.google.com/books?id=ufOSikwYsrwC&pg=PA643&lpg=PA643&dq=&source=web&ots=6h_kRZAKCc&sig=b9N5xGyUbpoSFzQtla6B4EaVWKI comes from a glossary]. Secondly, what does it really add to the article? Now, I had seen some sweeping criticisms of this article which I felt were, for the most part, unfair and inaccurate; however, the "Natural Vision Improvement" subsection did seem rather problematic, as it continued to lack a source independent of the subject. Therefore I thought it would help to delete it. Now, if we re-add Quackenbush's definition or part of it, the best context would be in the proposed "After Bates" section which has yet to be created. If we don't find an independent source which mentions Quackenbush, however, I'm not sure that we can justify quoting him like this. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 01:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
** That seems like very sound reasoning, I am going to change my entry based on what you have written here. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 01:48, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
*** Since Seeyou has again brought this up below, I thought I'd point out that this is '''not''' the only available definition. [http://books.google.com/books?id=tEkEAAAACAAJ Look here], for example: "''The Bates Method is a non-invasive and natural way of enhancing visual acuity and relearning how to see properly, using simple techniques to relive eye strain and improve brain-eye coordination.''" If we really need a definition from an advocate, that one would probably do better. No doubt others could be found in different books. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 06:40, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
::::A small irritating/amusing detail about that, namely that the given quotation is part of the publisher's blurb about the book, which is printed on the back cover (though with "relieve" with the correct spelling), but nothing quite as snappy seems to appear inside the book. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 12:09, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

=== Quote B Bates on open eyelid sunning ===
Bates did temper his claims regarding open eyelid sunning in later editions of his magazine, ''Better Eyesight.''
<blockquote> Sunning : Let the sun shine on your closed eyelids for short intervals. Choose preferably the early morning sunlight. It is the light rays which benefit the eyes rather than the heat rays. The sun loses some of its effect when it comes through glass.<ref>{{cite book | last = Quackenbush | first = Thomas R. | title = Better Eyesight: The Complete Magazines of William H. Bates | publisher = North Atlantic Books | date = 2000 | pages = page 299 | isbn = 1-55643-351-4 |url = http://books.google.com/books?id=ufOSikwYsrwC&printsec=frontcover#PPA299,M1}}</ref></blockquote>

Seeyou’s comment : Bates is ridiculed for his open eyelid sunning. See the quackwatch site below :

* http://www.quackwatch.com/11Ind/bates.html

Shouldn’t Bates be given all the room to make clear what he really meant in his own words !
Note : Bates was also ridiculed on sunning in this article in the past.

:As I read the "sunning" section of current version of the article, I don't see Bates being "ridiculed" and I don't see his views being represented unfairly. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 18:39, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

::> He later suggested allowing direct sunlight to shine on closed eyes as part of his "routine treatment".[38] But he never renounced the claim, set forth in Perfect Sight Without Glasses, that looking directly at the sun even with open eyes could not cause irreversible damage.

::See the link below paragraph Sunning :
:: * http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&diff=193797496&oldid=193780148#Sunning

:: Routine treatment ?!
:: Set Fort in Perfect Sight Without Glasses ?! ( quote is sourced Better Eyesight magazine of a later date. )
:: could not cause irreversible damage. Books about the BM today only speak of closed eyelid sunning ! Editors ignore the fact there is also an improved BM of today. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:31, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

* '''Comment'''. Represent the best sources. Our job is to get it right. If a source is getting it wrong (but there is no other source actually saying that they've got it wrong), both versions should be presented without creating an argument of who is right or who is wrong. On a side note, be wary of Quackwatch as a source. It has been deemed a partisan and unreliable source by [[Wikipedia:Requests_for_arbitration/Barrett_v._Rosenthal#Use_of_unreliable_sources_by_Fyslee|ArbCom decision]]. Use it with caution and be sure to note that you are dealing with opinion and not fact when citing from this source. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 02:36, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
::Note first of all that the Quackwatch page in question is simply a reproduction of a chapter of a [http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ book] by an optometrist. Also, I find it strange that Seeyou is referring to an ''old'' version of the article to make a point, although I do agree with him/her that the current article could clarify that Bates felt the benefit was from the light rays rather than the heat rays. The quote Seeyou wants to use probably isn't the best, however, because it is not actually Bates' words, though his magazine did publish it. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 03:02, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
::: I would certainly use the book in lieu of the reproduction of it at the partisan website. It will be more credible as such, IMHO. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 03:33, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
:::: The citation shows that it's from a book. The problem is that Quackwatch is the only place online which hosts the text as such (though Google books does contain a "snippet view", which can at least confirm that Quackwatch isn't making things up here.) It seems like it's better to link to the text if you can, especially considering the number of times it is referenced. Editors should be able to check the source easily, if possible. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 04:11, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
::::: Okay, that's cool. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 04:37, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

=== Quote C definition of N.V.I. ===
According to Janet Goodrich : <blockquote> Natural Vision Improvement : A lifestyle method of improving eyesight by wholistic means without the use of optical devices. The Bates method merged with modern theories of brain function, character and responsibility for one’s self and state of being..<ref name="Goodrich">{{cite book | last = Goodrich | first = Janet. | title = Natural vision improvement | publisher = Cellestialarts | date = 1986 | page = 211 | isbn = 0-89087-471-9 |url= http://books.google.com/books?id=NRYEAAAACAAJ&dq=natural+vision+improvement }}</ref></blockquote>


Seeyou’s comment : Sourced book definitions should be copied exactly as they are and stay as quotes so the can’t be changed be editors with other intentions than improving wikipedia.

:I agree. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] [[User_talk:dpbsmith|(talk)]] 18:39, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

:: Note that the "Natural Vision Improvement" subsection [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bates_method&oldid=229642534#.22Natural_Vision_Improvement.22 had been almost entirely a collection of quotes from Goodrich and Quackenbush], further with no independent source. I'm not sure but past experience leads me to believe that is not acceptable. Perhaps an "After Bates" section, as [[#See_Clearly_Method|suggested above]], will provide a better context for this. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 05:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Somewhat agree'''. Quotes are fine, but <u>faithful</u> summarizations can be just as good or better. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 02:38, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

=== Quote D Not a cure ! ===
: According to Janet Goodrich : <blockquote>Improving vision naturally is an internal transformation, not a treatment, cure or makeover by external forces. .<ref>{{cite book | last = Goodrich | first = Janet. | title = Natural vision improvement | publisher = Cellestialarts | date = 1986 | page = 2 | isbn = 0-89087-471-9 |url= http://books.google.com/books?id=NRYEAAAACAAJ&dq=natural+vision+improvement }}</ref>></blockquote>

Seeyou's comment : Valuable Important information for understanding since a lot of people will compare NVI with their quick fix glasses or contacts. ( I did ). A lot of people will also think the responsibility for their improvement lies by the teacher. This is not true of course.. Aldous Huxley said it very clear Doctors don’t heal Nature does.[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:33, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

::If it's ''"not a treatment [or] cure,"'' what is it? A religion? And what would be the point of participating in it if it doesn't "treat" or "cure" what ails you? [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 14:13, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
* '''Comment'''. I am confused what you are asking for editors to comment on here. However, if the Goodrich source is deemed reliable, then there is no reason why her opinion can't be presented in the article. -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 02:40, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

== "After Bates" section ==

As discussed [[#See_Clearly_Method|above]], it would probably he helpful to create an "After Bates" section to chronicle the history up to the present day. This could include what is currently in "[[Bates method#Modern variants|Modern variants]]" and "[[Bates method#The case of Huxley|The case of Huxley]]", and whatever else we decide to add. A good first step might be to list the notable proponents who could be mentioned and whatever independent sources refer to them. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 15:41, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
:That's definitely the way to go about it. From what little we've found so far it looks like if we can find any acceptable sources they aren't going to be very positive for Bates method or its proponents. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 16:44, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
:: this makes a lot of sense--[[User:Vannin|Vannin]] ([[User talk:Vannin|talk]]) 16:58, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
::: I agree. This does make a lot of sense. Though I am not sure that "After Bates" should be the title (but something to that effect). -- <b><font color="996600" face="times new roman,times,serif">[[User:Levine2112|Levine2112]]</font></b> <sup><font color="#774400" size="1" style="padding:1px;border:1px #996600 dotted;background-color:#FFFF99">[[User talk:Levine2112|discuss]]</font></sup> 02:28, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
::::Great idea, and I think "After Bates" would be a pretty accurate and succinct title. [[User:Famousdog|Famousdog]] ([[User talk:Famousdog|talk]]) 13:33, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

I have begun listing individuals who could be mentioned along with the independent sources which discuss them. Feel free to add to this list as I am making it communal property. Or comment on it here. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 02:56, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
:Since there seems to be a clear consensus, I got the ball rolling and created the "After Bates" section. At this point it is very disjointed and needs a lot of things filled in. Merging the [[Margaret Darst Corbett]] article would be an obvious step. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 03:49, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
::I have copied most of [[Margaret Darst Corbett]] into this article, removing details which were redundant here. The only other part I left out was the [[Margaret_Darst_Corbett#Criticism|Pollack quote at the end]], which I wasn't quite sure whether or how to use. Beyond that, it can be redirected. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 05:34, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou’s comment : The correct and only solution is to stick to the literature. When we refer to the old Bates method we should speak of the Bates method for Better Eyesight and when we speak of the Bates method of today we should speak of the Bates method of Natural vision improvement. By mentioning this explanations in the introduction we can make this clear for the public and ourselves. And this is exactly what dominant literature speaks of. What we mention and say should be based on references and literature. Books being published today still speak of Bates method and Natural Vision Improvement as if they are equal. ( See the reference of Doug Marsh his book dated 2007 ). This is confusing because they are not equal to our current definitions. The Bates method of today has changed on some aspects and has become part of Natural Vision Improvement. That is why it is called the Bates method of NVI. I do understand why PSWG1920 and the others want an After Bates section because then the See Cleary Method can also be mentioned and the BM suggestive ridiculed. One problem : the See clearly method is not equal to the Bates method. As the See Clearly method tells us. Reference SCM itself and Visionsofjoy. And the SCM also isn’t Natural Vision improvement. Because Natural Vision Improvement is partly Bates method. A modern Bates method section is much better in my opinion if you want to provide clear information. The see clearly method shoult be replaced in the article [[vision therapy ]] See below keywords of the backcover.
[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:56, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

:"''One problem : the See clearly method is not equal to the Bates method. As the See Clearly method tells us. Reference SCM itself and Visionsofjoy.''" Which is precisely the reason I want to make sure it is mentioned. To show that it is '''not''' the Bates method. Browsing the web I've seen the "Bates See Clearly method" referred to. The current article sets that straight. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 01:04, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
:: I don't see the logic. This article is about the BM and should just present quality info about NVI and the BM. It has got nothing to do with any orther source(s). By removing any information about the See clearly method in the Bates method article it's much clearer. Remove it to [[vision therapy]] I also browsed the web and I did not find any reliable sources connecting the Bates method and the See Clearly method. Can you provide the references you spoke of ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:39, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
::: The first four sources in the [[Bates_method#The_.22See_Clearly_Method.22|See Clearly Method]] subsection all speak of the See Clearly Method in connection with Bates. Additionally, [http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=%22Bates+See+Clearly+method%22&btnG=Google+Search&aq=f&oq= this] illustrates how people are being misled. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:35, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
:::: PSWG1920. This google result does not convince me at all. Reliable sources are essential ! I will remove the SCM paragraph in the near future. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:50, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
::::: I have restored the subsection and made it more to the point. The point being, while the See Clearly Method adapts a few of Bates' techniques, overall it is distinctly different. And this is well-sourced. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 05:11, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
:"''When we refer to the old Bates method we should speak of the Bates method for Better Eyesight and when we speak of the Bates method of today we should speak of the Bates method of Natural vision improvement. By mentioning this explanations in the introduction we can make this clear for the public and ourselves.''" That would not make anything clear. Any attempt to distinguish between the "Bates method for Better Eyesight" and the "Bates method of Natural Vision Improvement" is only going to confuse readers. If the Goodrich/Quackenbush approach is discussed anywhere in this article, it should be in the "After Bates" section. However, a source independent of the subject may be needed to establish the notability of that variant. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 01:54, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
:: I don't think we will come to an agreement. A RFC would be wiser I think. Our information should be based on published written facts.
::: PSWG1920 : That would not make anything clear. Any attempt to distinguish between the "Bates method for Better Eyesight" and the "Bates method of Natural Vision Improvement" is only going to confuse readers.
:::I completly disagree. The current situation is confusing. Doug Marsh in his book for example speaks about the Bates method. Which one do you think he really means. Hint : The foreword is written by thomas Quackenbush. By making a difference between the old and the new bates method we really make worldwide progress making this subject clear. And wikipedia is really becoming a great source of information. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:54, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
::::Looking at it that way there are many versions of the Bates method, not just two. Hence the reason for the "After Bates" section, which if you scroll up you will see there is a strong consensus for. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:43, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou has drawn attention to the lists of books on sale at amazon, but they make clear that NVI/Quackenbush is just one of many. Looking at http://www.amazon.com/, with search on "Bates method", and leaving out false positives and books by Bates himself, we get the following authors:
*Thomas R. Quackenbush
*Jonathan Barnes
*Steven M. Beresford et al.
*Meir Schneider
*Clara A. Hackett et al.
*Margaret D. Corbett
*Martin A Sussman
*Jacob Liberman
*Hereward Carrington
*Doug Marsh and Thomas R. Quackenbush
*James Bellevue
*Peter Mansfield et al.
*Lisette Scholl
*Charles R Kelley

Doing the same exercise at http://www.amazon.co.uk/ yields most of the same authors, but with Barnes leading and Quackenbush nowhere.

This makes absolutely clear that Qackenbush is just one of many. Words like "dominant" which Seeyou keeps using are misplaced, as the other authors are not dominated. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 12:46, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
:: Strange you do not undestand me. Does not matter I will explain. I mean dominant in selling. That is why I added the rankings. The public does not have a problem to see and find quality information about the Batesmethod of NVI. Do you understand now ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:13, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

:::'''I strongly object to your altering my talk page messages''', as [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3ABates_method&diff=239097703&oldid=239087510 here]. I prevously regarded rational discussion with you as very difficult. That makes it impossible. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 20:53, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
:::: Can you explain why discussing is difficult. I don't understand. In my opinion you just avoid the question I asked you above. I will repeat my question :
::::: Strange you do not undestand me. Does not matter I will explain. I mean dominant in selling. That is why I added the rankings. The public does not have a problem to see and find quality information about the Batesmethod of NVI. Do you understand now ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:13, 17 September 2008 (UTC



The section should probably have an introductory paragraph. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 19:25, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
===List of proponents discussed by independent sources===
*Aldous Huxley - [http://brain.berkeley.edu/pub/1952%20April%20Flashes%20of%20Clear%20Vision.pdf Marg], [http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ&q=Huxley&pgis=1#search Pollack], Gardner, [http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,884800,00.html Time]
*Margaret Darst Corbett - [http://brain.berkeley.edu/pub/1952%20April%20Flashes%20of%20Clear%20Vision.pdf Marg], [http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ&q=Corbett&pgis=1#search Pollack], Gardner
*Harold Peppard - [http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ&q=Peppard&pgis=1#search Pollack], [http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,884800,00.html Time]
*Clara Hackett - [http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ&q=Hackett&pgis=1#search Pollack], Gardner
*Emily Bates - [http://books.google.com/books?id=yJesAAAAIAAJ&q=Emily&pgis=1#search Pollack], Gardner, [http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,884800,00.html Time]
02:56, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

==Books==
Modern Bates method :

Thomas Quackenbush 2 books Relearning to See and Better Eyesight the complete magazines of W.H. Bates. Bates method and Natural Eyesight Improvement. ( See the back covers. ) Also called the bates metod of NVI on the back cover of the Better Eyesight magazines.

Relearning to See, Thomas Quackenbush :
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #13,998

Better eyesight the complete magazines of W.H. Bates edited by T.R. Quackenbush : Amazon.com Sales Rank: #205,877

Improve your vision without glasses or contactlenses. See clearly method book ! improve vision naturally. 20 exercises. Vision therapy. Better eyesight. Speedy
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #38,564
Seeyou’s comment : Important note Bates method is not mentioned at all !
The See clearly method is labelled Vision therapy. See [[Vision therapy]]:


Margaret D. Corbett
Eye education based on the Bates method
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #149,164

Classic Bates method :
The Bates method for better eyesight. W.H. Bates own updated version.
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #170,575

Jonathan Barnes book also presents the bates method for today. See the back cover.
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #512,656

Clara Hacket Better Vision Now: Improve Your Sight with the Renowned Bates Method
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #831,286

Peter Mansfield : the Bates method
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #1,012,569

Jacob Liberman : Take of your glasses and See : holistic vision care
Amazon.com Sales Rank: #286,510 [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:14, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

== Dead-end ==

I just loved the new idea from "Writer Alan M. MacRobert":
*"If palming, shifting, and swinging could really cure poor eyesight, glasses would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
*"If cleaning and flossing the teeth could really prevent tooth decay, fillings and dentures would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
*"If sensible diet and exercise could really cure weight problems, obesity would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
*"If prudent financial management could really cure debt, bankruptcy would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."
*"If education could really cure poor logic, ridiculous arguments would be as obsolete by now as horse-drawn carriages."

If this really is the "most telling argument against the Bates system" I would conclude that the case for the Bates system had been conclusively made. But keep it in! The article needs some comic relief, and this sort of desperate daftness cheers me up and makes me laugh. [[User:SamuelTheGhost|SamuelTheGhost]] ([[User talk:SamuelTheGhost|talk]]) 11:12, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

:I agree with you. I was just thinking of Ronz's now archived comment that "''scientific/medical/etc dead-ends need to be presented as such''". I considered finding a pro-Bates source which responds to that line of reasoning, but I'm fairly certain that any such reference would get reverted. As it is, enough readers will see through MacRobert's logic. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 17:01, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

== Information of questionable importance ==

Regarding the [[Bates method#Ophthalmological research|Ophthalmological research]] section, I don't understand why the 1946 Woods study should be singled out for mention here. The AAO review gives no details of what the employed "optometric training technique" was, and it's not clear whether Woods even claimed to be testing the Bates method. And it certainly couldn't have involved the "Bates method of Natural Vision Improvement" (as Seeyou terms it), as that had not yet evolved in 1946. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:39, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
: This article is about the Bates method which is equal to Natural vision improvement ( Doug Marsh ) and it is about the Bates method which is part of Natural vision improvement ( Janet Goodrich ). These are the facts according to the referenced sources. The AAO reference is about the scientific research on the subject of these article. Natural Vision Improvement. So wery essential and important and logical information fot the public. Simply remember PSWG1920 this article should provide objective neutral information for the public. You can't ignore what advocates of NVI state. You can't ignore what skeptics state and you can't ignore what ophthalmology / science states. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:15, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
:: Citing the AAO review is fine. But why should we single out the 1946 Woods study for discussion in the article? [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 10:50, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
::: Very simple PSWG1920. Because there is at this moment not one single reliable source presenting succes in improving eyesight naturally. This source is reliable. The American Academy of ophthalmology could easily have skipped the presentation of the Woods research. They did not ! It also indicates and signals the testimonials about succesfully improving eyesight might be very interesting for furher investigation and research for real researchers and the public with an open mind. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 14:14, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
:::: "''Because there is at this moment not one single reliable source presenting succes in improving eyesight naturally.''" Not true. Check the [[Bates_method#Biofeedback_training|Biofeedback Training]] section. And unlike with the Woods study, we at least know the basic technique used there. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 17:10, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::Your argument is very invalid. You can't compare biofeedbacktraining with ophthalmogical research. You are comparing pseudoscience with science ! The source is Ophthalmology ! What they say about NVI is very important. They are the autthority on this subject ! AAO is the only reliable source presenting succes in NVI.[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:41, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::The AAO review discusses several studies. If we're going to basically repeat their summary of Woods, why not do the same for all the others? Now, it's fine to state what the AAO's overall conclusions are, as the first two paragraphs of the [[Bates method#Ophthalmological research|Ophthalmological research]] section do. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:29, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::: Listing them all seems a bit much. Cherry-picking one is problematic because of [[WP:UNDUE]] and [[WP:SYN]]. I've reverted the edits by Seeyou accordingly.
::::::: What RfC is Seeyou referring to?--[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 23:20, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
:::::::: It seems like it must be [[#American_Academy_of_Ophthalmology|this one]]. However, that principally addressed the question of whether the AAO review should be in the external links, which is not the issue here.
:::::::: I do agree with you here, I was just pointing out why the specific discussion of the Woods study probably doesn't belong in this article. Now, if we had more details that could clearly connect it to a subtopic already in the article, that might change. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 23:57, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
::::::::: I will maka a summary. And ask other editors with an RFC what their objective opinion is regarding more than one issue of this article. Any suggestions on how to get more really objective editors involved. Choosing complete new editors wouldn't be very logical. I am also thinking about giving weight to arguments or neglecting fake-arguments. With some algebra it will be much easier to really improve this article. Have a nice day. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:41, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
::::::::::I agree that it is well established that the Bates method has not been proven by a single scientific study, and that this must not be submerged.--[[User:Stetsonharry|Stetsonharry]] ([[User talk:Stetsonharry|talk]]) 21:52, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
::::::::::: The goal of this article is not to prove the BM. The goal of this article is to provide facts by reliable sources about Natural Vision improvement. ( See the discussion about the title ).The public reading this article may conclude their own conclusion. If this article only provides the opinion of skeptic wikdipedia editors it is a sick article and will never reach A quality. Current fact at this moment : The only available definition is removed. So this article is ... [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 17:41, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::::: Regarding the "only available definition", see my latest comment [[#Quote_A_The_only_available_definition|above]]. The current article '''is''' A quality in my opinion, and steadily approaching A+. We just need a thorough review by a neutral party. Wouldn't it be great if this were the [[WP:FA|featured article]] of Bates' next birthday, [[December 23]]? [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 23:24, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

I have rewritten the section to reflect what the AAO review seems to be saying overall, without cherry-picking from what they cite. And if the section is allowed to remain in current form, then the "relevance/importance" tag is no longer needed in my opinion. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:01, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

== Positive independent source? ==

I just found what would seem to be an independent source which takes a positive view of the Bates method, [http://books.google.com/books?id=-Tr7WZd_GwQC&q=Bates#search here]. Not sure yet how it could be used in this article. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 18:34, 2 October 2008 (UTC).
: Sorry PSWG1920 not very impressive. And very weak when yoo compare it with Woods research.
:( Which is presented by a reliable authority source of the subject ).Famousdog would say Pseudoscience. And he, she, [[Maradonna]] or [[ophthalmology]] would be right. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:51, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
In my opinion the book pages linked to above are much more relevant to the article than are the vague details we have about the Woods research. I can see three places this source could perhaps be used: the "Bates' treatments" section, the "Ophthalmological Research" section, or the "Dead-end" subsection. It focuses on the subtlely of the Bates method and why it would be difficult to do a formal scientific test. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 00:57, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
: Think positve PSWG1920 Elwin Marg report is fully available. Why can't Woods report by fully available in future. Maybe with a little help from a objective party. Woods report is by far the most reliable and proffesional source of positive results. A child can see this is true ! [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 19:59, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
:: Yes, it would be nice to see the actual Woods report. To find out about the "optometric training technique" used and to get a more clear indication as to whether the noted improvement in eyesight was seen as objective or subjective. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:14, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
::: It would be very nice if opthalmology would start to be really co-operative regarding this article. By keeping the woods article in place. Resulting in questions of the public towards ophthalmology worldwide. Things might slowly change. Do you add the woods information or do you want me to re-add it ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 08:53, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

== Second Generation Bates versus Classic Bates method ==

In my opinion the title above is an improvement when you compare it with the current afer bates section. And argument : It is based on a source not just on the opinion of wikipedia editor !
See also :
* http://www.i-see.org/vision_books.html
[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 17:55, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
:I disagree. That would almost certainly not be considered a [[WP:RS|reliable source]]. "After Bates" is the simplest, best title I can think of for that section. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:07, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

== Biofeedback training ==

The [[Bates method#Biofeedback training|Biofeedback training]] subsection needs to be worked on. Contrary to what is stated, the "''Treating myopia with acoustic biofeedback''" source does not appear to be a general review of research in this area, and the "''have been rare and contradictory''" quote appears to be used out of context. I think the section is worth trying to improve as there are definitely good sources, but I suppose it could be deleted as off-topic. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

:In my opinion the essential information therein is now also in the main "Ophthalmological Research" section. So I'm going to delete the Biofeedback Training subsection but list the sources here with citations for use in a potential rewrite.

:<nowiki><ref name=Randle>{{cite journal | author=Randle RJ | title=Responses of myopes to volitional control training of accommodation | journal=Ophthalmic Physiol Opt | volume=8 | pages=333–340 | year=1988 | url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/sites/entrez?db=pubmed&uid=3269512&cmd=showdetailview&indexed=google}}</ref> </nowiki>
:<nowiki><ref name=Gallaway>{{cite journal | author=Gallaway M, Pearls SM, Winkelstein AM, et al. | title=Biofeedback training of visual acuity and myopia: A pilot study | journal=Am J Optom Physiol Opt | volume=64 | pages=62–71 | year=1987 | url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/3826280}}</ref></nowiki>
:<nowiki><ref name=Koslowe>{{cite journal | author=Koslowe KC, Spierer A, Rosner M, et al. | title=Evaluation of accommotrac biofeedback training for myopia control | journal=Optom Vis Sci | volume=68 | year=1991 | pages=252–4 | url=http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/sites/entrez?db=pubmed&list_uids=1852394&cmd=Retrieve&indexed=google}}</ref> </nowiki>
:<nowiki><ref name=Rupolo>{{cite journal | author=G Rupolo, M Angi, E Sabbadin, S Caucci, E Pilotto, E Racano and C de Bertolini | journal=Psychosomatic Medicine | volume=59 | issue=3 | pages=313–317 | year=1997 | title=Treating myopia with acoustic biofeedback: a prospective study on the evolution of visual acuity and psychological distress | url=http://www.psychosomaticmedicine.org/cgi/reprint/59/3/313.pdf | format = [[PDF]] }}</ref></nowiki>
:[[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:40, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

== Article images? ==

I was thinking that photos from Bates' book of individuals [http://www.central-fixation.com/perfect-sight-without-glasses/chapter-12.php palming] and [http://www.central-fixation.com/perfect-sight-without-glasses/chapter-17.php sungazing] could perhaps be added to the respective sections. I have no experience with adding images to wikipedia, however, so it would be helpful if someone else could do it, if indeed the consensus is for including them. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 18:29, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
: The sungazing picture would result in a safety issue. That is also the logical reason why in the second generation books about the Bates method / Natural Vision Improvement you won't find any open eyelidsunning. Do you know any other book besides PSWG which speaks about open eyelid sunning. Anyway Bates was very clear about this subject in his later Better Eyesight magazine.

::<blockquote> Sunning : Let the sun shine on your closed eyelids for short intervals. Choose preferably the early morning sunlight. It is the light rays which benefit the eyes rather than the heat rays. The sun loses some of its effect when it comes through glass.<ref>{{cite book | last = Quackenbush | first = Thomas R. | title = Better Eyesight: The Complete Magazines of William H. Bates | publisher = North Atlantic Books | date = 2000 | pages = page 299 | isbn = 1-55643-351-4 |url = http://books.google.com/books?id=ufOSikwYsrwC&printsec=frontcover#PPA299,M1}}</ref></blockquote>

:::I added this info not everybody reading this will scan the archive.
:::If he still was convinced open eyelid sunning was without danger. He would have spoken about it in his later publications !!
:::About the palming image. Are there any other wikipedia articles which use images ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:00, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

::::Yes, for example the [[William Bates]] article includes an image of Dr. Bates. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:06, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
:::: I meant controversial articles showing a certain technique with an image. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
:::::I don't know. We should ask someone with more experience in editing controversial articles. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 23:48, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

== RFC nr : 3 removal of Woods research results ==

The following information has been present for a while in the article paragraph ophthalmological research, but has been removed recently.

A 1946 study reported that out of 103 patients, 30 showed a "small improvement" in subjective [[visual acuity]], 31 showed "inconsistent improvements", 32 had no change, while 10 demonstrated a worsening of acuity after visual training. Of the 61 total patients who demonstrated any improvement, 17 returned for a five-month follow-up, where it was found that two had maintained this improvement, while the other 15 had not.<ref name=Woods>{{cite journal | author=Woods AC. | title=Report from the Wilmer Institute on the results obtained in the treatment of myopia by visual training | journal=Am J Ophthalmol | year=1946 | volume=29 | pages=28–57}}</ref>

The reference link : * http://one.aao.org/CE/PracticeGuidelines/Therapy_Content.aspx?cid=d7238b2b-a59f-49f6-9f30-64d1e84efc3b


I personally totally disagree with this removal, since it is the only reliable succes story about Natural vision improvement currently available at this moment.

Argument to re-add this info:

* It is ophthalmology who presents it, the authority !
* It must be scientific otherwise it would not be presented.
* They could very easy not reported it at all. They do report it !
* It is clear and objective presented.
* It is unique information especially for this article since it is about a controversial subject.
* There are no other reliable sources currently available or present.
* In future the woods report might become available. ( Just like Elwin Margs skeptic report. )
* The public has the right to know about this information.


argument for removal :
* There are no details available about the woods report.
: Seeyous comment : Not an argument, by leaving this info in the article the details might become available in future. The details are the responsibility of AOO. They are the authority who should make the possibility or impossibility regarding improving eyesight clear.
The other arguments I do not understand. Biofeedbacktraning and a certain book.[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

::Again, if we're going to basically repeat what the AAO report says about Woods, why not do the same for '''every''' study they discuss? As it is, the [[Bates method#Ophthalmological research|Ophthalmological research]] section now reports that improvement was found by some studies, but that, as AAO says, it was seen as ''subjective'' rather than objective. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:38, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
::: Where exactly did you read the woods results were subjective. Which alinea and line ? [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:05, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
::::Conclusions:<blockquote>There is level I evidence that visual training for control of accommodation has no effect on myopia. In other studies (level II/III evidence), an improvement in subjective visual acuity for patients with myopia who have undertaken visual training has been shown but no corresponding physiological cause for the improvement has been demonstrated. The improvements in myopic patients noted in these studies have been postulated to be due to improvements in interpreting blurred images, changes in mood or motivation, creation of an artificial contact lens by tear film changes, or a pinhole effect from miosis of the pupil.</blockquote> Nothing is specifically stated about whether Woods saw the improvement as objective or subjective, but it is clear that the AAO saw it as subjective. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 21:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
::::: I do not read this conclusion is for the Woods report. This is a general conclusion. If the woods results are really subjective the would n't have been mentioned as results ! If eyesight can be made worse it can also be improved. ( For example by doing the opposite ) [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

Seeyou is misrepresenting previous discussions on the matter. I see no need to repeat past discussions if Seeyou is going to ignore and misrepresent them. --[[User:Ronz|Ronz]] ([[User talk:Ronz|talk]]) 00:02, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
: Ronz look at the presented arguments. There is totally no discussion taking place. The only way to really improve this article is to invite other hopefully objective editors to give their opinion.[[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:01, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

::Just to be clear for all users, after the [[#Information_of_questionable_importance|previous discussion]] regarding this, I added the sentence "''While some of the reviewed studies did report improvements in the visual acuity of myopes, these were seen as subjective rather than objective gains, perhaps resulting from a learned ability to interpret blurred images, or other factors detailed below.''" Which communicates the AAO report's conclusions without cherry-picking from the studies they examine. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 03:33, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
::: I have got the strong feeling you are defending ophthalmology. Not really scientific to assume subjective results. We need the details of the Woods report. By keeping the Woods report in the article they might become available. It depends on ophthalmology to make this really clear. By the way the way the woods report also mentions negative results. These results are also interesting. If eyesight can be made worse it can also be improved. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 21:01, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
:::: I'm not defending ophthalmology. I'm trying to follow [[WP:DUE|due weight]] here. The AAO believes that the changes were subjective, so this article should reflect that. Are you suggesting that keeping the discussion of the Woods report here will cause it to appear online? That seems unlikely. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 04:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
::::: Let's invite other editors to give their opinion and arguments regarding RFC nr:1, RFC nr:2 and RFC nr:3. [[User:Seeyou|Seeyou]] ([[User talk:Seeyou|talk]]) 20:18, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
:::::: I would advise any such users to first take a look at the AAO article which is the source of this information. [[User:PSWG1920|PSWG1920]] ([[User talk:PSWG1920|talk]]) 20:50, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

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How is the extent of a group's entry into the "mainstream" to be measured?

How is the extent of a group's entry into the "mainstream" to be measured? John, you have sought to balance the fact that cult groups are concerned about the JA against what is only really an unsubstantiated claim that you have entered the charismatic mainstream. Even if others have claimed as much, how is acceptance into the mainstream measured? Allusion has been made to membership of the Evangelical Alliance, but my understanding is that membership of the alliance does not imply acceptability, but merely that members ascribe to basic tenets of faith accepted by evangelical Christians. My understanding is that the EA make clear that they do not police people's belief systems or practices, but just act as an umbrella group for members; that if it ever implied respectability for members in the past, that certainly is not its role now. Should membership, in itself, be used as a measure, then? And what proportion of evangelicals are charismatic or regard charismaticism with the mainstream; and more widely, what proportion of Christians in the UK generally would regard evangelicalism as a measure of respectability?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 19:39, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

John, if you want to set your mainstreamness against your being thought of as a cult by some, how are we to measure the extent to which you are in the mainstream at all? And beyond the limits of christendom, couldn't it be argued that your being thought a cult is a secular opinion (except in the case of Reachout) which must be set against the views of other non-Christians? How will their approval be measured?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 19:39, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I cited a WP:RS and quoted what the author had to say. See the footnote: 'Hunt in Pneuma, p. 24: "marked by ... the entry of the Jesus Fellowship into the charismatic mainstream"'. That is what Wikipedia is about after all, not my or your WP:OR John Campbell (talk) 08:30, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Who is Hunt, what measures did he use for determining whether or not you are mainstream; what authority does he have, and did he interview elders of the church and take it from you that you are mainstream? I mean, take an example we both know: Stanley Jebb's article had lots of phrases which he presumably thought were his own, but which were actually in Jesus Fellowship vernacular already, like the thing about churches not wanting to be judged by the attitudes of its ex-members, etc. It was undoubtedly a sincere article, but it could have been written by a fellowship member.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:16, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think my answer above deals with the key point and says all that needed to be said. The article by Stephen J. Hunt has already been accepted as a Reliable Source. John Campbell (talk) 08:40, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Hunt was accepted as a reliable source for another point being made. He was not accepted as an authority on whether you are a mainstream church or not. Did Hunt's book/article cite references to back his claim that you were part of the mainstream, or was he just expressing his personal opinion? (I see you couldn't resist reminding me what a reliable source is. Pity)Bristol Sycamore (talk) 18:11, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I also linked to Stephen J. Hunt's article on Wikipedia in response to your request. You are not the only person reading these Talk pages now or in the future, and the links exist for the sake of us all. John Campbell (talk) 08:55, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, it was very useful. I have written to him asking if I could possibly have a copy of his article and asking if he wouldn't mind telling us what objective basis he had for determining the extent of your mainstreamness. I have also been talking to Ian Haworth who is having a think about how best to reference the CIC's listing of the JA as a cult. He suggested that a different way to approach the matter might be for a group which now speaks of having left its cultic image far behind to explain to the wider world the reforms it felt it necessary to make in order to find greater acceptance. I suppose it demonstrates a group's willingness to be open if it is willing to admit its past mistakes. That is something that was touched upon in the article when you said that you no longer practice corporal punishment, for instance. Would the JA be willing to detail its reforms in order to demonstrate its greater openness and put to rest any suggestion that it is a cult? Bristol Sycamore (talk) 16:14, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think we can here within the contraints of Wikipedia, nor indeed can you do a great deal with whatever Stephen Hunt sends to you, for reasons which you would rather I didn't spell out. We have to rely on what others have already published. John Campbell (talk) 16:33, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That sounds a bit ominous. Why wouldn't I want it spelt out? If you mean that Hunt's impressions of you were favourable, is that a problem? My impressions of you have been favourable too in the past, the JA is a radical people and bound to impress people. As Hunt is your source, though, why do we need to seek another one? If his comments to me favour you and support your claim to mainstreamness, I will accept him as a source, as long as it is clear that he has some objective way of measuring your respectability within the church, which as an academic interested in pentecostalism, I presume he does?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 16:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'd have thought that in the context of the article, where you say that since your earlier history of being regarded as a cult you have reformed, you could very easily show the extent of the change to being a respected church, by briefly detailing the reforms. I can't see what wiki constraints would stand in your way of being open as a church; and I am confident that whatever openness there has been to others has been accompanied by an article in the Christian press about how your respectability has come about?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:02, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I keep coming back in my mind to you saying that we need another source other than the one you suggested, Stephen Hunt; that nothing he sends me is likely to be useful. He was YOUR reference. but the trouble is that his article is not publically available. Unless he sends me a copy, there is no way of verifying it. Why, when he has been your source for so long, do you now seem to feel he is no longer sufficient for the purpose? What is he going to send me?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:23, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
What I was trying to avoid saying, for your sake, is that what you are attempting to engage in is WP:OR. We are limited to working with WP:RS, such as already-published scholarly articles and books. Hunt's article is fine; the article that I said wouldn't make the point you wanted was the BBC one, due to its date being before the Jesus Army rejoined the EA. I was as even-handed as I know how with the sources, and the text we agreed previously was virtually at the limits of what has already be published in that area. I can't write just what I want to say in this article any more than you can. John Campbell (talk) 17:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I see what you are saying, John, but I am not looking to express my views as original research on this. I have asked Stephen Hunt to give me a copy of the article you cited because it is not otherwise available and I want to read it and see what he said, so that, like you, I can use it, if relevant, to support the idea of your church now being more mainstream. According to his Wiki article he is an authority on pentecostalism, so presumably knows the best measures of what makes a church part of the mainstream of charismaticism in this country. The irony is that while whatever he has written is doubtless Original Research, it is allowed. If the article you cited does not serve the purpose, I have asked if he can suggest anything else he has had published which might serve the purpose. Hard to see how you could object to that. Bristol Sycamore (talk) 18:17, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That sounds perfectly sound. John Campbell (talk) 08:41, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Good, then I think we can work together on this. I will let you know what Stephen Hunt says/sends.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:24, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Please could you stop preaching at me

John, I wonder if you could possibly talk to me without quoting wikipedia rules at me. It strikes me as deliberately provocative. And quite honestly it is also rather rude and unnecessary. If I get lost, I will ask the way or read up on the rules myself. But the way you do it is not designed to help me, but rather to win arguments...and to do so by bringing your dad with you. That is not the way to win with me. I respond to civility. For someone who would doubtless rather I just went away, and who knows I would dearly like to, your tactics strike me as counter-productive. If you needle me, which I am quite certain quoting wiki is all about, I am bound to stick around; it is in my bloody-minded nature. Others may read civility in your words, but your tone is frankly insolent. You will say that I am no better, of course. But at least I do not preach at you with every posting. And you are not in an insecure position because the consensus here is made up of pro-JA people.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:30, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If you wish I would go away, stop giving me so much reason to stay. I don't go away when I am bullied, I become more determined to stand my ground.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:30, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry if that's how you see it. You asked a perfectly reasonable question above and I gave a perfectly reasonable answer. John —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.193.195.197 (talk) 18:12, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Are you willing to give me perfectly reasonable answers that don't include links to guidelines which both of us are perfectly well aware of? Now that you are aware that it strikes me as provocative, can I assume you will do your best to avoid it?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 20:48, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The problem is that the answer I gave above hinged on the need to utilise Reliable Sources and avoid Original Research. Personally, I find your approach both rude and bullying. John Campbell (talk) 08:44, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Perceptions are a funny thing. How can I bully you, John, when I am clearly in the minority here and when I know that no edit I make to the article will be allowed to stand? I don't think I do badly when it comes to being pleasant to everyone here, considering that whatever the claims to fairness, you not only over-rule every suggestion I make but also change things I write in the discussion and accuse me of vandalism or tendentious editing when I just happen to disagree with you.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:48, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
And not to mention manipulative. Aren't we are all here to see this article improved to the best it can be? We can only do that within the rules of wiki so what does it matter if someone is quoting them, after all 'assuming good faith' seems to be quoted often enough. Lets keep focused on the balance of things in line with the rules.Manicpixie (talk) 10:09, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
How do I manipulate you, Manic? What possible influence do I have when I am a minority here, beyond the fact that I know rather more about the JA than some of you would wish? What you have to decide between you is whether you really want to deal with me as amicably as possible or whether you want me to feel provoked. I am pointing out that repeatedly quoting the same rules as if you think of me as a law-breaker who must be repeatedly rebuked, is just plain rude and unlikely to make the discussion a smooth one. I have more than proved that I can work with others to improve the article, as when we negotiated the now largely stable article (you may find it useful to read the archived negotiations before you judge me too easily, ManicPixie). It was only when largely pro-JA editors started undoing the work or suggesting/making edits which unbalanced the article in the JA's favour that I felt the need to consider edits which would redress the balance (or at least anticipate some edits which might later be used if the article becomes too pro-JA). I am not going away, so you decide whether you want war or a respectful exchange.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:48, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If we are going to have a respectful exchange you will stop accusing me of being a bully, manipulative, of tendentious editing, vandalism, mischief etc. I am just as committed as anyone else here to making the article fair. I have never added anything to it without raising it here first, though I would be within my rights to do so. Nothing will be gained by painting me as a bad guy who wants to break the rules. I do not always agree with them, but I have always been constrained by them and I am quite sure I would have been censured by admin if that had not been the case. You are right that I have repeatedly referred to the need to assume good faith, but the simple fact is that your accusations, all of which are quite unfounded, seem designed to either blacken my image on here or to bully me into not coming back here. Above all, they are not about treating me with the respect wikipedia says is due to us all. What you will find, however, is that I have used plain English when asking for respect, rather than providing links; the latter always strikes me as rude because I know you already know the rules and don't need me to tell you where they are.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 18:02, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Jesus Centre (Creative Workshop Drama)

Creative workshop (Drama) is one of the groups running at the Northampton Jesus Centre. Since going I have found confidance and developed many friends. It's also helped with my speech as I have tended not to be clear in talking. Drama is not the only group running there is prayer support in the healing rays group, friend ship in the scrabble group expressive art does not matter if your not too good at drawing and so many more groups. Northampton is just one of many Jesus Centres helping people. There are centres such as these in London and Coventry.

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range of views - citation needed

Which part of the edit that you wrote, John, do you feel is unsourced? Are you referring to the inclusion of the JA in the list of NRMs and cults which are of concern to the Cult Information Centre? If so, why cannot the online list itself be provided as a primary source? It seems perverse to look for a secondary source which confirms the existence of a primary source, when we have the primary source readily available. Providing the source does not give it intrinsic worth. You are saying that there is a range of views; it is a subjective matter whether one agrees with one or the other. We are not saying that CIC's list is a good one, only that it exists and represents one POV.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 18:41, 7 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have heard back from Stephen Hunt who is looking out a copy of his Pneuma article and we have corresponded a bit about your mainstreamness. I am more in the picture now, but until the article comes, I will not feel on an equal footing with you - to fairly assess its content...unless you are willing or able to provide a PDF link to the entire article, so that we can all see it? It is unfortunate that the citation you provide is not readily availableBristol Sycamore (talk) 18:41, 7 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Use of secondary sources is a key part of Wikipedia. The stance of Wikipedia, which springs from academe, is that reputation counts. A researcher with a history of published articles on a subject is more likely to be careful with their statements than will someone with no reputation to lose, as well as having a greater background knowledge of the subject and an understanding of the proper techniques of research. The worth of the article stems from the reputation of the author. Like any other academic article, the Hunt article is available in academic libraries, or from the publisher. However, here is a link to a transcript of Hunt's article. Personally, I'm inclined to take out that sentence in its entirety. John Campbell (talk) 08:30, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, will look at the transcripts. I understand the need for the Pneuma citation, of course, but I can't see why we need a secondary source to confirm the existence of a primary source for the CIC list. It seems perverse. The implication seems to be that without someone academic saying that the primary source exists, you can say that it doesn't. I do not think that you are saying that the CIC list does not exist, are you, and that being the case, surely it is not in dispute? Naturally, you would rather it didn't exist, but that isn't the same thing, is it?Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:28, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I can't keep saying the same thing over and over again. Wikipedia is based on secondary sources as they a viewed as reliable indicators of notability and balance. For example, without a secondary assessment of CIC's view you cannot tell if others consider it an extreme minority viewpoint. In other fields, primary sources have primacy, but Wikipedia has decided that as its editors are of unknown qualification we must depend on the assessment of others via secondary sources. It's not an issue of what I am saying, but of Wikipedia's basis. John Campbell (talk) 08:16, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That strikes me as a very convenient way of suppressing the existence of evidence which shows you in a bad light. By analogy, if the Law worked that way, the existence of a dead body with a knife in its back could be suppressed if there was no academic paper which claimed that a body with a knife in its back had been found. It is an absurd application of the Wiki rule, which is about the credibility of a source. We are not saying that the CIC is a credible or even a balanced or impartial group. We are only saying that it exists and that it lists the JA as a group about which it is concerned. It seems weasly to try to suggest otherwise, or indeed to suggest that wikipedia rules make it impossible to say it.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:45, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
And while you and I am others here are of unknown qualification, the existence of the list can be proved unequivocally by simply linking to it.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 17:48, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Existence of that list doesn't make it academically acceptable according to the ethos of what wiki is about, it is wiki that says we need a secondary source for it to be acceptable not anyone that is showing an interest in this article. What I don't get Peter is that just today I've seen you going on about 'keeping to the rules' elsewhere so what is the problem about keeping the rules here? If that list was to be allowed without a secondary source how much more could be allowed that you'd object to?Manicpixie (talk) 19:44, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Rather too convenient, it just seems to me. Ah well, I am close to giving up with this particular citation. I can always link to the archive here on my blog and let others decide about your position. I think they may well feel as I do that wiki rules are less what you are concerned about than the reputation of the JA and a desire to exclude any reference in the article to the fact that anti-cult groups regard yours as one. After all, if we let the edits stand and used the link to the primary source stand as the citation, I wonder how many mods would come and tell us to get rid of it. Bristol Sycamore (talk) 21:40, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You misunderstand me if you think of me as someone who believes in obeying rules religiously, manicpixie. I have never been a sheepish type. I believe that rules need to make sense, or else they should be challenged and, if you are willing to accept the consequences, even disobeyed or ignored. It would be impolitic for me to ignore wiki rules, because I wish to continue to have a voice here, but I do think that if you are right that they can be used to suppress evidence which can plainly be seen by anyone who knows where to look, they are as idiotic as the emperor's new clothes. In this particular case, the emperor is quite plainly naked as the day he was born, but if you and John are right in your interpretation of wiki rules, they will allow you to pretend that he is beautifully clothed. Ah well, there is more than one way to skin a cat.Bristol Sycamore (talk) 22:15, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The use of secondary sources is fundamental to Wikipedia. In this case, the issue is one of notability and the reliability and balance of academic (secondary) sources. John Campbell (talk) 08:33, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Multiply Christian Network

During the edit process we lost all reference to the Multiply Christian Network without discussion. I think it was intended to move it to elsewhere in the article but that didn't happen. There are Wikilinks from elsewhere to this article that reference Multiply, so we ought to mention it somehow. William Kay states that it is notable: "The Army is noted for ... its linkage with more than 40 other independent Christian churches in the Multiply Network." (William Kay in C. Partridge (ed), Encyclopedia of New Religions, a Guide (Oxford: Lion Publishing, 2004).) Another reference to Multiply is idea (Evangelical Alliance magazine), May 1999: "... Multiply Christian Network, which links more than 30 churches in England and Wales with others abroad. Multiply was initiated in 1992 by the Jesus Fellowship Church." Since the date of those two articles the number of groups has grown to around 250[1]. The article used to say: "The Jesus Fellowship is also linked to other churches and groups in the UK and elsewhere through the Multiply Christian Network." which is probably the minimum that is usable. John Campbell (talk) 08:55, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]