Benutzerbeiträge von „Aquillion“

3. September 2019

• 20:4520:45, 3. Sep. 2019 Unterschied Versionen −13‎ Alec Holowka ‎ rv. for now; we need a source that says that unambiguously, which we don't have yet.

13. Februar 2017

• 22:2522:25, 13. Feb. 2017 Unterschied Versionen +1.104‎ Jasbir Puar ‎ →‎Controversy: Restoring second paragraph, since on reflection this one is fine.
• 22:1122:11, 13. Feb. 2017 Unterschied Versionen −2.176‎ Jasbir Puar ‎ rv. per WP:BLP; regardless of what the sources say, we cannot use opinion pieces to cite controversial statements about a living person.
• 22:0722:07, 13. Feb. 2017 Unterschied Versionen −1.104‎ Jasbir Puar ‎ →‎Controversy: This section is only cited to opinion pieces as well. Again, we need higher-quality sources to make such incendiary statements in a BLP; opinion pieces don't cut it.
• 22:0322:03, 13. Feb. 2017 Unterschied Versionen −1.072‎ Jasbir Puar ‎ →‎Controversy: These parts are only cited to opinion pieces, which we cannot use as a source for controversial statements about a BLP.

25. September 2015

• 07:2607:26, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −46‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: I can't find anything supporting a felony conviction. (He was initially charged with a felony in the Mary Landrieu wiretapping case, but plead to a misdemeanor; in any case it's slightly tangential.)
• 07:2407:24, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: rm. extra zero.
• 07:2307:23, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +1‎ K Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: Fix link / date
• 07:1807:18, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +300‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: Adding another ref.
• 07:1307:13, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −9‎ K Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: Another date fix
• 07:1207:12, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +23‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: Fix dates.
• 07:1107:11, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +125‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: Expanding ref.
• 07:0907:09, 25. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −68‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎ACORN undercover videos: We can't cite a blog (it fails WP:RS, since it's a WP:SPS.) Media matters might work, but it would be best to find other sources, too... adding an alternate on video's editing.

17. September 2015

• 21:2121:21, 17. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1.211‎ Ariel Fernandez ‎ Removing retracted papers sentence; this seems WP:UNDUE, especially for a WP:BLP. There's active discussions on WP:BLPN, but with BLPs we have to err on the side of caution.

28. August 2015

• 08:3408:34, 28. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +7‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ Several sources in the article refer to it as a 'conservative opinion website', so the lead has to reflect that.
• 08:2808:28, 28. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +1.367‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ rv. some parts of recent changes; the site's politics is uncontroversial and well-sourced, while the ARJ source lists two authors, only one of which is a student. Rewording a few other parts and adding one other cite.

30. Dezember 2014

• 08:5808:58, 30. Dez. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +33‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎Paul Krugman "bankruptcy" hoax from Boston.com: Noting that the posting on Boston.com was automatic.
• 08:5108:51, 30. Dez. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +5‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ →‎Paul Krugman "bankruptcy" hoax from Boston.com: This source was ultimately The Atlantic
• 08:5008:50, 30. Dez. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +1.227‎ Breitbart News Network ‎ Restoring the Krugman subsection with another ref to illustrate relevance; this has enough coverage by reliable sources that it belongs here.

16. September 2011

• 19:3719:37, 16. Sep. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +20.042‎ Cameron Todd Willingham ‎ →‎Evidence: moving this statement to the end to avoid creating an inference with the paragraph above it (if you want to make the implication that this covered evidence, you need a source that says that, not a primary source.)
• 19:3519:35, 16. Sep. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +20.043‎ Cameron Todd Willingham ‎ →‎Evidence: found it, but the text here characterizes it differently than the way it's characterized in the statement -- primary sources have to be used carefully and shouldn't be used to support your own inferences.
• 19:2719:27, 16. Sep. 2011 Unterschied Versionen +20.122‎ Cameron Todd Willingham ‎ →‎Evidence: I don't see that in the citation given.

12. August 2011

• 00:1700:17, 12. Aug. 2011 Unterschied Versionen −37‎ John List (Massenmörder) ‎ →‎Murders: the address seems to be unnecessary and slightly encyclopedic to list here.

17. Dezember 2009

• 08:4808:48, 17. Dez. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +10‎ Texas Archive War ‎ rewrite lead to avoid editorializing.

29. August 2009

• 14:5314:53, 29. Aug. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +7‎ Kindheit und Jugend auf Samoa ‎ →‎The Mead-Freeman controversy: the film only talked to two of her informants
• 14:5214:52, 29. Aug. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +20‎ Kindheit und Jugend auf Samoa ‎ →‎The Mead-Freeman controversy: he claimed
• 14:5214:52, 29. Aug. 2009 Unterschied Versionen +11‎ Kindheit und Jugend auf Samoa ‎ →‎The Mead-Freeman controversy: {{specify}} tag
• 14:5114:51, 29. Aug. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −384‎ Kindheit und Jugend auf Samoa ‎ →‎The Mead-Freeman controversy: "architects of the culture of death" is not a reliable source
• 14:4814:48, 29. Aug. 2009 Unterschied Versionen 0‎ Kindheit und Jugend auf Samoa ‎ reword for npov, moving quote to ref
• 14:3214:32, 29. Aug. 2009 Unterschied Versionen −809‎ Kindheit und Jugend auf Samoa ‎ deleting references to Freeman's obituary -- obituaries are not impartial, and information on evolving scientific consensus should be cited to peer-reviewed journals instead.

4. Dezember 2007

• 04:4604:46, 4. Dez. 2007 Unterschied Versionen 0‎ K Charles Atlas ‎ another fix
• 04:4504:45, 4. Dez. 2007 Unterschied Versionen +5‎ K Charles Atlas ‎ fixing ref tag
• 04:4404:44, 4. Dez. 2007 Unterschied Versionen +117‎ Charles Atlas ‎ reword a bit more, reference on ad's significance
• 04:4104:41, 4. Dez. 2007 Unterschied Versionen +262‎ Charles Atlas ‎ rewriting intro to make it less ad-like.
• 04:3604:36, 4. Dez. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −306‎ Charles Atlas ‎ →‎Trademarks: rm section and list of trademarks; this is probably part of what makes the article read like an advertisement.

24. September 2007

• 10:3110:31, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −6.904‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ Removing empty notes section.
• 10:3010:30, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −6.892‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ fact tag on first paragraph, too, since it makes claims about the WKKK's work that are not cited in the article.
• 10:3010:30, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −6.898‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ restoring the one sentence that actually referred to the WKKK... though it was uncited, so I'm putting a fact tag on it.
• 10:2910:29, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −7.045‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ removing uncited paragraph about feminists.
• 10:2110:21, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −6.735‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ rm. several more paragraphs that seem to be about women and gender relations in the Klan as a whole; this article is about the WKKK as an organization, not larger Klan attitudes.
• 10:1910:19, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −5.922‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ rm. paragraph on false rape allegations; nothing in the article text links this to the article's subject, specifically.
• 10:1510:15, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −5.462‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ rm. POV and unsourced comments on feminism.
• 10:1410:14, 24. Sep. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −4.849‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ rm Usher quotation; no useful reason is given for its inclusion.

14. August 2007

• 22:5022:50, 14. Aug. 2007 Unterschied Versionen −7.797‎ Women of the Ku Klux Klan ‎ Redirecting page to KKK auxiliaries; all relevent information is covered there. This is not high-profile enough to support a seperate article.

24. April 2007

• 20:3420:34, 24. Apr. 2007 Unterschied Versionen +6.140‎ K The Root of All Evil? ‎ →‎Critical reception: grammar

6. Oktober 2005

• 04:3004:30, 6. Okt. 2005 Unterschied Versionen +8.175‎ Game Designer ‎ rv. blanking.

29. September 2005

• 23:2623:26, 29. Sep. 2005 Unterschied Versionen +378‎ Analog-Stick ‎ rv. The Bally Astrocade used a small 8-way joystick like Atari's, not a true analog controller.

20. September 2005

• 00:2400:24, 20. Sep. 2005 Unterschied Versionen −12.331‎ UBM plc ‎ Added num_employees to infobox.
• 00:1200:12, 20. Sep. 2005 Unterschied Versionen +38‎ Western Mining Corporation ‎ Added num_employees to infobox, wikilinked year for revenue.

13. Mai 2005

• 23:1823:18, 13. Mai 2005 Unterschied Versionen −27‎ Byford Dolphin ‎ Geez, I can't believe I missed that... Of course it's the best-known accident at the rig, not the least-known.