Benutzerbeiträge von „Coastside“

8. Januar 2019

• 10:5010:50, 8. Jan. 2019 Unterschied Versionen +452‎ Benutzer:Engi25/Geschäftsplan Modell ‎ →‎Description: added Cost Structure anchor

6. November 2013

• 02:3702:37, 6. Nov. 2013 Unterschied Versionen −126‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction: inaccurate prediction of accolades by lesser known source is not a representative reaction - already have Nader and Greenpeace so this is superfluous to those comments
• 02:2902:29, 6. Nov. 2013 Unterschied Versionen +32‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction: dead link

1. August 2012

• 00:3900:39, 1. Aug. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +119.021‎ Goldplatten ‎ link only to first reference of Emma Smith

10. Juli 2012

• 20:1320:13, 10. Jul. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +20‎ The Thieves ‎ →‎External links: link to Daum Communications

3. Juli 2012

• 08:2908:29, 3. Jul. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +13‎ Langobardenreich ‎ →‎The final settlement: Autari, Agilulf and Theudelinda: link to Este Veneto

2. Juli 2012

• 15:1615:16, 2. Jul. 2012 Unterschied Versionen +5‎ Keystone (South Dakota) ‎ updated link to North

29. Mai 2012

• 16:4516:45, 29. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen −44‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: removed superfluous reference for for Taylor Morrisey, since the citation is sufficient
• 11:4211:42, 29. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen −14‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Undid revision 494924509 by Coastside (talk)
• 11:4111:41, 29. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen +14‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Undid revision 494924176 by Coastside (talk)
• 11:4111:41, 29. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen 0‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Bibliography: corrected spelling of author "Taylor"
• 11:3811:38, 29. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen −14‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎ removed Harris (editor) from citations (two) so that they would link to bibliography
• 11:3411:34, 29. Mai 2012 Unterschied Versionen +10‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎ added year to Harvcoltxt references (two)

23. Oktober 2009

• 19:2019:20, 23. Okt. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −38‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ updated link - page was moved

1. Oktober 2009

• 15:5615:56, 1. Okt. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −137‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Undid revision 317268761 by 123.243.38.136 (talk) POV

30. September 2009

• 18:4018:40, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −162‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction
• 18:2818:28, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +376‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction
• 16:0016:00, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +5‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ correct url in citation
• 08:1708:17, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −2‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎Keine Bearbeitungszusammenfassung
• 08:1308:13, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +4‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction: improved wording
• 08:0708:07, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +54‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: correct cit. again
• 08:0508:05, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +107‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: corrected broken citation
• 07:4507:45, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +291‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Corrected citations and clarified funders - the previous citation did not support this paragraph as written
• 07:2407:24, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −266‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ removed extraneous information about narrator - this article is about the film, not the narrator - also she has her own page so this is redundant
• 06:4306:43, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen 0‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎Keine Bearbeitungszusammenfassung
• 06:4106:41, 30. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +28‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ changed biased language (POV) "helps back up" with more neutral and factual language - critics disagree that these refs "back up" her assertions

29. September 2009

• 19:0119:01, 29. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +1‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction
• 19:0019:00, 29. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −1‎ K The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction
• 18:5818:58, 29. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −24‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction: removed extraneous detail on Glenn Beck - readers can click his link if they want to know what channel he's on - also there is a separate reference for FoxNews.com article following
• 18:5618:56, 29. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +297‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction
• 18:3718:37, 29. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −5‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction: took out "also" since this is not grammatical here
• 04:1604:16, 29. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +12‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ no way post-graduate economics classes are using this film to learn about economics - I'm calling BS on this

28. September 2009

• 21:2421:24, 28. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +215‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ added descriptor "polemical" with ref - as per NYT Learning Network "The Story of Stuff" is a polemic"
• 05:3705:37, 28. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +9‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: Added "American" - the video very clearly singles out the United States, and uses language such as "our", meaning Americans, and refers to political institutions int the United States
• 05:0905:09, 28. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +10‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ added "animated" to make clear that this is an animated piece, unlike most 'documentaries'
• 05:0805:08, 28. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −10‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ took out "web-based" - the organization sells DVDs so saying "web-based" is not accurate

27. September 2009

• 19:2219:22, 27. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −35‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ changed 'documentary' to 'film - it's less aggrandizing, less biased, and it's the term the storyofstuff.org site itself uses to refer to it
• 19:0619:06, 27. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −3‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Reaction: The NYT didn't call it a documentary - they used the term "video" throughout the artical - video is certainly more correct here (unless you're biased in support of the video)
• 19:0419:04, 27. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −26‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Once again removing the clear anti-american bias. Not only Americans are critical of this video. Saying only people in the U.S. are critical demonstrates clear bias.

26. September 2009

• 21:0221:02, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +4‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: add link for polemic for people who don't know what it means
• 20:4320:43, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −6‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: changed several instances of "polemic" to "video" - more neutral language, and less repetitive
• 20:2520:25, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +24‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Clarified that the school district did not ban the video - they banned use of it in the classroom
• 20:2420:24, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −18‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Restored "Critics" without singling out the United States as the only nation with people critical of this video - let's have objectivity please
• 20:2120:21, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +30‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎See also: Added reference to Polemics and to Documentary
• 20:1620:16, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −61‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Took out the biased use of the term "Documentary" - replaced with unbiased term "video"
• 19:4919:49, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −4‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Changed "goods and services" to "material goods" - There is nothing in the video about services at all, and not all goods are material - this is about consumption of material goods
• 17:0817:08, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +14‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎See also: Added reference to Polemics
• 17:0517:05, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −16‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎External links: Changed category to "Videos and DVDs" - it's not a documentary
• 17:0317:03, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −6‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ →‎Contents: changed several instances of "polemic" to "video" - more neutral language, and less repetitive
• 16:5816:58, 26. Sep. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −36‎ The Story of Stuff ‎ Changed "documentary" to "video" - it's not an unbiased documentary, it's a polemic - at least the word "video" is neutral