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13. Januar 2015
- 12:1112:11, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.441 Paul Frees →Death: What can I say? Copywriting suggestions. Hope they're okay. (In particular, I suggest referring to "his body" rather than the person by name, which seems morose.)
- 12:0812:08, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.453 Paul Frees →Legacy: (1.) This was a well-written section. Having worked 15 or so years for Disney, though, I felt I could contribute to it. (b.) I've suggested starting a new paragraph for a new topic.
- 12:0412:04, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.550 K Paul Frees →Other credits: "final ending" is redundant; suggested mentioning the film first that's actually referred to; removed "The" from 2nd film's actual title.
- 12:0212:02, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.562 K Paul Frees →Other credits: (¶ 1) This seems to flow better. (¶ 2) "on-camera" is a hyphenated adverb; punctuation refinements. (¶ 3) Minor refinements; voices don't "appear", they are "heard"; "ambassador" is used generically here, so not capitalized.
- 11:5411:54, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.596 K Paul Frees sound alike -> sound-alike
- 11:5411:54, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.596 K Paul Frees →George Pal: This seems more consistent with the other section titles, and with WP format in general.
- 11:5311:53, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.586 K Paul Frees →George Pal: It seems more cohesive to divide the paragraphs this way.
- 11:5111:51, 13. Jan. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +14.590 K Paul Frees →Disney: Simplified syntax.
21. November 2014
- 09:2309:23, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +14.974 Left Behind (2014) →Plot
- 09:1909:19, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.021 K Left Behind (2014) removed word
- 09:1909:19, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.029 K Left Behind (2014) driver-less -> driverless
- 09:1909:19, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.030 K Left Behind (2014) Soon, mayhem breaks loose, -> Mayhem breaks loose
- 09:1809:18, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.037 K Left Behind (2014) event has occurred -> thing has happened
- 09:1809:18, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.037 K Left Behind (2014) had been -> was
- 09:1809:18, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.042 K Left Behind (2014) extra-marital -> extramarital
- 09:1809:18, 21. Nov. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +15.043 K Left Behind (2014) hard to get -> hard-to-get
29. April 2014
- 10:0610:06, 29. Apr. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +471 Benutzer Diskussion:MichaelSchoenitzer/QuickWikiEditor Keine Bearbeitungszusammenfassung
29. September 2012
- 11:4311:43, 29. Sep. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Nomenklatur (Astronomie) →Names of supernovae: It's common practice to use square brackets to parenthesize stuff within parentheses.