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| birthdate = 1961
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| deathdate =
| deathplace =
| nationality = [[United States|American]]
| area = Artist, writer
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| notable works = ''[[Ralph Snart]]''
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| website = http://www.marchansenstuff.com/
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'''Marc Hansen''' (1963 - ) is a [[cartoonist]] and creator of [[Ralph Snart]], [[Weird Melvin]] and [[Doctor Gorpon]]. He has been published by comic book companies such as [[NOW Comics]], [[Marvel Comics|Marvel]]/[[Epic Comics|Epic]], [[Disney Comics|Disney]], [[Malibu Comics|Malibu Graphics]] and [[Kitchen Sink Press]].


Ralph Snart is his most successful creation that began in 1986, which had newsstand and direct market distribution. It peaked at 50,000 copies per month with over one million comics in print.
===[[Sum 41]]===
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==Biography==
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===Early years===
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Born the youngest of three brothers in [[Big Rapids]], Michigan, Hansen began teaching himself to draw at an early age by copying the artists in [[MAD magazine]]s. His main influences included [[John Stanley]] and [[Harvey Kurtzman]]. His humor combined with his artistic talents prompted Hansen to strive to become a professional artist and cartoonist. After receiving a degree in commercial art from [[Ferris State University]], he moved to Chicago to work as a commercial artist.
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===[[List of Sailor Moon episodes]]===
===Time at ''NOW''===
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While working in Chicago, Hansen met [[Tony C. Caputo]], the founder of [[NOW Comics]] in 1985. Hansen was hired to create a monthly comic book for the new publisher. ''[[Ralph Snart|Ralph Snart Adventures]]'' became NOW's most popular and consistent property [ yeah right, more popular that The Terminator, The Real Ghstbusters, The Green Hornet, The Twilight Zone, Speed Racer, all properties no one has ever heard of either - give it up Marc] and appeared on newsstands and in the direct market from 1986 until 1993.{{Fact|date=September 2008}} Hansen even worked on the NOW briefly in the Fall of 1988 and contributed to many of the NOW titles.
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For a brief period, Hansen worked on the NOW staff helping to ink, pencil and color many of the books. He wrote the [[Married... with Children]] comic under the pseudonym Ty Addams. Hansen left NOW Comics in 1994 due to the company's instability, inability to pay and creator rights issues. NOW later went in bankruptcy. Altogether, Caputo's three iterations of NOW have all gone out of business due to poor management.
===[[1985 Mexico City earthquake]]===
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===[[Canadian heraldry]]===
===Other works===
In 1991, Malibu Graphics published his three issue mini-series about a monster killer called [[Doctor Gorpon]]. From 1992 until 1994, the Comics Buyer Guide published his weekly comic strip [[Weird Melvin]], which became a five issue self-published comic series in 1995. Hansen did no comic book work until 2005, when he began self-publishing Ralph Snart as a [[web comic]]. Currently, Marc Hansen is self-publishing new and reprint material in a series of [[trade paperback (comics)|trade paperbacks]].
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==References==
===[[Care Bears Movie II: A New Generation]]===
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==External links==
===[[Sunderland A.F.C. season 2007–08]]===
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*The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per [[WP:LEAD]]. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leaddetail|[?]]]</sup>
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''favorite'' (A) (British: ''favourite''), ''defence'' (B) (American: ''defense''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''colonize'' (A) (British: ''colonise''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization''), ''mould'' (B) (American: ''mold'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Veronica Mars]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Veronica Mars|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*<s>The script has spotted the following contractions: ''hasn't, can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.</s>
**Verified that all contractions are in quotes or parts of proper names. [[User:Jclemens|Jclemens]] ([[User talk:Jclemens|talk]]) 03:32, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[The Bellflower Bunnies (season 1)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The Bellflower Bunnies (season 1)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Burger King products]]===
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*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Color of the day (police)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Color of the day (police)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article does not have any [[WP:CAT|categories]]. Please categorize it with relevant <code><nowiki>[[Category:Categories]]</nowiki></code>.
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Idlewild and Soak Zone]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Idlewild and Soak Zone|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:27, 9 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Megadeth discography]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Megadeth discography|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Supergrass discography]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Supergrass discography|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at [[WP:LEAD]]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadlong|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Mark Speight]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Mark Speight|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of African countries and dependencies]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of African countries and dependencies|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Operation Brevity]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Operation Brevity|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''88 mm'', use ''88&nbsp;mm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>88&amp;nbsp;mm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''armour'' (B) (American: ''armor''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''organise'' (B) (American: ''organize''), ''realise'' (B) (American: ''realize''), ''counterattack'' (A) (British: ''counter-attack'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Keating!]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Keating!|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''5cm'', use ''5&nbsp;cm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>5&amp;nbsp;cm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''allege''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
:Done. --[[User:Figureskatingfan|Figureskatingfan]] ([[User talk:Figureskatingfan|talk]]) 17:22, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
:Done. I created four links; if I need to do more, I will. --[[User:Figureskatingfan|Figureskatingfan]] ([[User talk:Figureskatingfan|talk]]) 18:03, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
:I'm not sure any more articles can be created from this one. [[List of characters in I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings]] was already created from it, and that may be all it has the potential for. More input would be welcomed. --[[User:Figureskatingfan|Figureskatingfan]] ([[User talk:Figureskatingfan|talk]]) 18:06, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:26, 8 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Eugene Izzi]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Eugene Izzi|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[World Science Festival]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|World Science Festival|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[History of the National Hockey League (1967–1992)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|History of the National Hockey League (1967–1992)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 5 ft.
*When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''honour'' (B) (American: ''honor''), ''favourite'' (B) (American: ''favorite''), ''defence'' (B) (American: ''defense''), ''organize'' (A) (British: ''organise''), ''realize'' (A) (British: ''realise''), ''criticize'' (A) (British: ''criticise'').
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[History of a Six Weeks' Tour]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|History of a Six Weeks' Tour|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of mayors of Hamburg]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of mayors of Hamburg|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Battle of the Alamo]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Battle of the Alamo|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of House episodes]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of House episodes|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
<s>*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup></s>
:*Noted, but [[WP:SS]] not readily applicable to lists. [[User:Jclemens|Jclemens]] ([[User talk:Jclemens|talk]]) 18:12, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
<s>*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''correctly''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this--></s>
:*Reviewed. "Correctly" is not a weasel word in this context. [[User:Jclemens|Jclemens]] ([[User talk:Jclemens|talk]]) 18:14, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
<s>*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't, Don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.</s>
:*All contractions in the list are in literal title episodes. [[User:Jclemens|Jclemens]] ([[User talk:Jclemens|talk]]) 18:07, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
*<s>As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup></s>
:*All footnotes checked; none precede adjacent punctuation. Those with adjacent punctuation follow it. [[User:Jclemens|Jclemens]] ([[User talk:Jclemens|talk]]) 18:10, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Rennell Island]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Rennell Island|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''5 km'', use ''5&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>5&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, ''the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#spellnum|[?]]]</sup> Specifically, an example is 7.5 km.
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are [[proper noun]]s or the first word of the heading.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingcap|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''apparently''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Strawberry Fields Forever]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Strawberry Fields Forever|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Can't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of storms in the 2002 Atlantic hurricane season]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of storms in the 2002 Atlantic hurricane season|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:25, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[TNA Bound for Glory]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|TNA Bound for Glory|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Only make links that are relevant to the context|Wikipedia:Context]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide [[WP:CONTEXT|context]] for the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#contxt|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Mathematical economics]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Mathematical economics|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
**Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a#Saying good-bye to misplaced formality|etc]].
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Ted Bundy]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Ted Bundy|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Major League Baseball]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Major League Baseball|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''2000nl'', use ''2000&nbsp;nl'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>2000&amp;nbsp;nl</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''didn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Gregory House]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Gregory House|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't, couldn't, doesn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[List of Vancouver SkyTrain stations]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Vancouver SkyTrain stations|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 03:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Arad, Israel]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Arad, Israel|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:What is a featured article?]], [[WP:IMAGE|Images]] should have concise captions.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#caption|[?]]]</sup>
*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[List of Mexican footballers playing outside Mexico]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Mexican footballers playing outside Mexico|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[WP:CONTEXT]]. Guides recommend having greater than 3% words in links, but be sure not to overlink words just to add more links.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#overlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)



===[[Stephen Crane]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Stephen Crane|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Paul Gondjout]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Paul Gondjout|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 04:08, 4 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as [[WP:WIAFA]] critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#expand|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
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===[[Kannada literature in the Western Chalukya Empire]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Kannada literature in the Western Chalukya Empire|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Consider adding more [[WP:LINK|links]] to the article; per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links)]] and [[Wikipedia:Build the web]], create links to relevant articles.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#underlink|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km<sup>2</sup>, and pounds -> lb.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#abbrev|[?]]]</sup>
*This article may need to undergo [[WP:SS|summary style]], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is [[United States]], then an appropriate subpage would be [[History of the United States]], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#SS|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''is considered''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either [[American and British English spelling differences|American or British spelling]], depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: ''flavor'' (A) (British: ''flavour''), ''honor'' (A) (British: ''honour''), ''neighbour'' (B) (American: ''neighbor''), ''metre'' (B) (American: ''meter''), ''pretence'' (B) (American: ''pretense''), ''recognise'' (B) (American: ''recognize''), ''criticise'' (B) (American: ''criticize''), ''categorise'' (B) (American: ''categorize''), ''ization'' (A) (British: ''isation''), ''isation'' (B) (American: ''ization'').
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''don't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Nevado del Ruiz]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Nevado del Ruiz|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''30 kilometers'', use ''30&nbsp;kilometers'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>30&amp;nbsp;kilometers</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[The Scott Mills Show]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The Scott Mills Show|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*This article has no or few [[WP:IMAGE|images]]. Please see if there are any [[WP:IT|free use]] images that fall under the [[Wikipedia:Image use policy]] and fit under one of the [[Wikipedia:Image copyright tags]] that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to [[Special:Upload]]; to upload non-[[WP:FU|fair use]] images on the [[Wikimedia Commons]], go to [[commons:special:upload]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#noimg|[?]]]</sup>
*If there is not a [[WP:IT|free use]] image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#leadimg|[?]]]</sup>
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Guide to layout]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#gtl|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Barney Gumble]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Barney Gumble|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Springfield (The Simpsons)]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Springfield (The Simpsons)|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''8 km'', use ''8&nbsp;km'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>8&amp;nbsp;km</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[WP:WIAFA]], this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per [[Wikipedia:Summary style]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#toc|[?]]]</sup>
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
*The script has spotted the following contractions: ''Don't, Don't, hadn't'', if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*As done in [[WP:FOOTNOTE]], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the [[The Chicago Manual of Style|CMS]], but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon [2].'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.[2]''<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#footspace|[?]]]</sup>
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[Effects of Hurricane Noel in the United States]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Effects of Hurricane Noel in the United States|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
*Watch for [[User:Tony1/How_to_satisfy_Criterion_2a#Redundancy|redundancies]] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a: redundancy exercises|redundancy exercises]].)
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.”
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of [[WP:WIAFA|Wikipedia's best work]]. See also [[User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a]].<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#copyedit|[?]]]</sup>
You may wish to browse through [[User:AndyZ/Suggestions]] for further ideas. Thanks, [[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

===[[1956 FA Cup Final]]===
<onlyinclude>{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|1956 FA Cup Final|[[User:AZPR|APR]]&nbsp;<sub>[[User talk:AndyZ|t]]</sub> 01:44, 3 October 2008 (UTC)}}</onlyinclude>The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic [[User:AndyZ/peerreviewer|javascript program]], and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at [[Wikipedia:Lead]]. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on [[WP:LEAD]], and should adequately summarize the article.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#lead|[?]]]</sup>
*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate [[WP:INFOBOX|infobox]] for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. <sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#infobox|[?]]]</sup> (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
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===[[Battle of Wadi (1916)]]===
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===[[List of Kashimashi: Girl Meets Girl characters]]===
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===[[Corner Gas]]===
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===[[No Jacket Required]]===
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===[[June 2008 tornado outbreak sequence]]===
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*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
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===[[Bloody Sunday (1969)]]===
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===[[Raphael]]===
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*Avoid including [[WP:IG|galleries]] in articles, as per [[Wikipedia:Galleries#Policy|Wikipedia:Galleries]]. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#ig|[?]]]</sup>
::Bollocks - misreading of the never-adopted "guideline". Commented firther on operators talk page. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 11:57, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
:::The galleries are absolutely essential to the quality and coherence of the article..I agree with {{user|Johnbod}} that the above is a misreading of guidelines and policy. [[User:Modernist|Modernist]] ([[User talk:Modernist|talk]]) 03:37, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
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DONE [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 19:44, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Units of measurement|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers)]], there should be a non-breaking space - <code>&amp;nbsp;</code> between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of ''21 cm'', use ''21&nbsp;cm'', which when you are editing the page, should look like: <tt>21&amp;nbsp;cm</tt>.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#nbsp|[?]]]</sup>
::Er, right - isn't there a script for this. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 12:02, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
*As per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)|Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates)]], dates shouldn't use <sup>th</sup>; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using ''[[January 30|January 30<sup>th</sup>]] was a great day'', use ''[[January 30]] was a great day''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#dateth|[?]]]</sup>
::I can only see - in note 2 - "his 37th birthday". Isn't this ok? If not sbe spelled I suppose. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 12:02, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ''<nowiki>==The Biography==</nowiki>'', it should be changed to ''<nowiki>==Biography==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingthe|[?]]]</sup>
::Done [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 12:02, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
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::Already has many sub-pages, with hatnotes. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 11:59, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
*There are a few occurrences of [[weasel word]]s in this article- please observe [[WP:AWT]]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
**''it has been''
**''arguably''
**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper [[WP:FOOTNOTE|citations]] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment).<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#awt|[?]]]</sup> <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this-->
::I think all referenced. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 11:59, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
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:::but often not. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 11:59, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
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::All done I think - captions, quotes etc. One is after a ) which I think is ok. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 19:36, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
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===[[Jew]]===
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*Per [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)]], headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was [[Ferdinand Magellan]], instead of using the heading ''<nowiki>==Magellan's journey==</nowiki>'', use ''<nowiki>==Journey==</nowiki>''.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#headingre|[?]]]</sup>
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Marc Hansen
NationalityAmerican
Area(s)Artist, writer
Notable works
Ralph Snart
http://www.marchansenstuff.com/

Marc Hansen (1963 - ) is a cartoonist and creator of Ralph Snart, Weird Melvin and Doctor Gorpon. He has been published by comic book companies such as NOW Comics, Marvel/Epic, Disney, Malibu Graphics and Kitchen Sink Press.

Ralph Snart is his most successful creation that began in 1986, which had newsstand and direct market distribution. It peaked at 50,000 copies per month with over one million comics in print.

Biography

Early years

Born the youngest of three brothers in Big Rapids, Michigan, Hansen began teaching himself to draw at an early age by copying the artists in MAD magazines. His main influences included John Stanley and Harvey Kurtzman. His humor combined with his artistic talents prompted Hansen to strive to become a professional artist and cartoonist. After receiving a degree in commercial art from Ferris State University, he moved to Chicago to work as a commercial artist.

Time at NOW

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While working in Chicago, Hansen met Tony C. Caputo, the founder of NOW Comics in 1985. Hansen was hired to create a monthly comic book for the new publisher. Ralph Snart Adventures became NOW's most popular and consistent property [ yeah right, more popular that The Terminator, The Real Ghstbusters, The Green Hornet, The Twilight Zone, Speed Racer, all properties no one has ever heard of either - give it up Marc] and appeared on newsstands and in the direct market from 1986 until 1993.[citation needed] Hansen even worked on the NOW briefly in the Fall of 1988 and contributed to many of the NOW titles.

For a brief period, Hansen worked on the NOW staff helping to ink, pencil and color many of the books. He wrote the Married... with Children comic under the pseudonym Ty Addams. Hansen left NOW Comics in 1994 due to the company's instability, inability to pay and creator rights issues. NOW later went in bankruptcy. Altogether, Caputo's three iterations of NOW have all gone out of business due to poor management.

Other works

In 1991, Malibu Graphics published his three issue mini-series about a monster killer called Doctor Gorpon. From 1992 until 1994, the Comics Buyer Guide published his weekly comic strip Weird Melvin, which became a five issue self-published comic series in 1995. Hansen did no comic book work until 2005, when he began self-publishing Ralph Snart as a web comic. Currently, Marc Hansen is self-publishing new and reprint material in a series of trade paperbacks.

References

External links

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