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::expanded lead, biography is covered by "a god-child, a prankster, a model lover, a divine hero and the Supreme Being."--[[User:Redtigerxyz|Redtigerxyz]] ([[User talk:Redtigerxyz|talk]]) 06:14, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
::expanded lead, biography is covered by "a god-child, a prankster, a model lover, a divine hero and the Supreme Being."--[[User:Redtigerxyz|Redtigerxyz]] ([[User talk:Redtigerxyz|talk]]) 06:14, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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:Great :) Congratulations with a Good Article! <font face="serif">[[User:Arsenikk|<font color="green"><strong>Arsenikk</strong></font>]] <sup>[[User_talk:Arsenikk|<font color="grey">(talk)</font>]]</sup></font> 13:44, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
:Great :) Congratulations with a Good Article! <font face="serif">[[User:Arsenikk|<font color="green"><strong>Arsenikk</strong></font>]] <sup>[[User_talk:Arsenikk|<font color="grey">(talk)</font>]]</sup></font> 13:44, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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:: Thanks.--[[User:Redtigerxyz|Redtigerxyz]] ([[User talk:Redtigerxyz|talk]]) 13:49, 13 October 2008 (UTC) |
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GA Review
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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- I would like to see the lead somewhat longer, and better summarize the article. At minimum, the biography and worship should be mentioned in a lot greater detail. The lead can be twice the current length if possible. There are a number of one- (or two-) sentence paragraphs. These should be merged with other paragraphs. I believe I have addressed this issue through my copyedit—that also fixed the MoS errors. Take a look at the diff of my edit to learn some systematic errors; these included quotes in italics, mixing of BCE/CD and BC/AD (choose one), forced image size, use of a hyphen (-) instead of an emdash (—) for punctuation, and the odd capitalization. Under the performing section, this sentence in uncomprehensable: "Kathak dancer, Shovana Narayan explores Lucknow gharana of Kathak has several performances based on Krishna's life."
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Not all the references are properly wrapped into {{cite}} templates.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- I believe the matters discussed on the talk page have been addressed.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
Thanks for the references, will take atleast 3 days to rectify.--Redtigerxyz (talk) 16:18, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Removed "Kathak dancer, Shovana Narayan explores Lucknow gharana of Kathak has several performances based on Krishna's life." as UNDUE to the artist. --Redtigerxyz (talk) 04:23, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Templates cite book, cite web, cite journal used.--Redtigerxyz (talk) 05:40, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- expanded lead, biography is covered by "a god-child, a prankster, a model lover, a divine hero and the Supreme Being."--Redtigerxyz (talk) 06:14, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Great :) Congratulations with a Good Article! Arsenikk (talk) 13:44, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks.--Redtigerxyz (talk) 13:49, 13 October 2008 (UTC)