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==No missiles showing in 'Circa 1990' Wisconsin pic?==
I thought I remembered that one of the many upgrades prior to 1990 included missile arming on Wisconsin. I can't see any in the picture. Or was said addition not visible in the whole-ship, bow view? Perplexed?
[[Visitor]
[[Image:Iowa class battleship 1980s modernization schematic.JPG|thumb|right|250px|A guide to the 1980s weapons systems on an ''Iowa''-class battleship]]
:They use the ABL launchers, which you can just barely see in this picture. They just look like a box on its side, and aren't that visible. --[[User:Jkonrath|Jkonrath]] 17:48, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:ABL=Armored Box Launchers. Look above and behind the pair of 5" turrets on the port side, near the top center of the superstructure, forward of the stack. You will see two boxes about the size of a small semi trialer athwartship. Aft of that on the same level is another set of boxes mounted at a 45 degree angle from the keel, alongside the stack. I believe the forward ones were the Tomahawks and the aft were Harpoons. More modern ships use a [[Vertical Launch System]] ([[VLS]]) and all you'd see would be a grid of hatches on the deck. Gone are the days of the Tartar and [[RIM-2 Terrier|Terrier]] where you have a turret with two missile rails.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 22:09, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:Were you originally looking for something like [[Mk 13 Missile Launcher|this]]?--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 22:13, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:Oops, second group of large boxes at 45 deg. are also Tomahawk. In between the two groups are the shorter Harpoons. You can see everything much better at the [[Armored Box Launcher|ABL]] article. Zoom in on the broadside picture there.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 22:20, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

==Wisconsin is struck==
I was a little bit saddened yesterday when I noticed in the NVR that Iowa and WisKy had been struck in March. It took me until today to find that the Wiki was on top of it. I swear I looked yesterday and it wasn't there, but edit histories don't lie.

Anyway, it seems like the details of the fire support controversy, 1996 and 2006 Bills are triplicated in the Wiki in the Class, BB-61 and BB-64 articles. Perhaps there could be less generic detail on the BB-61 and BB-64 pages for that topic, leaving it on the Class page. Or could the whole topic have its own page? It doesn't seem like much of a stretch when individual TV episodes get their own page. Since it involves another class of ship, DD(X), that's another justification.

Also saw that there were still vairous present tense references to the ships being in reserve. Maybe I'll tackle those after another cup of coffee. I'm not feeling bold enough to do fire support stuff w/o discussion. Not when there are 16" guns involved.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 13:35, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
:Just take it all out - in all the articles. There is no need for the fire support discusion if there is no ship re-activation. And there won't be. [[User:Spejic|Spejic]] 05:40, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
::It is a relevant point, as that was the reason they were maintained on the NVR past 1992. The info here is small because a good discusion used to be found on the DD(X) destroyer page, although all that info has now been removed, and on the ''Iowa''-class page. IMHO it should remain in the article until the USN officially transfers the battleships to their memorial/museum associations. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 17:21, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
:::I was thinking more of paring down the individual ship pages to details that were unique to the ship. For instance the three item list from the 1996 bill seems more apt for just the [[Iowa class battleship]] page. At the moment it is duplicated at least three places. It seems to me that items that effect multiple ships of a class should be covered heavily on the class page, and only on the individual ship page to the extend the issue effected that ship uniquely (e.g. the dates it changed status with a very brief, linked, explaination).--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 22:08, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
::::I trimmed the section down some, drawing on your suggestion to outsorce the information. Is this better? [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 22:38, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
:::::Better. Thanks. But that three item list is still stuck in my head as belonging only on the class page. I know I'm cajoling when I could be editing, but I'd rather convince those who've invested in the page to date. Hmm, there seems to be a gap between the 1996 Act and 1998 when the article says she was relisted, did it really take 2 years to put her on the register? Also when did she move to Nauticus?--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 23:46, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
::::Well, I can not seem to find the info pertaining to 96-98 relisting, so I have removed that until I can source it (it may be from one of my books). The Move to Nauticus was completed 7 December 2000, a date since added to that section. I will lokk at the three point system and see about reorganizing it after dinner, but right now I gotta go because I am holding up the meal (and getting bad looks from the family ;) [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 00:20, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
:::::Some things are more important than the Wiki.:-) --[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 02:32, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
:::I trimmed down the article even more. Is this closer to what you had in mind? [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 02:09, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
::::Great. I did think that should be replaced that with a single sentence which included a link to (possibly) the [[Iowa class battleship#Reactivation potential]]. Of course having a [[Naval fire support debate (1991-)]] article to link to would be nice--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 02:32, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
:::::An even better article would be one for the [[National Defense Authorization Act of 1996]]. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 03:59, 7 June 2006 (UTC)


=== Notice of Availability for Donation ===
[http://frwebgate3.access.gpo.gov/cgi-bin/waisgate.cgi?WAISdocID=95293521236+1+0+0&WAISaction=retrieve Federal Register: Notice of Availability for Donation] (3/29/2006) Pages 15708-15710, in case someone wants to work it in as a ref or extenal link. 6 Months to submit complete application. Let's hope that Norfolk's omitting the required tow plan doesn't complicate things. Likely easier to hire a tug for an hour than explain why there's no tow plan. If nothing else, the tug could stretch out the mooring chains a bit for testing and inspection.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 15:04, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

=== Future ===
Not quite dead yet. While this is still a long way from law, you might be interested in Pages 68 and 193-4 of [http://armedservices.house.gov/NDAA2007CommiteeReport.pdf NDAA 2007 Commitee Report]. Basically page 68 saying that the Iowa's status should be "Mobilization Asset", which looks a lot like the Act of 1996 requirements (mothballed, ammo, logistics), except for being stricken and transferred. And page 193-4 mentioning fire support and lack of progress thereon.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 15:04, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

==She?==
Why is it refered to as female so many times?
:In english (and many other languages) ships are are often affectionally referred to as she. [[User:Raul654|Raul654]] 03:05, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
::A reading from ''[[The Hunt for Red October]]'': "''Ryan smiled to himself. An American or allied ship was a ''she''; the Russians used the male pronoun for a ship; and the intelligence community usually referred to a ship as ''it''.''" [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 03:13, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

::: "A ship is always referred to as she, because it costs so much to keep one in paint and powder." — Admiral Chester Nimitz
:::[[User:Wwoods|—wwoods]] 10:42, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:I think it's silly, affected, and very jarring... but I am certainly not going to fool with a featured article until I get a lot more experienced. :) [[User:Kdogg36|kdogg36]] 19:34, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
::That may be but we've always referred to our ship (USS Missouri) as "She". It's just tradition. Every U.S. Navy sailor I've ever met referred to his (or occasionally her) ship as "She." --[[User:Bschorr|-B-]] 05:39, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
:Incidentally, the same point came up when [[USS Missouri (BB-63)|USS ''Missouri'']] was on the mainpage back on September 2nd, and many of the same points were raised in that discussion as well. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 22:15, 13 June 2006 (UTC)

== Second Ship? ==

The intro has a line about the ship being the US Navy's second ship; what does this mean? Is there a list? If so, there should be a link, methinks. I don't know enough about the matter to take action, I'm afraid. Great article, though. Kudos! [[Image:Icons-flag-scotland.png]] <b><span style="background-color: #008000"><font color="#ffffff">[[User:Canaen|Canæn]]</font></span></b> [[Image:Icons-flag-scotland.png]] 06:03, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:We are refering to the second ship the navy named in honor of the US State of Wisconsin. [[USS Wisconsin (BB-9)|The first USS ''Wisconsin'']] was a battleship, the nineth to be exact, while the second USS Wisconsin was the 64th battleship, and the two witch this talk page is devoted. More information about ships named USS Wisconsin can be found [[USS Wisconsin|here]]. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 08:34, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

::Ah. I see it now. Thank you. [[Image:Icons-flag-scotland.png]] <b><span style="background-color: #008000"><font color="#ffffff">[[User:Canaen|Canæn]]</font></span></b> [[Image:Icons-flag-scotland.png]] 21:51, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

== Only THREE planes in WWII ?! ==

''During Wisconsin's brief career in World War II, she had steamed 105,831 miles (170,318 km) since commissioning; had shot down '''three''' enemy planes; had claimed assists on four occasions; and had fueled her screening destroyers on some 250 occasions.''

Judging from the information before, this number seems incredibly small.
--[[User:Sandycx|Sandycx]] ([[User talk:Sandycx|Talk]])18:08 8 June 2006 (UTC)
:And the inclusion of the 250 fuelings makes her sound like a [[replenishment oiler]]. --[[User:Dhartung|Dhartung]] | [[User talk:Dhartung|Talk]] 07:16, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

::That info comes from [[DANFS]], so its taken on an "as is" basis. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 09:22, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

::: If 106k miles is [[nautical mile]]s, then it's 196k km. [[User:Wwoods|—wwoods]] 10:42, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

:::: "If ... then it's 196k km"... better make that 196k nm... [[Visitor]

:The preceeding numbers were task force counts. WisKy would have been near the center of the formation, ringed by a destroy screen whose job it was shoot down the plane before the could get to the capital ships. Guess is says something for the tin can sailors that WisKy only had three. Look around for the photos of what happens when a kamikazee gets through to an Iowa class BB. Possibly on the Missouri article, as she got "hit". I've seen the "dent" in the rail. You have to look hard or have someone point it out to you.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 22:55, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

== Struck from the NVR ==
The intro states it was in 2006, the Museum Ship section says it was 1995/96. Surely one or the other ... --[[User:Dhartung|Dhartung]] | [[User talk:Dhartung|Talk]] 07:16, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:An oversite on my part. Information I had on ''Wisconsin'' stated that she had been struck in ’96, then reinstated to the NVR in ’98. I have a feeling that 1996 Defense bill had something to do with that, but I have no proof. Its the little things that get ya ;) [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 08:39, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

:: NVR says decommissioned in 1991, stricken in 2006. NavSource says stricken in 1995, reinstated in 1998. DANFS is woefully out of date. [[User:Wwoods|—wwoods]] 10:42, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

::: Agreed, but I could not find the NavSource version of the info when prompted, so I removed it for lack of a source. "Better safe than sorry", as they say. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 23:28, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

==Museum ship?==

The article says (paraphrased): ''Wisconsin currently functions as a museum ship at the Nauticus National Maritime Center. Wisconsin is currently awaiting donation for use as a museum ship.'' I don't understand - is she a museum ship now, or will she become a museum ship? - [[User:Brian Kendig|Brian Kendig]] 04:09, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:Until this April, WisKy was still on the NVR and considered mothballed. The Navy graciously allowed Nauticus to park the WisKy at their pier and allow visitors on the weather (outside) decks. The interior was sealed up in "mothball" condition. She has since been struck from the NVR, but the Navy still owns her. I'm sure there is a move afoot to transfer title to Nauticus or a related Museum ship group. When this happens they will likely open up the interior for touring. But it looks like the article could explain it better.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 21:57, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

==Picture removal==
Removed initial picture, which previously had obviously been replaced by an onscene image showing someone defecating. Sorry, but this was an emergency measure, June 9, 2006 <small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:200.31.36.36|200.31.36.36]] ([[User talk:200.31.36.36|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/200.31.36.36|contribs]]) 22:16, 9 June 2006.</small>
:Removing the image was pointless and accomplishes nothing to prevent vandalism. --[[User:Crossmr|Crossmr]] 22:30, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:Removal of that exchanged picture was NOT pointless, it at least prevented others from seeing this really ugly and apalling pic. I know that that doesn't prevent vandalism, but since I'm not a wikipedia writer (don't have the time, I don't registrate to prevent wikipedia editing from becoming a habit), this was the only thing I could do. So if you have a better idea, please tell me what to do in this case. IMHO I did what was necessary to prevent disgrace to USS Wisconsin and those that served on her, helping to secure our freedom. Luckily now everything is fixed and there is now a pic representing the ship!<small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:200.31.36.36|200.31.36.36]] ([[User talk:200.31.36.36|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/200.31.36.36|contribs]]) 16:54, 13 June 2006.</small>

== Edits ==
Do the changes always become so fast and furious when an article gets "featured"? Or is this nothing compared to others? Yes I'm new around here, why do you ask? ;-) --[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 00:13, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
:Usually the "fast and furious" changes occur when an article is on the mainpage, as this puts the largest limelight availiable on the article and draws out people who would otherwise not go looking for it. Often the activity is only for the 24 hour period the article is on the mainpage, after that it tends to settle down. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] 00:18, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

==Wisky==
The following quote was in the Article '''Wisky'''. It had no reference. [[User:ches88]] redirected it here, but gave no reason. I'm cleaning up orphaned articles. Any help would be appreciated. [[User:Jessemonroy650|meatclerk]] 07:12, 9 September 2006 (UTC)

''<blockquote>Wisky is the nickname of the USS Wisconsin (BB-64). The nickname started when the damaged bow of the Wisconsin was replaced with the bow removed from the incomplete Kentucky. KY is the abbreviation for Kentucky. So Wis + ky = Wisky.</blockquote>''

::I think at one point that Whisky was the radio code for "W", if it isn't still.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 01:22, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

:::It still is, or at the various least, it is still used as the NATO reporting name for "W". [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 03:23, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

::::I should have know they wouldn't have changed "Whisky Tango Foxtrot", over.--[[User:J Clear|J Clear]] 11:18, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

== [[Wikipedia:Featured article review/USS Wisconsin (BB-64)]] ==

This article's featured status is being reviewed at [[Wikipedia:Featured article review/USS Wisconsin (BB-64)]]. I would think addition of a FAR tag would merit more than a minor tag with no edit summary. --[[User:Dual Freq|Dual Freq]] 17:13, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

==Citations==
Is far as I'm concerned the DANFS article is reliable enough to single source the items double sourced with DANFS and USS Wisconsin Assoc. If they conflict something should be done to figure out which is correct. I would be satisfied to source each paragraph only one time with the source most appropriate. If a question arises in the future, someone can check it with the paragraph source or add a new source to the new or questioned material. Are there any suggestions or volunteers? --[[User:Dual Freq|Dual Freq]] 23:50, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
:[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=USS_Wisconsin_%28BB-64%29&diff=90547158&oldid=90541670] is an example of what is proposed. --[[User:Dual Freq|Dual Freq]] 00:12, 28 November 2006 (UTC)

Only a few sections left to remove over citations, "The Korean War (1950-1952)" is one. --[[User:Dual Freq|Dual Freq]] 01:08, 2 December 2006 (UTC)

==Ulithi?==
There is a part upfront that I believe to be erroneous:
"During her career Wisconsin served in World War II, where she shelled Japanese fortifications at Ulithi and Leyte Gulf, ..."

I believe the tiny atoll of Ulithi was undefended by the Japanese, and seize for the large lagoon it provided (a safe anchorage). Thus, I don't think the Wisconsin - or any ship - shelled Ulithi.

I do not, however, have a source to back me up.

Tom [[User:Scout1026|Scout1026]]

:I dropped the shelling mention from the header since the [[Ulithi]] article seems to back your version. Thansk for pointing this out. --[[User:Dual Freq|Dual Freq]] 23:32, 1 December 2006 (UTC)

== FAR comments Introduction and Contents ==

#First use of "BB" in battleship articles should explain that it is a hull classification for American battleships. The article should stand alone, this one is closer than most I have read on Wikipedia in doing so.
#International, so you have to say "Philadelphia Navy Yard" in Pennsylvania.
#She "Japanese fortifications at Leyte Gulf" in the Phillipines, or better, confine it to the battle if this is the case. The second part of the sentence should be closed, "and screened US aircraft carriers as they conducted air raids against enemy positions during this battle."
#All her WWII battles were in the Pacific Theater, so this should be stated at the beginning.
#Don't abbreviate first usage of UN, spell it out.
#Put the year of each decommisioning in. Put "mothball fleet" in parantheses only the first time.
#Don't use parantheses on "600-ship Navy," and explain it parenthetically (in commas probably) with a statement or two. It's not central enough to the article that the reader should ''have'' to go elsewhere to find out what it is. Include a date to this.
#"Battle stars for war service" is redundant. Remove "war."
#"and is currently awaiting donation for permanent use as a museum ship." Donation to Nautilus? Or what?
#Needs a section on its armaments, as it's a battleship. I realize it's in the table, but it needs a discussion in comparison to other vessels of its class, and what it has before you talk about using it.
#Maybe need specific sections or subsections on its decommisioning.
[[User:KP Botany|KP Botany]] 03:32, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
:Noted. These issues will be adressed shortly. Thank you for your input. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 04:39, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

== FAR Construction ==

#Armaments should come right after this.
#"Wisconsin was one of the "fast battleship" designs planned in 1938 by the Preliminary Design Branch at the Bureau of Construction and Repair." How about an explanation that this is the US Navy's design wing at that time?
#"She was the third of <s>the</s> four completed ships of the Iowa class of battleships.[1]" Explain Iowa class briefly, but the article needs to stand alone and this is critical information in the context of US battleships, and this makes the following sentence understandable to an uninitiated reader.
#"Although Wisconsin is numerically the highest numbered US battleship built, she was actually completed before USS Missouri (BB-63), making Missouri the last completed US battleship.[1][2]" Include its number in parantheses as a reminder, since this is the specific topic. Don't worry about being too redundant all the time, which other editors will tell you.
#"Her keel was laid down on 1941 January 25, at the Philadelphia Navy Yard." Connect to the keel article, and maybe add a brief comment, in some way, to let the uninitiated know that this is the start of the shipbuilding process.
#"She was launched on 1943 December 7, sponsored by Mrs. Walter S. Goodland, wife of the governor of Wisconsin, and commissioned on 1944 April 16, with Captain Earl E. Stone in command.[3][4]" Use her full name, this is not a salutation or address to her, "sponsored by SomePrettyNames Goodland, wife of Walter S. Goodland, then governor of Wisconsin." Again, be redundant, "Captain Earl E. Stone of the United States Navy." With each introduction of an officer you should state that he is US Navy (or Marine Corps or whatever).
#Maybe mention that US Navy no longer builds battleships explicitly, and what they are replaced with. I guess aircraft carriers and those smaller ones with the VTOL and helicopters and their destroyers? Something simple, but clear.
[[User:KP Botany|KP Botany]] 03:46, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
:Noted. These issues will be adressed shortly. Thank you for your input. <small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/TomStar81|contribs]]) 04:40, 6 January 2007 (UTC).</small><!-- HagermanBot Auto-Unsigned -->

== FAR World War II ==

#"following her shakedown" ---> "following her shakedown ''cruise''" for readers who did not live most lf their lives around shipyard workers and US Marines.
#"1944 September 24" This format is awkward for me for reading. I don't know what [[WP:MOS]] says about this, but this format is usually only used for paranthetical citations rather than for inline discussion of a date. Someone wouldn't say "On nineteen forty four September twenty four ''Wisconsin'' sailed for the west coast." But they might say, "On September twenty four nineteen forty four ''Wisconsin'' sailed for the west coast." Also your names were irregularly formatted throughout, use one format the entire article, ''especially within the same sentence, as you end this one with "2 October."
#"On 1944 September 24, Wisconsin sailed for the west coast, transited the Panama Canal, and reported for duty with the Pacific Fleet on 2 October." -->"On 1944 September 24, Wisconsin sailed for the west coast, ''transiting'' the Panama Canal, and ''reporting'' for duty with the Pacific Fleet on 2 October." sounds better to me, you may disagree.
#"The battleship later moved to Hawaiian waters for training exercises and then headed for the Western Caroline Islands." Was she stationed at Pearl Harbor? Be specific whenever possible.
#"Upon reaching Ulithi on 1944 December 9, she joined Admiral William F. Halsey's Third Fleet.[3]" ---> "Upon reaching Ulithi ''in the Caroline Islands'' she joined ''US Navy'' Admiral ..." Always include an officer's branch of service unless an article is limited to one branch of service, but especially when dealing with military ships where you are likely to have Naval, Marine, Air Force and Army officers on board, even if it is an obvious naval rank and position.
#"Wisconsin had arrived at a time when the reconquest of the Philippines was well underway." When? "''Wisconsin'' arrived in ______ when the reconquest of the Philippines was well underway."
#"The next day the weather turned sour for Halsey's sailors." To use this sentence you need a firm date in the previous paragraph, first sentence, the point just above this one. I would say for Halsey's fleet, rather than sailors, although they're the ones dealing with the bad situtation, so might be okay.
#"A furious typhoon struck his fleet, catching many ships refueling and with little ballast in their nearly dry bunkers." Can you link this to a specific typhoon and mention it by name? Also, wasn't the issue of needing ballast in a storm still open for debate at this time, so it was speculation that lack of sufficient ballast was an issue? And, do ships contain ballast in their bunkers? You have to tie the mention of the empty bunkers into the typhoon. Aren't the bunkers for fuel? I can ask and find out if you don't know.
#"Three destroyers, Hull (DD-350), Monaghan (DD-354), and Spence (DD-512), capsized and sank. Wisconsin proved her seaworthiness as she escaped the storm unscathed.[3]" Would "escapted the storm without damage" be preferable, as "unscathed" sounds rather like adventure novel writing. Stylistic, though, you decide.
#"Wisconsin’s next operation was in the Philippines, specifically the occupation of Luzon." Sounds like they were in Philippine waters already, so "also in the Philippines." Or ''Wisconsin's'' next operation in the Philippines." And "specifically the occupation of Luzon," "''support'' for air strikes before landings at Luzon" or whatever.
#"Bypassing the southern beaches, American amphibians went ashore at Lingayen Gulf, the scene of the Japanese landings nearly three years before.[3]" "American ''amphibious forces'' went ashore at Lingayen Gulf, ''the scene of initial Japanese assaults to take Luzon'' nearly three years before." or something that lets the reader know this was the scene of one of the very earliest Japanese assaults on the Philippines in World War II.
#"Wisconsin, armed with heavy anti-aircraft batteries, performed escort duty for TF 38's fast carriers during air strikes against Formosa, Luzon, and the Nansei Shoto, to neutralize Japanese forces there and to cover the unfolding Lingayen Gulf operations." "... to cover the unfolding Allied Lingayen Gulf operations."
#"Those strikes, lasting from 3 January to 1945 January 22, included a thrust into the South China Sea, in the hope that major units of the Imperial Japanese Navy could be drawn into battle.[3]" Why? "... could be drawn into the battle on an additional front" or "... could be drawn into battle there away from the planned landings." Whatever the reason for the attempt to split the Japanese forces, name it.
#"Wisconsin’s carrier group launched air strikes between Saigon and Camranh Bay, Indochina, on 1945 January 12 resulted in severe losses for the enemy." "... air strikes between Saigon and Camranh Bay, ''French Indochina'' on January 12, 1945 ''resulting'' in severe ...."
#"TF 38's warplanes sank 41 ships and heavily damaged docks, storage areas, and aircraft facilities." Including landing strips? This mattered severely to allied plans so should generally be mentioned when specifically listed in battle reports.
#"Formosa, already struck on 3 January and 4 January, was raided again on 9 January, 15 January, and 1945 January 21." Again the awkward dates.
[[User:KP Botany|KP Botany]] 21:20, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
:Noted. I will adress the issues you have brought up shortly. Thank you for the input. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 22:54, 8 January 2007 (UTC)

== Reusing references ==

I stumbled across the FAC comments and saw that this article had issues with reusing a reference multiple times. I ran onto this last year with [[List of Eagle Scouts (Boy Scouts of America)]] when we went past lz. Cite.php appears to have been updated recently so that backlinks now work up to zz, but this really makes for an ugly cite in the references section. I think a better way is to use the {{tl|cref}} system that I just found. We updated the Eagle Scout list with this if you want to take a look. --[[User:Gadget850|Gadget850 ( Ed)]] 18:54, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

== USS Wisconsin (BB-64) Length. ==

The Wisconsin is actually the longest battleship to serve in the US Navy. When they placed the Kentucky's bow on her, it made her nearly 2 feet longer than any of the other Iowa class ships.

From the History Channel.

[[User:65.29.159.92|65.29.159.92]] 03:53, 15 October 2007 (UTC)Pete

== Temper, Temper ==


== Float planes ==
I was recently at the USS Wisconsin museum in Norfolk. One of the exhibits recounts her only damage by direct fire, the incident in the Korean war. The article mentions that she was hit by 4 rounds, however the museum exhibit says that she was hit by one round of a four round salvo. The exhibit also mentions that after destroying the offending battery, one of her escort ships flashed the message, "Temper, Temper." Although not particularly historic, I think the remark should be included in the article. It humanizes an otherwise dry account of her missions during the Korean War.
As far as I know she carried float planes (mostly in WWII), but how many and what type? And what about the helicopters? [[Special:Contributions/80.151.9.187|80.151.9.187]] ([[User talk:80.151.9.187|talk]]) <!--Template:Undated--><small class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 13:11, 14 August 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


== Misleading preservation section? ==
[[User:Nylotic|Nylotic]] 20:54, 6 November 2007 (UTC)


Congress had ordered that the following measures be implemented to ensure that ''Wisconsin'' could be returned to active duty if needed:
:Do you have the name of the escort by chance? [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 21:43, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
# She must not be altered in any way that would impair her military utility;
::Without a name I can not check the DANFS entries for the destroyers to confirm the story, but assuming this is true our mystery destroyer was probably operating with Destroyer Division 71. At present that is the best I can do to narrow down the ship. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 08:13, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
# The battleship must be preserved in her present condition through the continued use of [[cathodic protection]], dehumidification systems, and any other preservation methods as needed;
# Spare parts and unique equipment such as the {{convert|16|in|mm|0|abbr=on}} gun barrels and projectiles be preserved in adequate numbers to support ''Wisconsin'', if reactivated;
# The Navy must prepare plans for the rapid reactivation of ''Wisconsin'' should she be returned to the Navy in the event of a national emergency.
These four conditions closely mirror the original three conditions that the Nation Defense Authorization Act of 1996 laid out for the maintenance of ''Wisconsin'' while she was in the [[United States Navy reserve fleets|Mothball Fleet]]. It was unlikely that these conditions would impede a plan to turn ''Wisconsin'' into a permanent museum ship at her berth in Norfolk.


So it's this section here, I haven't been able to find the actual phrase in the 2006 National Defence Authorization Act. There is mention of:
== Miles ==
#(d) Authority for Reversion in Event of National Emergency.--The Secretary of the Navy shall require that the terms of the transfer of a vessel under this section include a requirement that, in the event the President declares a national emergency pursuant to the National Emergencies Act (50 U.S.C. 1601 et seq.), the transferee of the vessel shall, upon request of the Secretary of Defense, return the vessel to the United States and that, in such a case, unless the transferee is otherwise notified by the Secretary, title to the vessel shall revert immediately to the United States.
Mileage figures have been converted to kilometres assuming that they are [[statute mile]]s (=1.609&nbsp;km), e.g. "105,831&nbsp;miles (170,318&nbsp;km)". Isn't it far more likely that they should be [[nautical mile]]s (=1.852&nbsp;km)?
<br/>[[User:Wwoods|—WWoods]] ([[User talk:Wwoods|talk]]) 18:02, 16 January 2008 (UTC)


but the 4 point preservation condition doesn't appear. The second point appears in the 2007 National Defense Authorization Act, but in reference to the U.S.S. John F. Kennedy.
== No sources in the lead? ==
[[Special:Contributions/12.151.56.2|12.151.56.2]] ([[User talk:12.151.56.2|talk]]) 19:37, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi guys, seriously great article. But just a point of curiosity, How comes there are no references in the [[WP:LEAD|lead]]? I only ask as I'm trying to improve a ship article myself (to embarrassed to say this early on) and although I'm using the relevant project's guidelines, I've sort of adopted this article for inspiration (because it's FA) [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 15:16, 9 February 2008 (UTC)


== Addition of the inside of the boat? ==
:Ignore that, just found my answer [[Wikipedia:Lead section#Citations|here]]. [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 15:20, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
::A similar answer can be found on the FARC page for this battleship; it was brought to my attention that if the info in the intro was cited and elaborated on further down the page then it didn't need to be cited in the intro paragraph. Good luck with your article. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 20:52, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
:::Cheers mate, when I'm done I usually put an article up for all the peer reviews it's eligible for, I'll post a note here when it's up. [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 01:10, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


I think an added section about the inside of the ship would be a good addition, definently not something i could do, as this is far from my usual topics i edit, although i do remember there being an oddly red lit room when i recently visited. [[User:VastV0idInSpace0|¿V0id? &#123;have a great day!&#125;]] ([[User talk:VastV0idInSpace0|talk]]) 18:16, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
== Past tense in reference to guns ==
Hi guys, me again. Wisconsin's a museum ship now I know, but she still has her guns (and I presume they could be made to work again). Do we definitely have to refer to her armament in the [[past tense]]? e.g. "''Wisconsin''’s main battery consisted of..."


== FA concerns ==
Or should we always use past tense on ships that have been decommissioned? [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 17:36, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
:I'd say past tense for ships that are decomissioned, as there is little chance that a decomissioned ship would be reactivated for the hell of it. In this case the guns were refered to in past tense to keep with the tone of the article, which is largely a look back at her history. Regardless of whether you use the past tense or the present tense, make sure the tense you use remains consistant across the board. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 19:52, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


[[Wikipedia:Featured article review/USS Missouri (BB-63)/archive1]] closed recently, for another Iowa-class vessel. Essentially, that FAR determined that the ship's description needed expanded with material on things such as fire control and overall armor protection, and that some of the significant scholarly print literature on the Iowa-class needed incorporated. This article is largely sourced to DANFS and a ship's organization, which while not bad sources, are not necessarily a broad view of the performance and nature of these vessels. Hopefully improvements can be made and [[WP:FAR|featured article review]] avoided. [[User:Hog Farm|Hog Farm]] <sub> ''[[User talk:Hog Farm|Talk]]''</sub> 20:52, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
::Yes good idea, I shall have to be mindful of that, it's particularly tricky to remember when referring to modern weapons systems that may have been added later on (I expect u know what I mean, in regards to the cruise missiles). [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 20:03, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


== Temper Temper ==
== "Main articles: Iowa class battleship and Armament of the Iowa class battleship" ==
Hi guys, I've been reading [[Wikipedia:Layout#"See also" for one section]], do we think the {{tl|Main}} template is entirely appropriate for the link to the "Iowa class battleship" and "Armament of the Iowa class battleship" articles at the top of the "Construction" section?


An apocryphal but unverified story is after the ''Wisconsin ''destroyed the North Korean battery is that an escort flashed a signal stating "TEMPER, TEMPER". Research gathered from logs doesn't indicate much but it could have been impromptu. Regardless, I think this should be included due to many people becoming familiar with the Wisconsin through this story. Recommended action should be this be included in the notes section. [[User:Usaf2222|Usaf2222]] ([[User talk:Usaf2222|talk]]) 02:59, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
It's just that upon further reading of {{tl|Main}}, it implies the template should only be used on an offshoot article. Now I see the logic obviously in regards to "Iowa class battleship", but "Armament of the Iowa class battleship" seems like the offshoot of this article, perhaps {{tl|See also}} would be more appropriate? [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 20:44, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
:{{Yo|Usaf2222}} You would need to provide a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] to support this anecdote, otherwise it's considered [[WP:OR|original research]], which is kinda' like hearsay in court... it can't be used. - [[User talk:Thewolfchild|<span style="color:black">w<span style="color: red;">o</span>lf</span>]] 09:01, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
::I feel like it could be added and just noted that it is a common story but has little official documentation. [[User:Jason741776|Jason741776]] ([[User talk:Jason741776|talk]]) 14:40, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
:::Then you'd need a source that supports that it's a common story (or whatever is written). <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> ([[User talk:North8000#top|talk]]) 14:52, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Jason741776}} Interestingly, a search for "temper, temper" (in quotes) + Wisconsin + battleship on Google Books and Google Scholar does not reveal a single academic source that can speak to this. That surprised me. I'm wondering if it's one of those urban legends that has bounced around for so long that everyone thinks it's true? The second answer in [https://skeptics.stackexchange.com/questions/43692/did-the-uss-buck-dd-761-send-the-message-temper-temper this forum discussion] (it's not a reliable source, but they cite primary sources we can chew on) did not come to a solid conclusion either way. Either way, we can't include this information without some sort of reliable source being able to speak to its truthfulness and/or popularity. [[User:The ed17|Ed]]&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:The ed17|[talk]]]&nbsp;[[WP:OMT|[OMT]]]</sup> 16:24, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
::::Personally think it should be a note and maybe a redirect. It's definitely Apocryphal as no ship log recorded the transmission but it could definitely be within the realm of possibility. However, since it's repeated enough, maybe some context as to the story would be appropriate, if at least to dispel some rumors since it's a very popular urban legend.
::::My two cents anyway. [[User:Usaf2222|Usaf2222]] ([[User talk:Usaf2222|talk]]) 06:09, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::{{ping|Usaf2222}} We can't include information that isn't supported by a reliable source. [[WP:V|Verifiability]] is one of our three core content policies here. [[User:The ed17|Ed]]&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:The ed17|[talk]]]&nbsp;[[WP:OMT|[OMT]]]</sup> 06:51, 3 May 2024 (UTC)


I put a note on talk page for [[USS Buck (DD-761)]] pointing to this discussion. This legend has been added to to USS Buck a couple times. Thank you for the skeptics stackexchange link above that indicates USS Duncan rather than Buck. Honestly, even if this had a reliable source, it just seems like a 70+ year old joke that doesn't really belong in an encyclopedia. --[[User:Dual Freq|Dual Freq]] ([[User talk:Dual Freq|talk]]) 20:23, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
:In general FAC bound articles attempt to lose the "see also" section becuase those who contribute to FAC have in the past voted against the promotion of articles with see also sections. In this case the class page and the armament page serve as the base articles for the small constructions sections, and thus are the main articles for the construction section, hence the main tag for the section. BTW, you are correct in your assumption that the armement page is an offshoot of the original class page: at one time the Iowa class article did contain all the information present on the armement page, but after an in house peer review it was decided to split the material out into its own article to keep the size for the class article down. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 21:49, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


== WoWS ==
::OIC, sorry to continue being a nuisance, but does anyone know why there isn't a {{tl|Main}}, {{tl|See also}} or any sort of template at the start of the WW2 section linking to the WW2 article for instance? [[User:Ryan4314|Ryan4314]] ([[User talk:Ryan4314|talk]]) 00:24, 11 February 2008 (UTC)


I'm adding this to raise awareness about the game's efforts to support admission for vets. All of the proceeds generated will be donated. I will likely delete when the event is over. [[User:Jason741776|Jason741776]] ([[User talk:Jason741776|talk]]) 18:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
:The answer to that question is that our WWII article deals with the war in its entirety, while this articles deals with the contribution of one warship to the conflict. With the exception of the signing of Japanese instrument of surrender, which is linked from the appropreite section in the article [[USS Missouri (BB-63)]], the WWII sections speak only of the battleship contributions to the war. In theory we could link to the pacific theatre articles, but there wouldn't be much to gain from that since the battles and campaigns that these battleships participated in should already be linked from the subsections in the WWII sections, thus removing the need for <nowiki>{{main}} and {{see also}}</nowiki> sections in those subsections. [[User:TomStar81|TomStar81]] ([[User talk:TomStar81|Talk]]) 02:36, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
:Hi {{u|Jason741776}}, and thanks for joining Wikipedia. Unfortunately, this sort of information is often not suitable for Wikipedia as it is/will be at best a minor footnote in the ship's much larger history. If the event has been covered in a [[WP:RS|reliable and secondary source]], we can discuss it—but I'm thinking it's too [[WP:OFFTOPIC|off topic]]. I also don't think any of the websites I can see [https://gamingtrend.com/news/world-of-warships-adds-uss-wisconsin-to-the-fleet/] [https://bleedingcool.com/games/world-of-warships-adds-the-wisconsin-in-latest-update/] [https://northcountrynow.com/premium/brandpoint/stories/uss-wisconsin-commemorates-80th-anniversary-with-world-of-warships-collaboration,234541] meet the reliable source criteria. [[User:The ed17|Ed]]&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:The ed17|[talk]]]&nbsp;[[WP:OMT|[OMT]]]</sup> 21:38, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
::Thanks! I was adding it not really for the game related content (as much as I like the game) but more to do with the partnership between World of Warships and the museum itself, where proceeds from the game went to free admission for vets. If it was unclear from my addition that's what I was going for. I would also be happy to rephrase it as well. I thought that would be a noteworthy collaboration. [[User:Jason741776|Jason741776]] ([[User talk:Jason741776|talk]]) 14:39, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Jason741776}} Without a reliable source speaking about it, I'm afraid there's no chance of us including it here. I'm already thinking it's of borderline relevance to this article's topic (the battleship), and I'm guessing other editors around Wikipedia would agree. It may be suitable for the ''[[World of Warships]]'' article, and given that article's more clearly related scope, it may be fine to cite a [[WP:PRIMARYSOURCE|primary source]] like a devblog. [[User:The ed17|Ed]]&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:The ed17|[talk]]]&nbsp;[[WP:OMT|[OMT]]]</sup> 16:28, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
::::What constitutes "reliable"? I've seen several definitions floated around by different people so I'm wondering what you're going off of. If a devbolg or something would make more sense then Will try to find the actual article. I thought the collaboration made sense given its nature as a museum, and the partnership between the two orgs for museum admission [[User:Jason741776|Jason741776]] ([[User talk:Jason741776|talk]]) 16:14, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::{{ping|Jason741776}} Our definition of a reliable source is located at [[WP:RS]]! Speaking generally, museums partner with people, organizations, and companies all the time. That's why the bar for considering it here is it being reported in a reliable secondary source, which can range from global news sources down to regional newspapers. For the game's article, our consideration can be a bit different—it could be a big enough change or notable moment in the game that it deserves mention in the article, even if the only source for it is primary. Others may disagree on that, though. Everything here [[WP:Consensus|operates on consensus and agreement]], and in an ideal world big changes or moments would be notable for their coverage in secondary sources. [[User:The ed17|Ed]]&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:The ed17|[talk]]]&nbsp;[[WP:OMT|[OMT]]]</sup> 02:55, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 15:55, 30 May 2024

Former featured articleUSS Wisconsin (BB-64) is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
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Current status: Former featured article

Float planes[edit]

As far as I know she carried float planes (mostly in WWII), but how many and what type? And what about the helicopters? 80.151.9.187 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 13:11, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Misleading preservation section?[edit]

Congress had ordered that the following measures be implemented to ensure that Wisconsin could be returned to active duty if needed:
  1. She must not be altered in any way that would impair her military utility;
  2. The battleship must be preserved in her present condition through the continued use of cathodic protection, dehumidification systems, and any other preservation methods as needed;
  3. Spare parts and unique equipment such as the 16 in (406 mm) gun barrels and projectiles be preserved in adequate numbers to support Wisconsin, if reactivated;
  4. The Navy must prepare plans for the rapid reactivation of Wisconsin should she be returned to the Navy in the event of a national emergency.

These four conditions closely mirror the original three conditions that the Nation Defense Authorization Act of 1996 laid out for the maintenance of Wisconsin while she was in the Mothball Fleet. It was unlikely that these conditions would impede a plan to turn Wisconsin into a permanent museum ship at her berth in Norfolk.

So it's this section here, I haven't been able to find the actual phrase in the 2006 National Defence Authorization Act. There is mention of:

  1. (d) Authority for Reversion in Event of National Emergency.--The Secretary of the Navy shall require that the terms of the transfer of a vessel under this section include a requirement that, in the event the President declares a national emergency pursuant to the National Emergencies Act (50 U.S.C. 1601 et seq.), the transferee of the vessel shall, upon request of the Secretary of Defense, return the vessel to the United States and that, in such a case, unless the transferee is otherwise notified by the Secretary, title to the vessel shall revert immediately to the United States.

but the 4 point preservation condition doesn't appear. The second point appears in the 2007 National Defense Authorization Act, but in reference to the U.S.S. John F. Kennedy. 12.151.56.2 (talk) 19:37, 10 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Addition of the inside of the boat?[edit]

I think an added section about the inside of the ship would be a good addition, definently not something i could do, as this is far from my usual topics i edit, although i do remember there being an oddly red lit room when i recently visited. ¿V0id? {have a great day!} (talk) 18:16, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

FA concerns[edit]

Wikipedia:Featured article review/USS Missouri (BB-63)/archive1 closed recently, for another Iowa-class vessel. Essentially, that FAR determined that the ship's description needed expanded with material on things such as fire control and overall armor protection, and that some of the significant scholarly print literature on the Iowa-class needed incorporated. This article is largely sourced to DANFS and a ship's organization, which while not bad sources, are not necessarily a broad view of the performance and nature of these vessels. Hopefully improvements can be made and featured article review avoided. Hog Farm Talk 20:52, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Temper Temper[edit]

An apocryphal but unverified story is after the Wisconsin destroyed the North Korean battery is that an escort flashed a signal stating "TEMPER, TEMPER". Research gathered from logs doesn't indicate much but it could have been impromptu. Regardless, I think this should be included due to many people becoming familiar with the Wisconsin through this story. Recommended action should be this be included in the notes section. Usaf2222 (talk) 02:59, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Usaf2222: You would need to provide a reliable source to support this anecdote, otherwise it's considered original research, which is kinda' like hearsay in court... it can't be used. - wolf 09:01, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I feel like it could be added and just noted that it is a common story but has little official documentation. Jason741776 (talk) 14:40, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Then you'd need a source that supports that it's a common story (or whatever is written). North8000 (talk) 14:52, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jason741776: Interestingly, a search for "temper, temper" (in quotes) + Wisconsin + battleship on Google Books and Google Scholar does not reveal a single academic source that can speak to this. That surprised me. I'm wondering if it's one of those urban legends that has bounced around for so long that everyone thinks it's true? The second answer in this forum discussion (it's not a reliable source, but they cite primary sources we can chew on) did not come to a solid conclusion either way. Either way, we can't include this information without some sort of reliable source being able to speak to its truthfulness and/or popularity. Ed [talk] [OMT] 16:24, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Personally think it should be a note and maybe a redirect. It's definitely Apocryphal as no ship log recorded the transmission but it could definitely be within the realm of possibility. However, since it's repeated enough, maybe some context as to the story would be appropriate, if at least to dispel some rumors since it's a very popular urban legend.
My two cents anyway. Usaf2222 (talk) 06:09, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Usaf2222: We can't include information that isn't supported by a reliable source. Verifiability is one of our three core content policies here. Ed [talk] [OMT] 06:51, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I put a note on talk page for USS Buck (DD-761) pointing to this discussion. This legend has been added to to USS Buck a couple times. Thank you for the skeptics stackexchange link above that indicates USS Duncan rather than Buck. Honestly, even if this had a reliable source, it just seems like a 70+ year old joke that doesn't really belong in an encyclopedia. --Dual Freq (talk) 20:23, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WoWS[edit]

I'm adding this to raise awareness about the game's efforts to support admission for vets. All of the proceeds generated will be donated. I will likely delete when the event is over. Jason741776 (talk) 18:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jason741776, and thanks for joining Wikipedia. Unfortunately, this sort of information is often not suitable for Wikipedia as it is/will be at best a minor footnote in the ship's much larger history. If the event has been covered in a reliable and secondary source, we can discuss it—but I'm thinking it's too off topic. I also don't think any of the websites I can see [1] [2] [3] meet the reliable source criteria. Ed [talk] [OMT] 21:38, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I was adding it not really for the game related content (as much as I like the game) but more to do with the partnership between World of Warships and the museum itself, where proceeds from the game went to free admission for vets. If it was unclear from my addition that's what I was going for. I would also be happy to rephrase it as well. I thought that would be a noteworthy collaboration. Jason741776 (talk) 14:39, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jason741776: Without a reliable source speaking about it, I'm afraid there's no chance of us including it here. I'm already thinking it's of borderline relevance to this article's topic (the battleship), and I'm guessing other editors around Wikipedia would agree. It may be suitable for the World of Warships article, and given that article's more clearly related scope, it may be fine to cite a primary source like a devblog. Ed [talk] [OMT] 16:28, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What constitutes "reliable"? I've seen several definitions floated around by different people so I'm wondering what you're going off of. If a devbolg or something would make more sense then Will try to find the actual article. I thought the collaboration made sense given its nature as a museum, and the partnership between the two orgs for museum admission Jason741776 (talk) 16:14, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jason741776: Our definition of a reliable source is located at WP:RS! Speaking generally, museums partner with people, organizations, and companies all the time. That's why the bar for considering it here is it being reported in a reliable secondary source, which can range from global news sources down to regional newspapers. For the game's article, our consideration can be a bit different—it could be a big enough change or notable moment in the game that it deserves mention in the article, even if the only source for it is primary. Others may disagree on that, though. Everything here operates on consensus and agreement, and in an ideal world big changes or moments would be notable for their coverage in secondary sources. Ed [talk] [OMT] 02:55, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]