Wikipedia:Cleanup

The cleanup page is a place where articles with problems (ungrammatical, poorly formatted, confusing, etc.) can be listed. Any user can fix or list articles here.

Older cleanup: Category:Cleanup by month. Pages are archived by month, but are still in need of cleanup (or de-listing if they have already been cleaned up).

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1. Sign your name, date and time by typing four tildes ( ~~~~ )
2. Also remember that you can submit an article in need of cleanup to the Cleanup Taskforce (which is always looking for members).

For more detailed information about this page, see Wikipedia:Cleanup process.

Just to let everyone know, there were 13,726 articles tagged for cleanup as of 12 February 2006 (UTC). This means that we are working on an astounding 1.33% of Wikipedia's articles. Most of these articles can be found under Category:Cleanup by month and are not listed below. Anything you can do to help clear the backlog would be greatly appreciated.

March 17, 2006

• List of Marilyns in England -- I'm very confused about how Marilyns are being listed on here. The Category:Marilyns of England lists them alphabetically if the tag is added to the page eg Dundry Down which I've done some bits as part of work on the Chew Valley on appears in alphabetical order while it appears on List of Marilyns in England under South Central England with the parent as Beacon Batch (Somerset), when Black Down and Walbery Hill (Berkshire) both are listed in South East England with the same parent. I'm not sure of the definition of "parent" as Beacon Batch & Dundry Down are oposite sides of the Chew Valley & doesn't comply with the rules at Topographic prominence. If these are going to be listed by area perhaps a section for the South West is needed & locations & parents need checking.Rod 19:44, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
• Pat Sajak really needs to be reworded. -- Wikipedical 00:26, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
• Alternative culture is a potentially worthy article, but it reads like original research and is badly written. I think the main problem is the author's assumed understanding of "the mainstream culture" as an unproblematic opposition to "alternative". Someone with a background in media studies and subculture research should take a look. --The Famous Movie Director 06:45, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
• House System at the California Institute of Technology was merged from several different articles some time ago and is currently in a very sorry state. There is no consistency between the treatments of the various houses, much of the factoids presented are of no interest to anyone outside of Caltech, and quite a bit of the article smacks of original research. As a former student I can affirm that pretty much every fact presented is true, but I don't know how much of it is really verifiable. 63.201.92.7 07:54, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

March 16, 2006

• Feral there is a great deal of good stuff but it seems the author's mother tongue isn't English.Barbara Shack 18:28, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

March 15, 2006

• Chester Olszewski- some work necessary (along with some of the other modern antipopes. Jackiespeel 17:32, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• Clemente Domínguez y Gómez: the College of Cardinals directs to the one "belonging" to the Pope in Rome rather than the one intended. Jackiespeel 17:29, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• Casino (Al Di Meola album) needs proper formatting for an article about an album, and the image needs to be properly aligned and resized. --Spring Rubber 02:16, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
  • I think I got most of it, but I'm not too familiar with albums, so someone else needs to double-check it. Miguel Cervantes 20:26, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• Shelby - I have attempted to cleanup this disambiguation page, but I am not sure that it is in proper style now. - Mike Rosoft 15:20, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• School massacre- Work neccesary in the Section noting occurances of School Shootings. --Z.Spy 04:00, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

March 14, 2006

• Rett syndrome - This may require a bit of checking. I've edited for sentence cohesion only. Someone should check the proper usage of syndrome/disorder in the article.
• Military fiat - some sections seem to have little to do with the military. Jackiespeel 18:15, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
• Carroll Rosenbloom - poorly formatted article about the legendary football coach. Has little separation into paragraphs, and no separation into sections. Basically a big wall of text. 198.234.255.234 17:36, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
• Germatoid - poorly formatted article about villain in Sailor Moon. Contains too much text, no separation into paragraphs, first mention of title not bolded, etc. --Geopgeop 06:51, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
• X-Cart - poorly written article with only one major contributor. Promotion for commercial software—claims to be "open source" but the software license prohibits use without purchase and says you have "no right to use, make, sublicense, modify, transfer or copy either the original or any copies of the Software or to permit anyone else to do so". May be an AFD candidate, unless the article can be rewritten and the software is worthy of an article. — Miles←☎ 00:05, 14 March 2006 (UTC) I'd like to add that it is also a mess vis a vis grammar and spelling and is clearly an advert.
• John Zachman(enterprise-software designer) Possible copy vio; in any case reads too much like press release.Jerzy•t
• Surface epithelial-stromal tumour,Mucinous tumour,Brenner tumour. I rewrote these and just would like help "wikifying" them and improving their format. Please only rewrite content if it is necessary to help with clarifying the information.Pathologyresident 15:01, 14 March 2006 (UTC)

March 13, 2006

• Iceland at the 1992 Summer Olympics - prose-like, not NPOV. A honest attempt by a newcomer, it seems, but nevertheless one that needs to be cleaned up quite abit. -- Schnee (cheeks clone) 21:08, 13 March 2006 (UTC)

March 12, 2006

• R. J. Rummel. PoV panegyric; cleanup being attempted. Belated listing; marked for cleanup by SlimVirgin in February. Septentrionalis 16:47, 13 March 2006 (UTC)
• B₀ (B subscript zero) and MINTO- can someone clarify for persons not involved in the field? Jackiespeel 22:45, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

• The Norwegian POW Museum-Introduction is quite confusing, not sure if some of the info. is encyclopedic. Also needs to be wikified. Joshdboz 17:17, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

• DIRFOR - Is formatted like a list and lacks information/details. --Spring Rubber 20:33, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

• Diablo hacks - Spelling, format, use oh headings, and lists. Its also not Diablo but Diablo 2 hacks and cheats.

This article is misnamed, as it applies to Diablo 2, rather than the original Diablo. Wouldn't it be better to merge this with the Diablo 2 article? Alternately, I'd argue that this possibly should be a candidate for deletion. There's no sourcing, and I'm not sure any of this is truely relevant to wikipedia. I've done some cleanup of the article to at least make it presentable, but someone else will have to do the merging or submitting for deletion. ---Lendorien 01:20, 14 March 2006 (UTC)

March 11, 2006

• RMC Paladins - Severe formatting problems. Might consider merging into Royal Military College of Canada. Utopos 04:24, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

• Visual DialogScript - This is deeply NPOV in places: Take "It can be used to create small and fast programs. VDS has a large number of dialog and graphical elements available to create professional looking programs." or "VDS uses easy to remember commands and functions, which refer to English words." (emphasis mine). Sounds like advertising to me. I'd be tempted to AfD it, but maybe some of it's salvagable. ~ Irrel 19:01, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

• Battered woman syndrome - Almost an exact copy of Battered syndrome. I suggest this be deleted and replaced with a re-direct. --User:Rebroad 13:54, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
  • Seems to have been done the other way round. Rob Church 18:12, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
• Hart Hanson - A writer/producer of TV programs. (Has an IMDB entry.) Contains statements like "Hart Hanson was born in San Francisco, California somwhere in the late 50's to early 60's" and "He swam on different teams and was one step away from the Olymipics". - Mike Rosoft 19:03, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
• Istana Wakil Presiden is very poorly written, it's probably a good candidate for AfD but I wasn't too sure on the notability (obviously once it was drasticly cleaned up). Death Eater Dan (Muahaha) 21:12, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
  • I cleaned it up. It's notable. Crzrussian 16:53, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

March 10, 2006

• Taiwan independence: Article contains too many uncited claims. (Original comment reformatted/reworded. Atellus 00:45, 10 March 2006 (UTC) )
• Chanel Cole - an utter mess. Extremely POV/fancrufty, and contains a blow-by-blow commentary of her odyssey through the Australian Idol series. Obsessively detailed. Contained 24 fair use images - when I contacted the uploader and explained it was too many, he/she deleted 2. When I tagged the remaining 22 images as "no source", removed my tags and added generic film screenshot tags. Rossrs 13:00, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
  • All right, looking into this one. Mass copyright infringement is always fun to clean up. Rob Church 18:40, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
    • Good grief theres alot of work to be done on that article. I have made a start but it was only the tip of the iceberg. Death Eater Dan (Muahaha) 21:43, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
      • I cut back the blow-by-blow rendition of the Australian Idol Season and moved the Introduction section into the actual introduction. I live in America, however, and hardly watch American Idol, so someone with knowledge of the subject should probably double-check everything.Miguel Cervantes 05:14, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
      • Ok, I've done all I can to this article. I cut a bunch of the fluff and I think the POV is now neutral. I started from the original article, however, so what looks clean to me may still be dirty, as I am relating it to the original article. Someone needs to look at it and Do More/Remove the Tags. Miguel Cervantes 20:34, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

• Fresh Talents Music Project. A mess. Looks like someone experimenting with the wiki, but may deserve an article anyway. --Misza13 ^{T C} 12:42, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
• John Graham (producer)- lots of text, probably useful info but awful fancruft tone. Do copy-vio check.Jerzy•t

• Seems to be copyvio from criticalrhythm.co.uk. Go to the DJ section, third description down on the page. Atellus 14:59, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

• UPDATE: Article has been dealt with by JeffUK. Atellus 16:30, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

March 9, 2006

• Ascension (Stargate) Very unclear. Uses horrible organization, wording, and is cluttered with too many small pictures everywhere. Tobyk777 02:17, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
• Cover girl (person) is not even close to being NPOV Richard cocks 00:07, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

I tried to clean this article up a bit, changes are documented in the talk page. STILL NEEDS WORK. Gaius Octavius Atellus 2:22, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

• Foltx - Not encyclopedic in nature: no complete sentences, very little information given about the product besides a little bit of nutritional information. --Spring Rubber 01:21, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

Article appears to be nonexistent? Perhaps deleted? Atellus 02:39, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

• Foster's Cup - Not sure if this even needs to exist as an article. Someone who understands the Australian Football League would be a great help in this article. Could this possibly a candidate to merge with the main AFL article?--Metros232 16:22 9 March 2006 (UTC)

March 8, 2006

Prasanth Nagar, not a very important article, but needs dividing into paragraphs, and editing for relevance. Rooneyot 23:11, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

• Done by PeterNicholls on 8 March 2006. May still need editing for relevance, though. Atellus 03:40, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

Pope Clement VII needs a bit of tweaking - eg two dates for being made a cardinal. Jackiespeel 16:39, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

• Added in dates pertaining to his role as a cardinal. Is this what you had in mind? Atellus 16:43, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

• Apparently considered done. Tag has been removed and there are no comments from Jackiespeel about other tweaks that need to be attended to. Atellus 20:31, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Flanders (county)- one long paragraph with breathless sentences: could be divided up somewhat (and a few spaces added). Jackiespeel 19:34, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

• Done. Cleanup seems to have been already attempted but failed for whatever reason. Gaius Octavius Atellus 1:40, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

Social interaction design needs tweaking and wikifying. Huge external links and see also sections, too. _└ ^UkPaolo/_talk^┐ 21:48, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

Domestic terrorism is getting out of hand. See the talk page. Lambiam 21:56, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

March 7, 2006

• Poisonous pedagogy: does not read properly (possibly translation problems). Jackiespeel 22:52, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

• I do not be understanding what saying the article trying is to. — Ilyanep (Talk) 23:17, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
• My point is, exactly - reads like a failed Uncyclopedia article. Merge with redirect to the writer in question? Or someone who can translate the German version/summarise it better (have put a request in the translation section) Jackiespeel 16:39, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

• Feast of Asses. Unsightly unformatted text dump. Moriori 23:14, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

Somewhat done. Still needs improvement. Article looks better now, but it needs to be expanded, preferably by an expert on the subject. Atellus 03:56, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

• Toyota Chaser is written from an improper point-of-view, and has horrid formatting. SlickDizzy 03:02, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

This article could use a partial rewrite, as wording seems to be a problem. Also, possibly copyrighted images were added to the article. Atellus 03:21, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

March 6, 2006

• Neo Communism improper tone, I doubt this is the most usual meaning of the word, uverified, POV issues --Wikimol 19:08, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Joint Sitting, Australian parliament, 1974 needs work on grammar and typos especially. Also on some style aspects as well as general information which could be explained better and with more background, better headings etc. Shadow007 13:04, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Hiroshi Sugimoto needs some broader attention and an NPOV check. It's longer than a stub, but fairly thin on information. Carter 12:49, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Jazz dance needs verification of some facts and deletion of unverifiable statements if they exist there. It also may confuse different senses of the term, and it uses a fairly informal tone in places. --Officiallyover 05:43, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Anna of Kashin This article appears to have been translated into English from another language (most likely Russian), or written by someone with a somewhat limited grasp of the English language (no offensive intended). Some of the grammar does not follow correct syntax, and some areas are awkwardly worded Trojan traveler 04:06, 7 March 2006 (UTC) Rewritten. Dev920 22:54, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
• The_Causes_Of_The_Boom_In_The_USA This article states that protectionism was responsible for the US Boom in the 1920's--Even if true, needs cites and general clarification Sevesteen 04:53, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

• There are other things wrong with this article. See the talk page for details. Added relevant tags that should help editors get an idea of what needs to be done, also did some minor reformatting. Atellus 04:08, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
• Article was deleted, see Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/The_Causes_Of_The_Boom_In_The_USA --lightdarkness ^(talk) 20:09, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

March 5, 2006

• New Nemea needs a good copyedit and also a bit of basic info like where is the place located? And should the company mentioned get an article of its own, if it doesn't already exist? Mona-Lynn 02:32, 6 March 2006 (UTC)

• The article on Wildness is in need of attention. Currently it's not very encyclopedic or NPOV. Baiter 01:22, 5 March 2006 (UTC)

• Whipps Cross University Hospital has barely any wiki-formatting, and it reads like a news article. --Spring Rubber 05:03, 5 March 2006 (UTC) The main portion of the text was a copyvio from here. I reverted to a version without the copyvio. Seqsea (talk) 01:36, 6 March 2006 (UTC)

• The_Red_Pony needs to be grammar-checked by someone who is more familiar with the book than I (I haven't read it since high school.)

• Red Rain, needs formatting and proper paragraphing. --Thorpe | talk 14:25, 5 March 2006 (UTC)

• Hexis is confusing, lacks context, and possibly fails to present all sides of an argument. Hydriotaphia 14:37, 5 March 2006 (UTC)

March 4, 2006

The article Palace Barracks Memorial Garden is pretty poor & is copied from the external link that it links to. I do not know enough on the subject to clean it up, & I don't know what to do if its a copy vio. I don't even know if I'm meant to place this here! Thanks, Spawn Man 00:08, 4 March 2006 (UTC)

March 3, 2006

The link from O levels to School Certificate and Higher School Certificate lead to the Australian exams, rather than the predecessor of the UK exams - and clicking on the reference in the Australian exams loops back. Either an article on the UK exams or appropriate links needed. Jackiespeel 22:00, 3 March 2006 (UTC)

• Kshatriya - Needs quite a lot of cleaning up on the bottom two-thirds of the article. Unfortunately, I don't know anything about it.  :-/ Guidelines at Wikipedia:WikiProject Hinduism should be followed. x42bn6 Talk 12:52, 3 March 2006 (UTC)

March 2, 2006

• The article on actor/singer Meat Loaf Aday needs a fairly simple once-over to remove some POV issues with portions of its word choice, adjectives, etc. It's an otherwise well okay article, it just currently read a little too much like someone who is awe of Meat Loaf wrote it --- Bobak 23:33, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

March 1, 2006

• The Turtle family Bataguridae contains many of the genus/species that are also listed on pages with a listed family of Geoemydidae. For example, Morenia petersi has a family of Geoemydidae, but its genus Morenia is listed on the Bataguridae page. Something doesn't seem quite right with this taxonomy. — RJH 21:21, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• Free running needs some major style reworking and if possible some more information from an expert. I'm not really sure which cleanup template to use or whether there is a better place to put this request (I'm somewhat new at this editing business). If anyone can advise me on how to deal with such articles better, please stick something in my User Talk page. Maelin 11:51, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

The choice of templates in cases like this is always difficult, but here cleanup is probably right. However, freerunning is also known as Parkour for which there is a good article already. So the solution to this mess of an article is redirect it to Parkour, which is what I suggest be done (see my note on your talk page). Kcordina 11:58, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• Attachment disorder looks like something out of a parent's manual for the condition, not an encyclopedia article. The exact same text is repeated as part of Reactive Attachment Distorder, which also includes other (better-written) sections. The articles are already under consideration for being merged. I've given them both the "inappropriate tone" tag. Quinnanya 16:40, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

Copyvio from Recognizing Attachment Concerns in Children By Dr. Becker-Weidman (scroll half-way down the page). 86.140.109.173 18:39, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

• King_Edward_VI_Grammar_School_(Chelmsford) seriously needs condensing and cleaning - it is far too long with a lot of irrelevant and biased material. 131.111.236.123 21:39, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

February 28, 2006

• Kosovo contains a variety of discriminatory, derogatory and hateful paragraphs, added by anonymous vandals, who are trying to rewrite history by adding the inaccurate info, leaving no sources nor evidences to back up their verbal crusades against Christians in Kosovo. This article shouldn't exist as a such because it containts such an enormous level of hatred and propaganda, and it needs a serious cleanup by objective and non-political Wiki experts
• Pope Benedict XIV contains a paragraph at the end which appears to be out of context (at best). Jackiespeel 19:31, 28 February 2006 (UTC)

It's a bit better now. Did I sort the paragraph you were referring to? --Cherry blossom tree 22:41, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• John Bond (footballer) - Non-sentences; 12 Cats (is this a sign of Cats that should be deleted & replaced with lists?) of which 2 look redundant, but my ignorance or dysfunctional Cat ancestors left me unsure; twice uses "currently", which should be replaced by e.g. as of 2005 if the edit that added it was from 2005 (unless continuing into 2006 is verifible).Jerzy•t

I think I've done that one. You may like to check though.--Cherry blossom tree 22:53, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• Tech metal - Very sloppily put together. Awkward to read. Pertinent information needs to be kept together, instead of strewn about the article. Cparker 02:47, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

February 27, 2006

• TOCA Race Driver 3 - various parts need to be sorted and displayed propely. --Thorpe | talk 18:46, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
• Marc Bolan - disjointed, needs proper sections and other various tidying. I'll try, but I don't know much about the subject and it'd be nice for someone a little better to help. rob 06:30, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
• Volcanic gas - reasons for cleaning tag: sections need cleanup, wikify technical jarbon, and perhaps rewrite some sentences so that it doesn't sound completely alien to a person who doesn't have a MS in Geology. --Ted 06:50, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
• World Funeral - lacks conformity to encyclopedic standards
• Academic Team - (was deleted due to lack of context and general non-usefulness of article)
• David Aceveda - A clearer introduction to allow it to be more freindly toward those who have now idea about the show.
• Wasserwacht - simply written in a bad english and incomplete... --edited by User:Imagine1989 10:59, 5 March 2006 (EST)

February 26, 2006

• T'aarof - political theory (Eco?) strewn throughout the article -- needs to be rewritten in a neutral tone, with political theory isolated in a single, well-labelled section. David 03:04, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Article cleaned up and tags removed.--Lendorien 02:44, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
• PokeRealm - unwikified text. There's also debate whether this should be included at all. Has been deleted. Misza13 ^(Talk) 19:28, 28 February 2006 (UTC)
• List of Telecaster players - Loose criteria for inclusion, artists with questionable notability as Telecaster players, entries of little informative value, unalpabetized entries. Rohirok 00:15, 26 February 2006 (UTC)
• List of screamo groups - Major problems with this article, constant bickering of whether of a band is screamo or not, people ignoring the 3 revert rule. I tried to get it where if you could verify a band's status as screamo from documented proof from other wikipedia pages or public and popular reference sources like magazines or music websites then you could put it on there, people ignored that. Major POV problems because one person says screamo and another says the band isn't screamo. 90% of the bands that are screamo dont' have pages on wikipedia and theres no evidence that they even exist, people could be making up bands for all we know. Please someone fix this mess or just delete the article. Patman2648 17:08 26 February 2006 (UTC)
• Tor Henning Hamre – Incomplete sentences, no context, unwikified. Apparently about a Norwegian soccer player. It's even unclear whether there should be an entry for this person. Hydriotaphia 01:26, 26 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Article appears to have been cleaned up. Revisor removed tags. --Lendorien 02:48, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
• Shadowrun timeline - I find the the timeline and its context not meeting the usual Wikipedia style. There is something about the current style that isn't really for wikipedia. --Hannu 22:01, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

I attempted to clean up the article a bit, getting rid of all the year subheadings so the TOC isn't so unwieldy. Still needs a Shadowrun expert to look over to clean up. There's a lot of sentence fragments as well as a complete lack of a decent intro paragraph to explain the content to put into context. --Lendorien 19:48, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

February 25, 2006

• Qalal - sent here as outcome of AFD debate. Punkmorten 14:55, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

February 24, 2006

• Willam Christensen - Content is extremely unencyclopedic. No links, category, biased is an understatement, written by someone with an unblelieveably loose grasp of the concept of an encyclopedia. --VolatileChemical 04:25, 25 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Contents were a copy vio. Removed copy vio text, added summary, cat and stubbed. Someone else will have to fill in the details. --Lendorien 23:03, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

February 22, 2006

• Petrodollar warfare - Content is unencyclopedic. Facts are disjointed and relevance not explained. Relevance of M3 withdrawal unexplained. --Mmx1 22:08, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• Channel NewsAsia - only two paragraphs of prose and length lists of anchors/correspondents, most of which are unwikified. The last section may also be biased. Johnleemk | Talk 15:23, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• Reticular fiber - Insufficient context. Not written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia entry. It was marked for cleanup but I was unable to find this article here so I added it then marked it off after I edited it. --Gravitate

February 21, 2006

• Suluk - appears to be a copyvio based on the notice at the bottom, but can't find it. Also lacks formatting and encyclopedic tone. - Mgm|^(talk) 11:25, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
  • It's partly from here and partly from the existing article Tausug people on the same subject. Redirect to the latter? (Although that itself needs cleanup, a major part being a text dump from here). 86.141.84.87 03:13, 26 February 2006 (UTC)
• Timothy Treadwell tagged Feb 4th. Originally a very POV article. Some cleanup done, but needs sources and background checking to make sure details are correct. --Lendorien 22:41, 21 February 2006 (UTC)

CLeanup completed --Lendorien 02:08, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

• William Henry Jackson needs copyediting and rewriting. Wesley 00:49, 21 February 2006 (UTC)

Article seems to be fine now. Atellus 05:10, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

• Phil Pringle needs wikifying. May be copyvio. (Entheta 13:18, 21 February 2006 (UTC))
• Gladio need a serious house cleaning, see talk. Ten Dead Chickens 21:25, 21 February 2006 (UTC)
• Johnny Foglander - needs wikifying (if it's about a person notable enough to be kept). created by same user as the abovementioned Phil Pringle article. (Entheta 21:48, 21 February 2006 (UTC))
• Controversies about the Boy Scouts of America needs a lot of work. Consists of mostly unorganized "snippets" vaguely related to controversies. Alecmconroy 03:57, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• John Hogg short, almost stub, possibly notable enough, but the name of the subject changes to 'Ludwig' in 2nd paragraph, and it has been like that since the article was created, so it's not obviously the result of vandalism. DogsBreakfast 10:45, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• Tetsuya Chiba information all over the place, not enough wiki links for an outsider like me to understand what it's all about DogsBreakfast 11:38, 22 February 2006 (UTC)

February 18, 2006

• Jewel of Four Souls needs cleanup. Contains incorrect details, poor style ("UPDATE" section), and may even need to be merged with InuYasha. --Zeno McDohl 13:10, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

• Yachats, Oregon needs cleanup. Someone has turned the page into their own personal tourism brochure. PDXblazers 06:14, 20 February 2006 (UTC) <--done
• Company (TV movie) needs some pretty major cleanup. It's a collection of pictures from the movie, along with a cast list that is splattered around the article. --lightdarkness ^(talk) 16:42, 18 February 2006 (UTC)
• Kenosuke Sato- At the very least needs extreme copy-editing; difficult to assess other issues because a) I am not an expert in this subject; b) The article is incomprehensible in its current form. May have been machine translated using e.g. Babelfish and cut 'n' pasted verbatim, and hence copyright issues could also be a problem (although may just have been ported over from the Japenese Wikipedia). Salvageable but needs work. Badgerpatrol 02:41, 19 February 2006 (UTC)
• Atlee Yarrow - I'm not even sure what to do here. There's a ton of stuff here, but much of it seems inappropriate in tone and focus.
• Toyota Aurion - This article uses too many sections and that makes it hard to read. --ApolloBoy 08:17, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

I have cleaned up the Toyota Aurion article and reduced the number of sections by 2. Alphabeta777 06:15, 21 February 2006 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think the article still needs work. It's still hard to read, and it has no introduction whatsoever. Look at some of the other car articles here to see what I mean. --ApolloBoy 08:48, 21 February 2006 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do about it. I'm new and I don't know the general format of articles, but I'll check out some other car articles. If you have any more suggestions or more specific suggestions, please tell me. Alphabeta777 08:59, 21 February 2006 (UTC)

February 16, 2006

• Hourman Android needs cleanup. The article has many sections where information repeats multiply times, has some bad grammar, and sentences run-on.
• Asia requires some cleanup. The "History" section has particuarly bad grammar, poorly organized and unclear sentences, etc. Huw 20:01, 16 February 2006 (UTC)

Cleaned up History section, I need to stop procrastinating on homework so maybe I'll clean up the rest later. Being new to editing, I didn't know whether to put 1 or 2 spaces before the beginning of a new sentence (I put 1), but I'm sure there are better things to worry about...

It doesn't really matter - they get collapsed into one space anyway.  You can force a double space by making the first an &nbsp; as I've done here.  I do it on my own websites, but I'm not sure that doing it on Wikipedia is a good idea on the whole. -- Smjg 13:51, 17 February 2006 (UTC)

Shouldn't the middle east be its own section/region? At least in American English I think if you start talking about Asia it does not usually include the middle east.

February 15, 2006

• James Melville Gilliss needs cleanup. It appears that the information conflicts with the article on the US Naval Observatory, of which this person is (allegedly?) the (a?) founder Fan 20:28, 15 February 2006 (UTC)
• Mike Shinoda needs cleanup. The information should be cleanly formatted and segmented similar to other members of his group linkin park StanBrinkerhoff 04:32, 16 February 2006 (UTC)

February 14, 2006

• Wheel of time needs extensive cleanup big time! The article is a highly technical and dense extremely poorly formatted personal POV thesis on the subject of Kalachakra by a person who goes as far as to advertise his website and himself as the world's foremost authority on the subject right in the article, even though Kalachakra already has a whole article to itself! I discussed the problems in more detail in the talk page. Loom91 08:45, 15 February 2006 (UTC)
• Jason Lee Middle School needs help. Sentences are missing information, and the whole article poorly written. Magdela 17:02, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
• Old Testament views on women needs a serious working, including moving the article from its specifically Christian name. PhatJew 11:21, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
• Longmorn needs some help; the article isn't very well-written, and there are large images inline. LrdChaos 19:47, 14 February 2006 (UTC)

*Corban College - no wikification, needs {{infobox University}}, may actually be copyvio (I didn't check). Microtonal 21:38, 14 February 2006 (UTC) -- Has been listed as a copyvio --Mackensen (talk) 16:04, 23 February 2006 (UTC)

February 13, 2006

• Tokyo DisneySea There is much to be said about the park, however it seems to be a jargon of information and not complete.
• Sri Lanka#Sri Lankan Culture - big unwikified block of text.
• Sternum is full of confusing medical jargon, making it incomprehensible to the layman. -Tim Rhymeless (Er...let's shimmy) 10:12, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
• Kelly Monaco fails to meet any standard of style. It is poorly written and formatted. P Cooper-McCann 05:31, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
• Flora and fauna of Goa is an unsourced table with no extra-table text besides "Forest Cover in Goa". Michael Slone (talk) 01:16, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
• Dangerous Game - A recent addition. Massive, massive layout/format problems. Microtonal 04:17, 13 February 2006 (UTC)

  Wikified and added a movie poster, but still needs a more fleshed-out synopsis. Cidrick 22:23, 13 February 2006 (UTC)

• 802.15.4 is currently an unwikified original research textdump. And what the content has to do with the title is beyond me. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 22:20, 13 February 2006 (UTC)

I have placed the prod tag on his page as I think it is a likely candidate for deletion. No Guru 15:48, 16 February 2006 (UTC)

Article was deleted. --lightdarkness ^(talk) 16:44, 18 February 2006 (UTC)

February 12, 2006

• Mike Milo needs wikifying and NPOV.Currently reads like a CV. Possible for deletion?--JBellis 13:59, 12 February 2006 (UTC)
• Macro-historical is an unverified, un-sourced list that doesn't appear to relate to the topic of macrohistorical theory. MLA 17:34, 12 February 2006 (UTC)

February 11, 2006

• Reeves James This page is really difficult to read and needs cleaning up to use more encyclopedic language. Chrisblore 19:36, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
  • I've overhauled the page and wikified it, so perhaps it can be taken off the list. However, I don't know if James really merits a wikipedia article; I did a cursory google search on him and came up with hardly anything. I don't know if any of the facts presented are correct, and I know nothing about alternative rock. Mgummess 08:15, 14 February 2006 (UTC)

February 10, 2006

• High Commissioner This is an ugly, ugly page. Hard to read, poorly formatted, and hard on the eyes. -Tim Rhymeless (Er...let's shimmy) 06:36, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
• Death march (software development) Someone is dumping text from [1]. Perhaps a copyvio. If not, it needs some work. Misza13 ^(Talk) 17:07, 10 February 2006 (UTC)
• Ethical naturalism#Examination of definition - how many words does one need to say one thing twice?
• Flying and gliding animals Looks badly formatted. Or should it even exist at all? --Thiamshui 16:17, 9 February 2006 (UTC)

This one's fixed up now, probably ok to keep it as a reference. (Stpaul 14:33, 24 February 2006 (UTC))

• Rye Harbour could do with tidying up etc. Jackiespeel 16:29, 9 February 2006 (UTC)

I did a little work on it - it may need more help. No Guru 20:38, 9 February 2006 (UTC)

• Peer-to-peer ComputerJoe 19:44, 10 February 2006 (UTC)
• Richard Barnes (politician) as written by a fan of Richard Barnes (politician) --Tagishsimon (talk) 00:27, 11 February 2006 (UTC)

Well, it would be, being cut&paste from his website. Tearlach 22:59, 11 February 2006 (UTC)

• Blaine Boyer - baseball stub --Tagishsimon (talk) 00:32, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
• Garret Bright - cut from a biog?

February 9, 2006

• Pyromania - Came there from {{user pyro}}. The article looks like a bunch of thoughts/observations dumped together. --Misza13 ^(Talk) 19:49, 9 February 2006 (UTC)
• Jessica Smith (editor)((fl. 1920s-30s) American editor & CPUSA(?) activist, married to 2 members of spy-ring support team)-Dump job by me, from husband's bio. Brutal copy editing, & research needed.Jerzy•t
• Ware group (CPUSA)(1930's Red-spy-support ring among Federal employees)+ Pre disambiguated title against better known orgs called "Ware Group" - Another dump job by me, out of the formless Harold Ware "bio".Jerzy•t

February 8, 2006

• DJ Aakash - this is just a block of text and needs formatting and grammatical changes to make sense. A complete re-write is probably in order Chrisblore 23:26, 8 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Article was PROD'd --lightdarkness ^(talk) 16:44, 18 February 2006 (UTC)
• Writing implements The English and German versions (and possibly the other versions in different scripts) could be aligned somewhat more. Jackiespeel 17:01, 8 February 2006 (UTC)
• Nazia Iqbal: block of text inserted into {{pakistan-bio-stub}}. Needs rewriting and NPOVing. Sarge Baldy 17:20, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

• As a sidenote, it's not surprising to me that random IPs are finding ways to bypass the new article creation restrictions. Sarge Baldy 17:24, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

• Shannon Thomas (singer). References? -- User:Docu

February 6, 2006

• Six lower realms - grammar, layout. Megane 03:19, 7 February 2006 (UTC)
• The Secret Syde and Steve DeVito are fancruft textdumps. They don't always make sense ("some tracks gained airtime on the BBC in the Netherlands"). Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 23:51, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Bob Fink. An AfD resulted in Keep and cleanup. Website dump full of inline links; needs fact-checking and copyediting to standard biographical format. Tearlach 20:47, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Jacob Faust - A victim of an incident involving San Diego police; some might talk about a "trigger-happy police officer", others about a "suicide by cop". Originally, the article was an opinion piece by his family member or another supporter. - Mike Rosoft 09:51, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
  • On VfD now. - Mike Rosoft 18:03, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
    • Article has been deleted as of Feb 19, 2006. --Lendorien 21:59, 24 February 2006 (UTC)
• Albert Einstein This is a featured article. There is now a tag saying the factual accuracy is disputed. There is a great deal of information and misinformation on the Internet about Einstein. Inaccurate material may have been put into the article in good faith. The article meeds to be brought back to featured standard if there are inaccuracies.Barbara Shack 16:11, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

• Have you looked at the history of this page? It is a mass of reverts. I suspect that a repaired page would inevitably revert to non-FA status again. Which is most unfortunate. Perhaps it could use some sort of special case handling? An edit freeze with a separate edit page that gets peer-reviewed before replacement? — RJH 21:45, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• RJH has a good solution.Barbara Shack 19:46, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

• Domab Needs copyedit (written by non-native english speaker?), fact checking, wikifying. Gsd97jks 14:03, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Saint Francis Seraph Church - wikification, encyclopedic tone needed. Just got off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 15:21, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Reconquista: A potentially excellent article with a lot of content and useful images. Could become featured. It suffers from poor English, a somewhat narrow perspective, and a lack of precision. Examples: "For three years, Moors ran all over Hispania". "There was religious repression and an extra tax for Christians" (which is sonewhat misleading - all non-muslims paid poll- and property taxes in lieu of Zakat).--Stephan Schulz 21:52, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

February 5, 2006

• Living Things - Need to be put in some sort of order, all it is one long paragraph.
• Element X - Wikified this, but info is confused and unstructured. Scientist needed--Dicdoc 18:30, 5 February 2006 (UTC)

Cleanup probably a waste of time: it doesn't look likely to survive the AfD. Tearlach 20:42, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

• Egyptian Navy - History section in particular needs various cleanup tasks, but someone with some knowledge in the topic would be better equipped.
  • Most of the above has been directly copied from another poorly written article on a different site. Unreferenced, incomplete.--Dicdoc 12:17, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
• Johan van der Walt - Needs to be structured and needs grammar correcting. Also needs some more substantial content to be added. Chrisblore 00:06, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

February 4, 2006

• Intercollegiate Sailing Association - Needs formatting cleanup, otherwise good article.
  • Done--Dicdoc 14:51, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
• Selected Characteristics of Occupations Defined in the Revised Dictionary of Occupational Titles - Added content to correct problem with context. --Traverlaw
• Street furniture - a large chunk is written from the perspective of the advertising industry and uses strange expressions like Street furniture families. --ReddyRose 18:00, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
• Fordonia leucobalia - this is quite messy. Needs expanding.
• Ishvara - conflation with God.
• Dynkin's lemma - I created this page and added content, but I don't know how to make it look good. Could somebody bring the page up to Wikipedia standards? Thanks.
  • Sorted --Dicdoc 13:56, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
• Saved by the Bell - fancruft on acid. Way too long. Too many sections. An inappropriate fansite-type tone. Yikes. Needs some major tightening. --Woohookitty^{(cat scratches)} 11:14, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
  • As a 'low hanging fruit' I split off the long list of minor characters onto their own page. The main article is now a lot shorter, without throwing away any information for those who might want it. Jamse 18:01, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Anakin Skywalker - Poorly structured, inaccurate plot development, lacks pictures, lacks spoiler warning. Requires extensive cleanup.
  • Had a go at this - added brief intro and tidied up. Most of the above problems persist, needs Star Wars fan who can write. Think some of this article repeats info from Darth Vader article.--Dicdoc 21:46, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
  • I checked out the history. For two weeks prior to today, it was a hard redirect to Darth Vadar. Prior to that a soft redirect there. I know that even earlier, some editors wanted Darth Vadar to redirect to Anakin Skywalker. I myself would revert to either of the redirects, but I refuse to edit Star Wars articles. -Acjelen 01:07, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
• Betty Friedan -- not encyclopedic, format problems. Jim62sch 22:36, 4 February 2006 (UTC) (UTC) It's been significantly improved in the past two weeks. I'm going to do a little cosmetic copyediting. John Broughton 20:46, 23 February 2006 (UTC)
• Satyasheel Deshpande - tagged this earlier today, forgot to list it here. Reads like a press release, and needs some wikification and reformatting. Microtonal 03:49, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
  • It reads like a press release because it is off of Styasheel's website. I tagged it with a copyright violation. Miguel Cervantes 04:08, 5 February 2006 (UTC)

February 3, 2006

• Traveling Ham Agency - This page needs expanding. A LOT of expanding.
• Red Youth (Norway) - This page is a mess, and needs to be made more readable. Caps are used several times, and the grammar and spelling could be a lot better.
  • I worked on this a little, and I think most of the major mistakes are gone. I have no familiarity with the source, however, so I think it still needs cleanup from someone who knows what is going on to make sure everything works (And to make sure I didn't make any mistakes in my attempt to make sense of the article). Miguel Cervantes 22:44, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Did some more work on this, it looks a lot better but needs to be fleshed out a bit by someone with sutiable knowledge of the topic--Dicdoc 14:26, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
• Sonic the Hedgehog - Some parts need to be changed to prose from bullet points or short paragraphs; others need to be trimmed down. Also, some sections may be more appropriate in Sonic the Hedgehog series, Sonic the Hedgehog (16-bit), Sonic the Hedgehog (Archie), Sonic the Comic etc. --Nick R^Talk 20:46, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Il Giornale - This page was linked from List of newspapers, which made it sound like an advertisement, unless I am missing the point on the whole. Mishap85 20:41, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Block dump - Poorly written, bad grammar and spelling
• I have improved some of the grammar and style on this, but it still needs further cleaning up by someone with better knowledge of the subject. Twit8514
• Shooting range - This article is currently very US-centred, with little information on ranges in other countries or general information. While much of the content here probably applies generally, it needs to be distinguished from content which applies only to the US. Rmbyoung 11:22, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Yaf 21:39, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• $ale of the Century - text is repetitive and disorganised between the various international versions. Needs rationalisation and maybe splitting. Fat Red 05:57, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Sloppy Joe - Text rambles and some information needs to be verified. Metzgermeister 05:29, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Huaca. There is good information in here, it's just not organized and large portions of the article are very confusing, and perhaps some sections should be in a different article. I don't know enough about the topic to begin tackling it. Gsd97jks 04:05, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• John Van der Kiste ComputerJoe 18:45, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Low dropout regulator ComputerJoe 20:05, 3 February 2006 (UTC) Megane 16:50, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
• Table of Chinese monarchs - This list is incredibly confusing. I'm not quite sure if the whole table thing works, it looks hideous. List of Emperors of Japan has a better table anyway, makes the article look tidier. And there are other ways of doing it, like they have done in List of British monarchs. Looks much better. Plus "xuan1 zhao1 di4" + the infinite amount of other names should be written by using the accent markings, not numbers. I mean xūan zhāo dì, not xuan1 zhao1 di4. --Thorri 21:13, 3 February 2006 (UTC)

February 2, 2006

• Jacob Neusner - I have been meaning to get to this article for a while. Lots of information that looks like it was copied from somewhere else and needs rewriting/wikifying. Copy of sample text "But systemic analysis and interpretation requires us to ask questions of history and comparison, not merely description of structure and cogency. So in this exercise Neusner undertakes first description, that is, the text, then analysis, that is, the context, and finally, interpretation, that is, the matrix, in which a system has its being." The honorifics are over the top.

In short, it's an essay, not an encyclopedia article. The 116k Jacob Neusner bibliography also looks like overkill. Tearlach 04:50, 4 February 2006 (UTC)

• Bangalore — a pretty comprehensive article, just needs some grammar and structural cleanup. See Talk:Bangalore (To-do list) for details.
• Robot - used to be a fairly focused article on a rather large topic, but lately wiki-entropy has taken over, and a vast amount of random and poorly worded sections have slipped in. Needs a thorough cleaning and tightening to the core of the topic, along with sources for the assertions made throughout.—LeFlyman 17:38, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
• Garry Shider(late '60s - ? musician) + dumped ad section for his manager & brutally cop-ed'd lead section. - still keeps calling him the author's buddy Garry, & needs attention from music-savvy editor who realizes that the Golden Age of Rock is not the late 1960s, but rather 14 or 15.Jerzy•t
• UGOPlayer This article is filled with POV and unencyclopedic content. Attempts to remove them have been met by reverts, and attempts to communicate with those people have so far been fruitless. I'd nominate the entire article for deletion, but I think some stuff should be kept (someone let me know if there's some better place to list this for some outside attention). Fagstein 18:48, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
  • Nominated for deletion. In my view, the site isn't notable. ComputerJoe 20:40, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
• John S. Barkat(mediation expert; probably auto-bio, but w/ definite signs of possible notabilty)+ I brutally wikified most of it, moved twd chronological bio, but ran out of steam. - In particular, i was not consistent abt which in-line ext lks to replace by rd or blue wiki-lks, and which to move to "Ext lks", and more dates must be researched or pried out of original editor.Jerzy•t

February 1, 2006

• Capoeira#Other Notable Mestres. Most of the articles on this list need, like Mestre Pastinha, topic sentences explaining that they are/were masters of the Afro-Brazilian martial art Capoeira. 86.139.250.97 17:29, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
• Rothesay Netherwood School -I don't know what to do, or what's wrong with this article. Could someone please help me. 142.68.126.189 11:10, 1 February 2006 (UTC) Kyle, February 1st 2006, 7:10am
• Josh Mankey - Reads badly, needs proof read and categorized. Highway 20:11, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
• Under Defeat - Seems like the entire article is copy and pasted from a different site. --Snkcube 07:49, 2 February 2006 (UTC) -- Was deleted as a copyvio; new article is a stub --Mackensen (talk) 16:08, 23 February 2006 (UTC)

January 31, 2006

• Caspian Tiger - Needs major grammatical and mechanical cleanup... also speaks in generalities and has information that should be linked to externally rather than elaborated on in the article. 68.81.164.226 04:14, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
• Ravne na Koroškem - This slovenian county needs proper formating Gugganij 16:28, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Frank Lowe. No idea what it's supposed to be about. -- Mpt 02:31, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Islamabad Thorough article, just needs to copyediting and spellchecking. Adhall 04:52, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Performed some spellchecking and very minor grammar cleanup. Guest458 13:21, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Fixed the grammar and spelling. Megane 16:22, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
• History of Nigeria Another potentially great article that needs some cleaning up. Adhall 04:53, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Tommy Westphall A potentially interesting article with messy setting out and some irrelevant information. --Cornflake pirate 07:37, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Malystryx - A dragon from Dragonlance series. A poorly written stub. More useful information can be found at Dragonlance Nexus, but note that the site is NOT copyleft. - Mike Rosoft 14:35, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• RPGFreeze(Game-fan site; Google suggests commercial)-Needs wikif'n & removal of PoV & gushing. Was falsely speedy-nom'd but may deserve AfD.Jerzy•t+ Has been speedied over my objection as "CSD A7, non-notable website, under construction)" which is fairly plausible & which i will not contest.Jerzy•t
• Early literacy Not encyclopedic. Most of the article is a series of bulleted list. Babomb 02:04, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
• Phoenix, Arizona -- a great article with some sections that need a little attention. Adhall 08:01, 1 February 2006 (UTC)

January 30, 2006

• Sabbatarianism - There's too much text to be a true disamig page, but no coherent articles to be easily split. -Acjelen 01:50, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• Divje Babe - sorry about the relist, but this really needs attention. I don't trust its neutrality, as it's written entirely by the company hosting the texts of the musicologist on one side of the disputed topic (and they're complete ignoring hefty hints that Wikipedia:Autobiography strongly discourages this). However, the article is so technical and disorganised that it's impossible to tell whether it's a fair assessment of the subject. Tearlach 00:50, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• McKenzie Friend - it seems as if the citations are not good and the intro para is not easy reading. The whole thing sounds more a like a law review article. Anyone like to help? Frelke 08:24, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• Lallemant has just been restored. Probably an attempted disambig. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 22:40, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

January 28, 2006

• Voting in Switzerland - can somebody improve the language of my article? --Keimzelle 20:45, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
  • I edited itHdstubbs 06:02, 29 January 2006 (UTC)
  • I suggested that this article be merged into the main article Switzerland (Talk:Voting in Switzerland) Adhall 03:11, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Constitution of Japan - the paragraph in The Potsdam Declaration section, as well as the many paragraphs that were originally added alongside it (which have since been removed), are found in the book Japan: A Country Study verbatim. It appears to have been lifted from this website. Ahhwhwhereami 20:51, 28 January 2006 (UTC)

  I think it's ok - the website states "This website contains the on-line versions of books previously published in hard copy by the Federal Research Division of the Library of Congress as part of the Country Studies/Area Handbook Series sponsored by the U.S. Department of the Army between 1986 and 1998." which I think means that the information is in the public domain, despite their claims of copyright.--Cherry blossom tree 21:36, 28 January 2006 (UTC)

• Hope - This page has unclosed parentheses and spelling errors.
  • Parentheses and spelling errors fixed. Still needs work on wording. —ERcheck @ 00:00, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
    • Looks fine to me... though the first couple of paragraghs spout words that a dictionary wouldn't know.... ( AKA: could use a little alternative wording ) Could be a little bit easier to read, but it follows all grammer stipulations.--Shark Fin 101 20:57, 10 February 2006 (UTC)
• Bianca Montgomery - At first this one reads rather well. But keep going! Too many exclamation points! And an overly conversational prose style! Gee willickers! Juppiter 04:22, 29 January 2006 (UTC)
  • I cleaned it up some! It could still use some work! Hdstubbs 03:42, 2 February 2006 (UTC)

January 27, 2006

• International Community School (USA) - Article has degraded...see history. "Mascot is the penis"? WTF??? School homepage is http://schools.lwsd.org/ics/ , District is http://lwsd.org
• History of Portugal (1777-1834) - It's a fine article almost featured-worthy. Just needs some cleanup and copyedit by a fluent English speaker. Thanks. Gameiro 19:36, 27 January 2006 (UTC)

  I've gone through it, though I may have missed some bits. See the talk page for comments.--Cherry blossom tree 23:45, 27 January 2006 (UTC)

  • Gone through some of it and found a few errors. Definatly a featured article.--Shark Fin 101 21:07, 10 February 2006 (UTC)
• Project Superstar - The area of Tan weilian has been added with too much "links" and so is the junayng area.TohccTALK  27 January 2006

• Kings of Easter Island - technically a list but wikification and clarity is needed desparately for non-listing sections. Also seems to be needing help of an (more) experienced translator.   freshgavin TALK    00:43, 27 January 2006 (UTC)
• Indo-European ablaut - Probably the worst-written, most unclear article I've ever read. I still have no idea what the heck it is. A total rewrite by someone who knows what they're doing is in order. Matt Yeager 00:30, 27 January 2006 (UTC)
• Microsoft - Under the first paragraph of the 2000–05: legal issues, XP, and .NET heading, the event dates are confusing and nonsensical at best. I am not sure if the information is wrong, or is just written in a way that makes it illogical.
  • This whole article is a mess and needs some serious attention. I did what I could with the section mentioned. Adhall 07:17, 27 January 2006 (UTC)
• Brian Lara Cricket Needs a lot of work done to it to get it up to standard. I've corrected a few glaring mistakes but it needs someone who actually owns the game to make the necessary improvements to it.

January 26, 2006

• Oxford University Conservative Association - has had a rash of edits and consists of in jokes about present and recent members, not an encyclopaedia article. Needs thorough rewrite. David | Talk 18:10, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
• Motoko Kusanagi - this article needs a clean up because of horrible wording in character analysis, and doesnt really hacve enough info sources. Empty2005 10:20, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Already took care of it Empty2005 03:04, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
• Lloyd Grant - Very short, uninformative article, needs more factual content and writing style improvement. Jbjalbrz 04:20, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
  • This article doesn't really have anything more than when it went through AfD (and it certainly doesn't describe how he has got any more notable), so I have changed it back to a redirect to Metallica. NicM 12:41, 26 January 2006 (UTC).
• Snow City - Needs wikifying and the "Visitor Information" section isn't very encyclopedic. --Thorri 14:55, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Taken care of. rob 17:41, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• List of people by name: Arb(list of Arbuthnot and Arbuthnott people) Same 3 screenfuls of unpiped Dab-page-formatted entries that were listed here a few wks ago, when they were instead part of List of people by name: Ar.Jerzy•t

January 25, 2006

• 50 Cent was shot nine times in front of his grandparents' house. Chest bullet wounds have been shown numerous times including on MTV Base and Get Rich or Die Tryin'. --userx
• Face (slang) - Might well be a candidate for VfD, but not sure about that. File:Huskyeye.jpg Husky 21:57, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

Page has been deleted per VfD decision. --Lendorien 01:53, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

• i-drive - Aborted article, absolutely nothing links here, it links nowhere. No categories, links, sources. The site it points to is now under a different name, is it a different company? It still offers the same kind of service. Is this website/company notable enough for an article? I'm not too sure, but I'm not willing to put the effort into tidying up something so trivial right now and am passing the baton. - Hahnchen 03:26, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

I did my best - wikified and reworded. Adhall 17:15, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

Some context and refs added. Tearlach 17:32, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

• Bailey Arboretum the article could have been copied from a brochure, the phrasing is so advertising-like . --Melaen 15:36, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

Categories added and section snipped: yes, it was a cut&paste off the Bailey Arboretum website. Tearlach 17:32, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

• InterFaith - it starts with the title and gets worse: poorly structured, confusing, lots of irrelevent stuff, just a messy patchwork; probably needs rewrite. NicM 18:36, 25 January 2006 (UTC).

I have suggested a merge/restructuring with ecumenism and my Interreligious relations. There should be an article (or group of articles) on how religions interact and work with each other, coordinating groups etc. Jackiespeel 14:38, 27 January 2006 (UTC)

• Cord Automobile - Has an unencyclopedic writing style. --ApolloBoy 19:27, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

January 24, 2006

• Fear of the Dark (2001 film) - Never heard of this film but this is very POV and light on any info. --86.144.115.45 02:36, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
• Alrewas - Requires clean up and wikification. It reads too much like a copy-and-paste from another article - maybe plagiarism/copyright issues? DWaterson 00:39, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

Dealt with by snipping copyvio. Tearlach 17:10, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

• Toyota Supra - Section 6 ("Project 395") is patently lifted directly off another website. (e.g. "Our sources suggest Toyota is...", and various other references to an editorial body)
• Johnny Lee Clary - The entire text is lifted from the bio on his website. quadratic 06:23, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• California electricity crisis - Jumbled citations HiFiGuy 01:15, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Dodge M37 G741 Cargo Truck - Infodumpish. The article could incorporate some of this information, or perhaps become a stub with a large table. Michael Slone (talk) 02:45, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Pompey Lots of garbage edits, and I'm not up on Roman history enough to choose a decent version to which to revert.Pollinator 05:06, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• State estate tax - Bad stub (two sentences, of them one unverified). Perhaps it should be transformed into a "list of state estate tax laws". - Mike Rosoft 11:35, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Submerse - The article reads like a band vanity, but in fact it does make a claim of notability per WP:MUSIC (the band has made several tours in multiple countries). Still, it (especially the last paragraph) needs to be cleaned up for more appropriate encyclopedic tone, as well as ome general cleanup. - Mike Rosoft 13:34, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Writing materials should not redirect to reading - should be the "things actually used" (or to writing instruments). Jackiespeel 19:00, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Redirected to Writing implement --Adhall 18:36, 25 January 2006 (UTC)

January 23, 2006

• Noise control - Has some serious formatting issues and it almost sounds like an advertisement. --ApolloBoy 06:28, 23 January 2006 (UTC)
  • This article has some potential, but needs some help. The original author wrote mostly about noise control products. Please see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Noise_control --Adhall 17:09, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
• Glossary of Rhetorical Terms - There is no content to it at all. There is a list of the letters of the alphabet however no words... - (Erebus555 20:46, 23 January 2006 (UTC))
  • That link is now a redirect to Glossary of rhetorical terms, which is up for deletion. -Acjelen 18:23, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Official position - Needs internal link creation and explanation of what the title is. - (Erebus555 20:48, 23 January 2006 (UTC))
• SMIDSY - What exactly needs done here? I cleaned it up slightly, and got rid of un-related info, it's still really small. --Highway 17:56, 29 January 2006 (UTC)
  • It should be redirected to Motorcycle safety where the phrase is referred to and explained. I have no idea how to do this I'm afraid.SOPHIA 21:30, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Chew Valley Lake - Someone added a clean up tag to this page suggesting it read like a tourist brochure - I've tried to make the langauge less flowery but would appreciate someone else having a look Rod 13:13, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
  • I think it's good the way it is. Jfbcubed 20:04, 26 January 2006 (UTC)

January 22, 2006

• Creator deity - very limited scope.
• Edward Davy - I ran into this via a content RfC. Polemic, original research, copyvio from the ODNB... I wouldn't know where to start. Tearlach 12:06, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

Someone dealt with it. Tearlach 17:06, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

• The Jackal (fictional character) - Major spelling and grammar problems 68.43.57.32 05:05, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

After some work by various people it's now not too bad, but could still do with attention from someone who knows the book and both movie versions. Jon Rob 13:39, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

• Idiot Pilot - As the author might put it, this article needs a "kick in the balls". --Trafton 01:55, 22 January 2006 (UTC)
  • The original article was clearly written with self-promotion in mind. I revised the tone and cleaned it up a bit. Adhall 08:11, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
• Led Zeppelin II - The article needs serious grammatical corrections, and reads a little to POV for Wikipedia. Jim62sch 02:17, 22 January 2006 (UTC)
• The Great Saiyaman X - Needs serious wikifying, formatting and possibly copyediting. And imagination. -Thorri 08:44, 22 January 2006 (UTC)
• Illegal drug trade —alxndr ^(t) 21:15, 22 January 2006 (UTC)
• Dana Beal —alxndr ^(t) 21:15, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

January 21, 2006

• John Denver - skimpy article that places trivia over important things. Carolaman 20:10, 21 January 2006 (UTC)
  • I would argue this doesn't need clean-up. ComputerJoe 21:21, 23 January 2006 (UTC)
  • As a person who was a huge Denver fan in my youth (even met him in person once) I would agree that the article is adequate as is, though of course there is plenty of room for expansion. Crypticfirefly 04:01, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Raccoon City - this article looks really messy, needs a major copy edit and needs sub headings. In other media needs a major copy edit aswell Empty2005 10:00, 21 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Already cleaned up the article! Empty2005 08:06, 23 January 2006 (UTC)
• Erik Olofsson - article is currently a succession box with three stub tags and a category. No text. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 00:07, 21 January 2006 (UTC)
  • This is a duplicate of Eric (V) of Sweden which has all of sixteen words.--Cherry blossom tree 20:51, 23 January 2006 (UTC)
• New Partners On The Block - about an episode of the children's cartoon Bonkers, and may not even be a necessary article. Also requires major grammatical fixes. Davis21Wylie 00:22, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Greg Davis - Well to anyone who knows anything about him, this needs attention. It also needs a diambiguation to Greg Davis (coach). Rmt2m 01:36, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Selena Steele - wikification, sourcing, NPOVing - barely got off AfD alive. Johnleemk | Talk 04:58, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Major League Baseball television contracts - The article is currently 137 kb in size. It either needs to be split into sub-articles or dramatically condensed. Require major re-organization. --Madchester 09:05, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Episodes of Lost (season 1) -- article is far too long and needs to be trimmed using a synoptic style rather than an all-encompassing description of each episode. -- Jim62sch 16:00, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

January 20, 2006

• St. Augustine's High School It was put on the list, may need better tables RobbieNewton 17:13, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• Crime reconstruction. Huge pile of copy-pasted text. Copy-vio/original research possible. --Misza13 ^(Talk) 10:42, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• Virginia Cavaliers (historical). Not sure if this is copyvio: while source is a 1904 book, text is cut&pasted from here. Anyhow, it's unencyclopedic and biased: "But the people, who had been long imbibing the spirit of liberty in their forest home, at last rose in rebellion against the tyranny of their cynical old governor" and more in that vein. Tearlach 08:45, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• Secular_religious_power is random. If there is an article there, I can't find it. Clean-up definitely needed, if not out-and-out delete. Miguel Cervantes 02:58, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
  • I think that is more a candidate for a speedy delete than anything else -Acjelen 22:20, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
    • Done. - Mike Rosoft 11:37, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Hylocereus undatus contains only POV nonsense (besides the taxobox, that is). I don't know if I should list it here or on AfD, though... --Fibonacci 06:42, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

I suggest merging it with pitaya, of which it's a variety. Tearlach 08:49, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

It wouldn't need any merging, for it does not contain anything which isn't already on the article pitaya. --Fibonacci 14:40, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

Redirected then, with taxo-box saved on Talk page for merging. Tearlach 09:37, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Donald Fletcher(Fly-by-night 1890s developer bio): 2 lines on him should be retained as stub; remaining 4 may need to go into Aurora, Colorado or be discarded as redundant. Style edit what remains.Jerzy•t
• Jodie Marsh - A large section was added and now the whole article needs to be cleaned up, I think. -Sweetie Petie 10:17, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

The section was a copyvio from [2]. It's been removed. ErikNY 20:45, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Quiroga - needs wikification, possible turning into disambig. Just survived AFD, barely. Johnleemk | Talk 11:40, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• The Wallace and Ladmo Show - reads very much like fancruft, particularly in the decade sections. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 13:58, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• BAFTA - The article needs cleaned-up as it is too cluttered. Ixistant 18:45, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

January 19 2006

• Oil pastel - Article I am working on currently, I don't have very good grammer and I would like some help in the articles cleanup. I would also like to see if there is anyone one else who knows anything about Oil pastels and could help me with this project.

Graxe 21:22, 19 January 2006 (UTC)

• • The Art techniques and materials and writing materials articles could be expanded - at present the former is no more than a list of links, and both could be linked from this article. Other articles in this group could be expanded too.Jackiespeel 23:52, 19 January 2006 (UTC)

January 18 2006

• Walter Owen Bentley - Bad article in general, and many spelling mistakes. Not to mention the two HUMONGOUS images at the start and end. This article is a serious blight on Wikipedia! --Karch 08:06, 18 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Tidied up a lot, but badly needs more unique content (ie, not repeated in Bentley) from someone who has time or knows the subject. NicM 08:35, 18 January 2006 (UTC).
• Seri Pahlawan Gagah Perkasa - The opening introduction seems okay, but then it turns into quite a disorganised mess of a recipient list... Less of the recipient stuff, more about the award? KittySaturn 03:27, 18 January 2006 (UTC)

January 17 2006

• Gitara Moroso - needs some tweaking - could be more elegantly put (a definition of what "Cleanup" means?) and written as the fictional character she is. Jackiespeel 19:05, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• 24 (television) for reasons explained in the article's talk page. ErikNY 05:25, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Trolling for fish - Consists almost entirely of a quotation from Boy's Own Book of Outdoor Sports. Needs turning into a proper article with that as a source (and with a more specific citation than "early 1900s"). Hairy Dude 01:31, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Nick Launay - just one big block of text; needs categorization and better wiification; also I (just based on intuition) suspect copyvio...so maybe check that too. Cheers!--Jfurr1981 05:48, 17 January 2006 (UTC)

It was copyvio from the www.launay.com bio. I've reverted to the previous version. Tearlach 08:42, 17 January 2006 (UTC)

• "Mark Paul" Sebar - wikification Johnleemk | Talk 14:28, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Reptet - Seems to be written by a band member. Needs wikification. Miguel Cervantes 17:37, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Antonio De Teffe -- see article's talk page Jim62sch 18:37, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Spiritus Christi sect, James Callan, Mary Rammerman - POV. Appears to be be biased against the group, too many statements of opinion. - Mike Rosoft 20:46, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• John Lesesne DeWitt - Seriously needs copyediting and wikification. --Thorri 21:01, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Mazin marji - No clue if this guy is notable, but the article definitely needs cleaned up. NicM 21:03, 17 January 2006 (UTC).

Afd'd: only 17 Google hits. Tearlach 09:22, 18 January 2006 (UTC)

• Jimmy Nixon McGarfield the 4th Grade President-for-life - Needs wikification. --Thorri 21:17, 17 January 2006 (UTC)

January 16 2006

• Footnote - I tried my hand at editing this article, but it needs community attention, mostly in clarity, tone, and a seamless voice. -Acjelen 05:31, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
• Cohabitation - A very large part of this article is a POV OR essay. This needs sorting out, perhaps even by removing unreferenced sections until they do become referenced. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 13:02, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
  • That's an original research dump that an anonymous user repeatedly adds to the article. I reverted boldly and drastically back a December 7 version before it was added. Article could still use attention. -Acjelen 18:20, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
• Modification of Political Parties Under the Restoration - context; possibly OR? Just survived AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 13:32, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
• Mel Reynolds somewhat entertaining, yet not quite encyclopedic. irony needs to be ironed out. ReidarM 14:47, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

Funkah dealt with it (just needed reversion). Tearlach 16:01, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

January 15 2006

• 000 emergency - Reads like some kind of kids' how-to-call-for-help guide. Alr 01:03, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Tidied it up a little but there's more to be done yet. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 147.10.217.45 (talk • contribs) .
    • Pretty much okay now, I think. NicM 20:09, 17 January 2006 (UTC).
• All pages contributed by User:Edbon3000 (contribs). A whole min-project could be made for these. Edbon3000 has been adding dozens of stubs for Filipino actors and directors from 1950 and earlier. All of them need help with formatting and grammar and categories. None of them have any sources and I haven't been able to verify any of them. It's been suggested in WP:ANI#User:Edbon3000 that Google simply doesn't show people in Filipino cinema but someone (maybe me) will start Afd'ing soon if some source isn't found. He seems to have stopped adding articles and isn't responding to anyone on his talk page. Good luck to whoever feels brave!  :) —Wknight94 (talk) 20:05, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

I'd say it was worth persevering. I was able to source Alessandra de Rossi, and "Alecs Bovick" was unfindable because she's actually called Aleck Bovick. Whether they're all notable is another matter. Tearlach 10:08, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

• After Eight seems to have been filled with publicity and commerical blurb. Not sure what to do with it doktorb | words 17:43, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Removed a few things to reduce the commercial feeling. I'll let someone else approve and remove cleanup tag. —Wknight94 (talk) 20:24, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• Sleepyshat needs grammar, syntax, and clarification. Maybe a delete, but I'll leave that decision up to someone else. Miguel Cervantes 04:48, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• The King William needs a lot of editing. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 01:04, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• Vio-lence - Band article needing lots of cleanup - grammar (many sentence fragments) and wikistyle. AUTiger ʃ ^talk/_work 01:17, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• 30footfall is an unorganized band article. Sycthos^Talk 03:17, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• Elevator levitation has little structure. Sycthos^Talk 03:22, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• Sports betting forum needs to be restructured into an encyclopedic article. Sycthos^Talk 04:07, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• Joan Rivers - "X-Forwarded-For: yahoo.com, microsoft.com, netscape.com, aol.com Client-IP: 183.105.244.126" I have no idea what that means, except that it doesn't belong to Wikipedia. The whole Joan Rivers article is full of them. --Thorri 15:57, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
  • After adding the cleanup tag those sentences mysteriously disappeared. Must've been a technical malfunction of some sort. --Thorri 16:00, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
• Superpower – judging only from what I've read of it, it looks like there are many minor mistakes, most notably lots of "it's" where there should be "its", and others which I don't want to try to correct with my own poor English.—Wikipeditor 20:15, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

January 14 2006

• Sir William Brockman. Help needed. Attempting cleanup, but user refusing to accept Wikipedia:Don't include copies of primary sources and general advice about irrelevant images. Tearlach 00:32, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• Tony Kiritsis - An anonymous user has tagged the article for cleanup. No explanation as to why. Please check the article and see if you think it needs cleaning up or if the tag can be removed. (Entheta 06:48, 14 January 2006 (UTC))
• Moss Folk needs a more encyclopedic tone. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 00:08, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

- I rephrased the entry so that it is more encyclopedia-like. However, it needs more content, which I can't provide due to my lack of knowledge on the matter. Fabricationary 03:37, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

• Inhibition - Needs expansion and wikification. --Thorri 17:43, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

Looks like part of a spam by an Alexander Technique fan (see 159.134.57.243 (talk · contribs). I've reverted to the original redirect to Inhibitor, which covers this definition already. Tearlach 02:09, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

• Akhil Bharatiya Vidyarthi Parishad Needs cleaning-up ComputerJoe 21:00, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

January 13 2006

• Emergency lighting - very confusing and badly presented. Needs cleaning up urgently. ComputerJoe 22:46, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

- I've done a clean-up on the article, but it made very little sense to me, both because of its poor writing and because of my lack of knowledge of the subject. I'm renaming it "Emergency Power Systems" as that seems most appropriate. Any Wikipedians who know about these kinds of things, please help in expanding/clarifying the article. Fabricationary 05:35, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

It seems to me that it should have been renamed to "Emergency power systems" instead. -- Doug Bell (talk/contrib) 07:39, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

• Chastity (comic book): This article is in bad need of attention. It lacks structure, sources, links to other articles or relevant content, and the prose isn't the best. I also added the Wikify tag, though I'm not sure if it's needed or not. -- TheMightyGrecian 19:57, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• Generation X. Appropriately enough the "13th" Generation article needs to be cleaned up on this 13th day of the new year. In addition to the rampant un-sourced opinion, the article is full of messy prose, much too much parenthetical clauses, and some rather bizarre running commentary in brackets throughout. I don't have the stomach for it today; I'm going to go have a nice lie-down.—LeFlyman 18:07, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• Idit Harel Caperton. The person is likely notable, but the article is a mess. It needs wikilinks, cats, sectioning, and the removal of pov/vanity language. I also redirected an identical article under the title of her maiden name. Youngamerican 13:57, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

likely notable - agreed, but the article certainly inflates her notability. "World renowned" doesn't exactly square with the Google hits ("Idit Harel Caperton" 61, "Idit Caperton" 243, "Idit Harel" 771). Tearlach 16:34, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

• McKittrick Canyon: direct lift of text from NPS website http://www.nps.gov/gumo/gumo/mckittrick.htm, likely PD but desperately needs rewrite to get rid of the unencyclopedic language. "During your visit to the canyon, strive to make your presence and impact indiscernible; consider yourself a guest in the home of creatures as significant as yourself." --Canley 07:32, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

I cleaned up the grammar, but not sure what to do about the language style --User:MrHand

• Assyrian people This article is in desperate need of a clean up to get rid of a clear POV. I can't list all the problems, but read through the article and you'll see a some clear examples of POV problems and lack of sources. There also seems to be some discrete attacks at other races. The Assyrian people is still a very misunderstood topic, and I'm afraid this will make things worse. Needs the attention of someone who isn't biased towards the topic and has a good general knowledge outside of history books. MercZ 06:57, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• Role of Women in Yugoslavia in the Twentieth Century - needs wikification, NPOVing. Just came off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 08:25, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• Malaysian New Economic Policy#Criticisms - needs wikification, NPOV. Johnleemk | Talk 10:51, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• Abid - Needs the sportsman's full name, as well as general copyediting. - Mike Rosoft 14:33, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
  • The copyediting is pretty much complete, but the article still needs cleanup for proper tone etc. And once again: what's the sportsman's full name? - Mike Rosoft 21:02, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
    • I have taken the article to VfD, where it was speedily deleted. - Mike Rosoft 13:42, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

January 12 2006

• Arnie Baker resume sound and insignificant wiki markup, but MoS conforming lead. Check for copyvio, & wikify.Jerzy•t
• Dungeon Explorer does not fit Wikipedia format and has very little information about the topic. Genocidal 03:55, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
• Natural Cures "They" Don't Want You To Know About - important article since the book it is a best seller and its very controversial. But. What a mess! I'm going to start to tackle it tonight but any help would be appreciated. --Woohookitty^{(cat scratches)} 08:39, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Well I'm finished. If anyone else wants to take a look, feel free. I removed about 80% of the article and fixed up the rest. --Woohookitty^{(cat scratches)} 12:34, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
• Serama - reads like an advert for someone's personal favored methods of caring for these chickens. Needs expert attention and NPOVing. Also needs wikifying. --Sparky Lurkdragon 23:58, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
• Support (mobile framework) - POV, barely survived AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 06:51, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

January 11 2006

• Kim Yoon-jin reads too much like a promotional biography and is not sufficiently encyclopaedic. Considering that she is a prominent person at the moment (appearing in Lost (TV Series)), this would benefit from cleanup and wikification. DWaterson 00:36, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
• Thriftbooks basically quotes a press release about the company. Very POV. Needs independent research and a rewrite. -- Scarequotes 23:51, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• Experiential world Needs to be an encyclopedia article. :P I'm No Parking and I approved this message 23:39, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Oh, lordy! This is one of a whole bunch of similar and completely unsourced managementspeak articles from one user, Kkilian72 (talk · contribs). Looks to me like original research that needs a blitz on source citation. Tearlach 00:59, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

• NRJ This article needs cleaning up as it is poorly written and there are numerous grammatical errors, or parts of the article which do not seem to make sense. Dmn1 20:47, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• Lizzie West. I added this to clean up - the original article is very poorly written with little citations or links. It also appears to be written in the first person. --Toddbloom7 14:28, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

WP:VAIN! Tearlach 01:02, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

• Tom Rubython, check history, two versions seem to exist, also needs likes etc. —siroχo 11:50, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Yep. Rubython is a bit controversial, and there's an anonymous edit war going on between a whitewash and a hatchet job. Certainly needs rooting in cited sources, and might need admin attention. Tearlach 01:36, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

• Something Happens - no links, little format - may not be notable. Velela 11:29, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• Lucky lager no links, not verifiable... 24.139.30.75 05:15, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Tagged and cleaned-up. ComputerJoe 21:32, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• Kenton ngo needs attention and general cleanup -- SusanLarson ^{(User Talk, New talk, Contribs)} 02:09, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• George Anthan & Manning, Iowa: need evaluation of lk & related content added by User:Vera Cruz, apparently a sock of User:Lir. I doubt Anthan is notable, & that the related material at Manning is relevant to it: i.e. consider AfD for bio & Lir-ectomy for the town.Jerzy•t
• All Dogs Go to Heaven 2 it's not up to, say, Care Bears: the Movie standards... Steve-O 03:58, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Cleaned up the article quite a bit, I'd say it's up to "Care Bear" standards now. --lightdarkness ^(talk) 15:47, 12 February 2006 (UTC)

*Safeguard (Soap) - wikification, NPOVing. Just got off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 12:39, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

• • Done. ComputerJoe 21:50, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• Ramanathan V. Guha - WP is not a CV host. Just got off AfD with unanimity to cleanup. Johnleemk | Talk 12:43, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• Xuxa. Some portions of this article were either written by non-native english speakers or were translated from another language. Its had some cleanup, but it really could stand with more. I'll work on it as time allows, but feel free to jump in and help!--Silverhand 17:28, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• José María Arizmendiarrieta. Needs wikifying. ComputerJoe 20:14, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

January 10 2006

• Weekday cartoon could use some cleanup. Also, I believe that there are some inaccuracies in this article, i.e., weekday cartoons started in the 1990's when I know as a fact that they existed before then. ErikNY 18:51, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• CoStar Group - reads like an ad, just got off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 08:21, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• Black Hole/Stimpy's Invention - needs wikification, POV and fact check. Johnleemk | Talk 08:58, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• TCF Financial Corporation - need Wikification and general clean-up. ComputerJoe 17:57, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• List of people by name: Ar#Arbut(IP's near-dump-job of more Arbuthnots and Arbuthnotts than i'd have guessed existed, with no evident concern for style and method of this page or its hundreds of fellow LoPbN pages):+ stripped non-bio lks, inserted needed headings, sorted out double-T cases. Knowledge of UK would be helpful for cleaner. Still needs check of bios against possibility of need for speedy or AfD, possible rd-lk removals, piping via normal inversion of given- and sur-names, alphabetization check, vital stats that presumably exist in the corr'g bios, and removal of titles (after gleaning the occupational info or info useful for telling e.g. the Charles A people apart).Jerzy•t
• Olga Viscal Garriga(Puerto Rican world-class political malconent) Remove PoV with a shovel.Jerzy•t
• Almeida Garrett(full name "João Baptista da Silva Leitão de Almeida Garrett" per article; Port. writer; dubbed (an ennobled as?) Visconde de Almeida Garrett) His confusing name situation needs clarification, see talk:Almeida Garrett.Jerzy•t
• Tony Torcato needs attention -- SusanLarson ^{(User Talk, New talk, Contribs)} 21:40, 10 January 2006 (UTC)

January 9 2006

• List of revived languages - Some portions clearly written from an ESL standpoint. ℬastique▼^parℓer♥^voir♑ 05:36, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• Family-friendliness:Very rough start; as i say at its talk, we need a decent article to lk the 165 PoV uses of "Family friendly" to (since very few of them can afford to nuance it sufficiently within the article).Jerzy•t
• JustSpeed - encyclopedic tone lacking. Johnleemk | Talk 09:12, 9 January 2006 (UTC)
  • After AfD, article merged with and redirected to Optical disc recording technologies. —ERcheck @ 00:51, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Planetary Society is written in the first person. — Ливай 12:58, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

It was a copyvio from [3]. I've reverted to pre-copyvio version, which still needs attention. Tearlach 13:20, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

• Eddie Perez (politician)(Harford CT mayor & ghetto success story): i killed a lot hagiographic & metaphorical language, but still should be checked for copyvios from 1 of its ext-rfs, the fairly gonzo-journalistic H. Advocate. Also, i did no checking to see whether (adequately sourced or not) the article may have been better before the 69.... IP(s) began editing (and getting rv'd by registered ed'rs).Jerzy•t
• GTA-SanAndreas.com. Seems to meet WP:WEB, but except for a nascent controversy with Jack Thompson most of the article is about the happenings of the forum and its various in-jokes and drama. Wrathchild 18:58, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

January 8 2006

• 1957 World Series - Nice article with a lot of loving care put in - but just doesn't work. See Talk:1957 World Series for my suggestions. —Wknight94 (talk) 23:34, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
• Rome, open city - Sounds like the original author just used an essay that he wrote on the topic. Does not appear to be a copyvio based on Google search. Needs a major cleanup/rewrite in order to make it encyclopedic. --Comics 22:20, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
• Katharine Weber - straightforward cleanup, wikify, trim. Author has released it from her own website, so don't slap a copyvio on it - but it needs rehashing for tone and excess detail. Tearlach 17:03, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Done Liamdaly620 19:41, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
• USCGC Itasca is now nothing but an informal note, not encyclopedic tone. Chris the speller 18:37, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Done. ComputerJoe 19:16, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
• Rain gardens - Looks somewhat like a how-to guide/promotional. (A part of the text has been copied from [4], but the contributor seems to be the text's author.) - Mike Rosoft 00:33, 9 January 2006 (UTC)
• Black ice This article is very confusing in general espically the part where it talks about ice on ships. Specificly, why would ice cause the ship to capsize? --ZPS102 02:50, 9 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Someone took out a lot of extra text about what "top heavy" means, and the section on ships appears adequate to me, possibly I'll add a bit back in. I added a slight amount of info & I am de-listing. Do you have any other specific objection to the article? tstockma13:17, 24 January 2006
• The SOMB Top 500 Albums of All Time Unformated text dump of random internet top-500 list. May be deletion candidate. Econrad 04:27, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

January 7 2006

• Triatoma - ComputerJoe 14:22, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
• Cheltenham Flyer - Needs some information, not just a list of 'castles' (what are they?). x42bn6 Talk 07:44, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

Done. The 'castles' are the British castles individual locomotives were named for (a page for that already exists). Tearlach 14:05, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

• Richard Schulze (naturopath) - major fact-check needed, since details come primarily from this promotional site. For starters, I can find no find verification for the College of Herbology and Natural Healing, UK, or the Osho School for Herbalists and Natural Healers, France, of which he's claimed to be director and codirector. Tearlach 04:56, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
• David Geoffrey Smith(apparently autobio of GPS &/or GIS standards setting)Reads like resume, including being pitch at an insider level; evaluate for AfD & whatever occurs to someone whose attention it can hold. (I am a GPS user, but it can't hold mine.) --Jerzy•t
  
• GWR 4900 Class 4920 Dumbleton Hall - grammar, wikification, context. Johnleemk | Talk 07:09, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

Done. Tearlach 14:16, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

• Richard Rhodes - Bibliography needs proper capitalization. --Tothebarricades 11:07, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Done. --Thorri 12:39, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
• Greece - Someone had put a cleanup tag on this article. I don't know what the original tagger had in mind. --Thorri 12:28, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

• Tag was placed due to bad formatting. It was cleanuped up. I'm No Parking and I approved this message 13:51, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

• Family Happiness - Needs expansion and formatting. --Thorri 17:23, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
• Patrick Moore - Reads like a collection of trivia rather than an encyclopedic article. Needs tidying up and reformatting. NicM 22:47, 7 January 2006 (UTC).
• Ratix Farrence - REALLY needs tidying up and reformatting according to Wikipedia standards. Right now its like an incomplete webpage, complete with a "Coming soon" list Copysan 02:22, 8 January 2006 (UTC)

January 6 2006

• Trading with the Enemy Act -- Needs a rewrite by a legal expert. See Wikipedia:Requests for expansion.
• Leatherhead -- Article is a long way behind other articles for similar sized UK towns. Has very little range of information, very dominant on the town's football club. Contains some unqualified subjective opinions, which have been criticised on the talk page or the article itself. Halsteadk 23:11, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Gwen Stefani -- Biography section is not detailed enough about her origins. The first paragraph goes from birth to her latest solo album. There isn't enough information about her childhood and/or upbringing. The sources are out there. Considering how much attention her singles get, I'm sure her fans can improve her article. --malber 15:11, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Marikina --Wikimol 00:29, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Fark.com clichés Confusing, not wikified. ComputerJoe 09:56, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Seismic retrofit - this might be a cleanup taskforce project. Just a nightmare. --Woohookitty^{(cat scratches)} 11:36, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Narmad ComputerJoe 19:04, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Robert S. Johnson This WWII ace deserves more than a couple of casual notes. Chris the speller 20:49, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
• Monsour del Rosario - Barely even an article... DrIdiot 02:07, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

January 5 2006

• Anne Murray Odd set up, certainly not wikified Godzreal 21:38, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
• Rocket u-boat --Misza13 ^(Talk) 13:07, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
• Sürstromming Groundfloor 13:37, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Done. I binned the text (a copyvio from [5]) and redirected to the better existing article at Surströmming. Tearlach 11:26, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

• Nanak Singh - now this one looks ugly - especially the image. Misza13 ^(Talk) 13:38, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• Done. I'm No Parking and I approved this message 23:37, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• Lebold Mansion - unwikified, needs context (such as where the building is). - Mike Rosoft 19:11, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• done. Gsd97jks 18:46, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

• London slang - generally sloppy article containing misleading and incomplete information. Needs rewriting if not to be deleted. Didsbury ryder 19:12, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
• Kit Rae - Catalog-style listing, little useful information. - Sycthos^Talk 22:51, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• Done - WP is NOT a Catalogue. I'm No Parking and I approved this message 23:37, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• Ismael Zambada García - The recent anonymous edit has made the article a mess. Information needs to be checked. - Mike Rosoft 23:44, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

January 4 2006

• Transcendental argument for the existence of God - Poorly argued and unclearly written. Thomas Ash 23:17, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• University College of the Fraser Valley - poor layout, lack of information, general overall cleanup needed. Luke 23:02, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

• A complete lack of information really. Put the pictures in a gallery. That cleaned up the layout issue. Put an expand tag on it for now. Never edited an article on a college. :( I'm No Parking and I approved this message 03:34, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• Fire boss --Misza13 ^(Talk) 20:46, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Clear Channel UK - eurgh. Intro fine, but the lists are corporate cruft and in eyewatering breach of layout guidelines. Is this stuff really notable and appropriate for inclusion? Tearlach 01:56, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Fender skirts - Needs to be expanded, apparently it was written by a GM fanatic.

Also needs fact-checking: a Google search finds no reference to a General Motors Slaughter of 1997, except as a neologism in a Wikipedia article just deleted as unverified: Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Slaughter of 1997. Tearlach 19:04, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

• Marlene Charell - Needs to be expanded, written by some admirer of this woman's physical body. Blnguyen 07:10, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Suburbass - pervasive typos, coding and grammatical errors --Foxxygirltamara 07:41, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Cynognathus - Needs to be formatted properly -- Phaldo 18:07, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Dates of classical music eras - some potential here, but may be better off merged -Acjelen 18:20, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• It Came from Somewhere Else - I wasn't the one who originally tagged this article but its infobox needs to be sorted out and the article itself needs expansion. --Thorri 21:17, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Richard Bullock(Cornwall-born frontier armed guard "Deadeye Dick", fl. late 19th cen): copy-vio chk; format.Jerzy•t

January 3 2006

• Gentrification
• Melrose Place -- A far over long intro needs a little restructuring. I'm No Parking and I approved this message 04:38, 3 January 2006 (UTC)

• List of AFL players to have played more than 300 games. Formatting is all wrong, not wikified. Rogerthat 04:10, 3 January 2006 (UTC)

• Betty Montgomery - Candidate for Governor of Ohio. Full of pov statements and needs wikified, structured, and an all-around cleanup. Youngamerican 00:59, 3 January 2006 (UTC) Has been done by others. I removed the tag. Youngamerican 14:00, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

• 4Kids Entertainment - 4kids Entertainment article after article merger needs some major TLC

• Christian Bartolf - This page needs to be an article, not a résumé. It's basically a list of minor works and writings and unnecessary facts. I've cropped it all out before but it keeps coming back. --Foofy 05:59, 3 January 2006 (UTC)

I've recropped it, on the grounds described in Talk:Christian Bartolf. If it reappears, Wikipedia:Don't include copies of primary sources and WP:VAIN should be invoked. Tearlach 02:18, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

• Gawker Media - ComputerJoe 22:01, 3 January 2006 (UTC)

Done. I'm No Parking and I approved this message 22:55, 3 January 2006 (UTC)

January 2 2006

• Curly Howard - Good article, has some awful style elements, though . Not quite sure what direction this should take. -Tim Rhymeless (Er...let's shimmy) 05:46, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Phynn - needs to be cleaned up and rewritten. The entire text is pasted from Phynn's website, and although I believe it is fair use and the original author is credited, FAR too many link tags are used (and most are to articles that do not/will never exist) and the user who "created" the article has tagged his name at the bottom. SlickDizzy 03:37, 2 January 2006 (UTC)

fair use - no way. Quoting verbatim the whole biography section from Phynn's website is well into copyvio. Tearlach 13:28, 2 January 2006 (UTC)

• Well, you learn something every day. I've paraphrased the entire entry the best I can, though I lack the knowledge or authority on the subject to really make it unique. However, it's better than original. SlickDizzy 02:48, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

• Sinead Quinn - article nominated for deletion instead of cleanup. Need to be re-written in an encyclopedic manner, wikified cut out some repetition of information and some sources cited. Evil Eye 01:49, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
  • Cleaned up. Evil Eye 15:25, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
• Cultural references in Pokemon - The section on the 8th movie needs a cleanup. I have absolutely no idea about its factual accuracy and therefore do not doubt it, but it does need a re-write by someone who knows about the topic (hence why it's here rather than copy-edit). Jezze 03:16, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Leonidas Kavakos - the text has been copied from various websites. Not sure if it's a copyvio either. Acyso 07:29, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Lolly badcock - Useless substub, but "porn star" is a claim of note. - Mike Rosoft 08:56, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Borovnica - mjaor clean-up and rewrite required - barely understandable. ComputerJoe 14:17, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Gorillaz - needs checking for proper spelling, grammar and style. Also full of weasel words and speculation, almost completely unsourced. --Fritz Saalfeld (Talk) 16:30, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Fm reception really stinks
• Richard Attenborough - Cleanup request. It is a good article but really does need cleaned up. --- Responses to Chazz's talk page. Signed by Chazz @ 23:26, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Computer language - Cleanup request. Obviously cut and pasted from elsewhere with little editing.--Wizofaus 23:37, 2 January 2006 (UTC)

January 1 2006

• Francisco Sabater Llopart - necessary, glad it's finally here, but alas is a quotation. Could be quickly fixed up. --Tothebarricades 11:45, 1 January 2006 (UTC)
• OpenDocument licensing - This article is not Encyclopedic, it is just a sum of citations and does not present clearly, each side point of view. The material is probably there, but it needs to be put in a proeminent position with citations to support each point of vue. The citations must be also be done according to WP standards i.e in italics or/and with identations. Please help, this is an important and controversial issue --Khalid hassani 12:53, 1 January 2006 (UTC)
• Prank Call of Cthulhu - A plot summary of ... what? Needs context and wikification, as well as cutting of excessive detail. - Mike Rosoft 14:25, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

Context done. Tearlach 14:49, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

• Chrysler minivans - This page is a mess-missing capital letters, confusing, incomplete. There needs to be more clear distinctions between the Dodge, Chrysler and Plymouth models. I don't know enough about the topic to fix the article, but perhaps the article should be split into three: Dodge Caravan, Chrysler Town and Country, and Plymouth Voyager. Airline 20:34, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

I would suggest splitting it into three pages as well, since all three models have different histories; the Voyager was a full-size van before 1984 and the Town & Country name was used for various models since 1941. --ApolloBoy 03:16, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

Basically done, but editing needs to be done to the new split articles. Airline 02:50, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

• Comparison of NVIDIA Graphics Processing Units especially needs an explanation of the table headers (eg. what is Fillrate? What is MT/s?) ··gracefool |☺ 23:57, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

I've created stubs for most of the terms which are wikilinked with basic definitions, the computer stub group might want to expand -- Tawker 09:08, 13 March 2006 (UTC)

December 31 2005

• Marty Wright - The Article needs to be put with images and cleaned up since theres a whole lot of redundant information. Joecashfire 20:44, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• List of towers - The article is huge, has large amounts of unverified information, and may need to be split. Zer0fighta 19:46, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Inner Religion - Needs cleanups and clarification. Totally lack context and wikification.Donbas 18:39, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

Intro for context added / snipped bulk of article copied verbatim from a website Tearlach 23:21, 2 January 2006 (UTC)

• Vanity press - Much of the article is a how-to (not get ripped off). The page gets linked to from Wikipedia:Vanity guidelines, so a reasonable number of people would read it. Andjam 14:31, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
  • Should be distinguished from self-publishing - which is a legitimate activity for certain groups and categories of publications. Jackiespeel 22:08, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Belmonte - This article is just a mess, I don't even get what parts of it is about... Obli (Talk) 11:53, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Laci Peterson - Urgent need of cleanup it is almost as bad as the Douglas Bader article ws yesterday (see below) -Chazz88 13:40, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Gay Nigger Association of America - Should this article even be? --Thorri 22:30, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

• It's been nominated for AFD 8 times, and has yet to be deleted. It's not going anywhere. Best to not worry about it. Ξxtreme Unction|_{yakkity yak} 22:51, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Why? It's informative. Al001 23:24, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

• Irish Property Bubble - Reads like an essay, smells like original research, and reeks of POV. Dig the scare quotes around the word "experts" in the first sentence. Ξxtreme Unction|_{yakkity yak} 22:51, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Microsoft Sidewinder Strategic Commander needs cleanup, mostly layout and wikification ··gracefool |☺ 02:24, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

December 30 2005

• Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland - Linked from the main page today. Has lots of potential but it feels like a rambling essay right now. --Woohookitty^{(cat scratches)} 01:32, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Poser - A lot of poor grammar. Rufous 00:35, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Ladder Bay, Saba, NA - Reads like a yachting guide. Alr 00:06, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
• Jamie Kennedy Experiment - Messy needs some word cleanup (past tense) some unecessary tv airing refrences Mike 17:37, 30 December 2005 (UTC)
• DICOM Group - is currently a promo page. --Tagishsimon (talk)
• Sherman"Big Train"Bergman - about a boxer, i think. It has no npov, needs a tidy up of the tables and lists. Title needs moving to something easiar to find. - (Erebus555 11:24, 30 December 2005 (UTC))
• Paliwal - Appears to be a text dump. - Mike Rosoft 18:05, 30 December 2005 (UTC)
• All of the pages for individual races linked under Star Control are very badly written and include images that may be beyond kosher size requirements for fair use. --Improv 18:33, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

December 29 2005

• Houghton, Washington - Ship stuff needs to be organised; paragraphing not so hot. --Trafton 09:47, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
• Skyscraper (film) HUGE run-on sentence/paragraph of plot summary that badly needs to be rewritten. The Chief 05:11, 29 December 2005 (UTC). I have turned the run on sentence into multiple ones, but it still needs some cleanup. Gurps npc 14:01, 29 December 2005 (UTC).

Tried to make the section less confusing, but since I don't know the movie someone else should take a loot at it as well. Nish81 13:23, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

• Les Claypool's Wikiquote - Needs cleanup, for unknown reasons.
• Jean-Marc Gauthier - Needs to be wikified. Reads like a CV. You can call me Al 20:37, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
• Peter Plogojowitz - Not an encyclopedia article; rather, just a dumped original text (which seems to be rather old and, as such, in public domain). - Mike Rosoft 23:18, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
• Mario Lemieux - an extremely important sports article, but poorly written with no external links, and too much focus on a season-by-season recap. Harro5 02:27, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

December 28 2005

• Saint Ralph (film) needs cleanup, wiki work... Steve-O 21:46, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
• Dutch literature#The Twentieth Century - Rest of article is OK, but 20th century developments are yet to be done. -- Curt Woyte 11:17, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
• Benzino- Article becomes very difficult to follow halfway through. --MOSforever 06:00, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
• Oxford Annotated Bible - Improper capitalization of proper nouns; peppered with POV language. You can call me Al 17:58, 28 December 2005 (UTC) I fixed some of these issues. Not sure about some of the others, so I left them in. Gurps npc 20:17, 28 December 2005 (UTC) Thank God you did - it was appalling beforehand! I've done a little more cleaning up... still needs more though. Thomas Ash 17:11, 30 December 2005 (UTC) I've finished the cleanup, removed the tag; it's still a stub. John Broughton 22:49, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

The cleanup is far from over. -Acjelen 04:26, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

• Leven, Fife Needs cleanup and perhaps a little wiki work --Chazz88 11:50, 30 December 2005 (UTC) (Originally posted earlier on in day but forgot to timestamp)
• Antarctic Geopolitical Thinking in South America Needs cleanup and perhaps a little wiki work --Chazz88 01:16, 29 December 2005 (UTC) (posted just now)

It's one of a group of articles (see also Brazil Antarctic Geopolitics, Chile Antarctic Geopolitics and Antarctic South American Geopolitics recent developments) that I think need looking at. The creator has written books on the subject and cites his books as the sole reference - hence POV is a bit of a worry. Tearlach 01:44, 29 December 2005 (UTC)

December 27 2005

• Blazer (arcade game) - Looks bad. --ComputerJoe 20:22, 27 December 2005 (UTC)
• Znaps vodka - Marked for cleanup by another user at the same time I was fixing the format; may still need some work (looks somewhat like a promotional). - Mike Rosoft 11:03, 27 December 2005 (UTC)
• Trinity Blood Canon - Large amount of content with inconsistent formatting and stylistic issues (the article reads as though it were partially or entirely copied and pasted from an online forum, complete with sidenotes within the article to those reading it requesting clarification).
• Guiding Light - Too much point of view and awful grammar (way, too, many, commas!)
• Executive Order 12711 - Excerpt from 1990 executive order regarding Chinese nationals, completely lacking context. Saint Midge 03:30, 28 December 2005 (UTC)

This should be deleted. It is simply an excerpt from a 1990 U.S. government document (executive order), posted by an anonymous user, probably copied from here: [6]John Broughton 23:01, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

December 26 2005

• iGeneration - no refences largely falls under WP:NOR, horrible style -Fabhcún 22:29, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
• The Indonesian Ethnic Chinese and the view of nationhood - This article reads like an essay or a homework assignment, especially the title and the opening sentence. If it is not original research, it needs to provide references and be re-written as an encyclopedia article. -Acjelen 05:58, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
• List of Christian apologetic works - Needs work on lists. Needs meaning of list and what the whole thing includes. Very large article. - (Erebus555 13:57, 26 December 2005 (UTC))
• Minimaze - Unwikified, possibly a text dump. - Mike Rosoft 18:20, 26 December 2005 (UTC)

Looks potentially promotional. A deal of it comes verbatim from www.minimaze.org, which could be awkward as the text there is under a Creative Commons Deed with some attribution strings attached. There's also duplication of new material in Minimaze and Atrial fibrillation. Tearlach 23:38, 26 December 2005 (UTC)

I have re-written much of this page, and wikified it. jamesmcclelland 21:47, 2 January 2006 (UTC)

• Centaur Technology - Looks like a promotional. - Mike Rosoft 18:24, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
• Panamanian Spanish - Wikipedia is not a dictionary. The list of words should be trimmed (only the most significant - and verified - words should be left). It should be made into an article about the dialect. - Mike Rosoft 19:06, 26 December 2005 (UTC)

December 25 2005

• Borregos Salvajes - ITESM Campus Monterrey I added context, but it needs a lot of polishing. It lost something on its way from Spanish to English. Chris the speller 16:08, 25 December 2005 (UTC)
• RDRAM This article has some very good basic information, however, it could be better formatted and contain more specific information on types of RDRAM and the history of the technology. 69.118.247.101 17:10, 25 December 2005 (UTC)

December 24 2005

• Zurna - I have wikified it, but it is still badly written and without knowing what the author had in mind I can't help more. --Misza13 ^(Talk) 12:34, 24 December 2005 (UTC)

I've created disambiguation pages for Zurna and Surna, and split Zurna into Zurna (the musical instrument) and Zurna (IRC). Both need cleanup. Tearlach 00:14, 25 December 2005 (UTC)

• gold cluster compound linkless and extremely specifc paragraph which conveys very little useful information. 213.105.81.183 13:30, 24 December 2005 (UTC)

December 23 2005

• Economic history of Britain - several sections, namely Breakdown of Pax Britannica and New Imperialism and Britain and the Colonization of Africa, Imperialism in Asia need to be shortened and broken up into smaller sections. --apollo2011 00:36, 23 December 2005 (UTC)
• IPTV has been cleaned up a little, but there are still a lot areas that are confusing or just unnecessary in the article. The explanation of what IPTV actually is won't help a person who has never heard of the technology before.
• Honda Pilot - Needs better organization. --ApolloBoy 04:48, 24 December 2005 (UTC)

December 22, 2005

• Send More Paramedics - the webpage says, and i quote: "They are all members of the undead." I would nominate it for deletion, but it is apparently a real rock band. The undead thing probablhy has something to do with their death metal style, but the way it is written it is very funny. But no too encyclopedic, i'm afraid.--Amir E. Aharoni 20:51, 22 December 2005 (UTC)
• Todor Zhivkov - Has some nonsensical phrases, lacks flow, has unencyclopedic formulation ("took Marxist ideals to heart" and others).--Amir E. Aharoni 20:35, 22 December 2005 (UTC)
• DeMatha Moderately recent article about a high school needs style/formating attention & needs to be more encyclopedic. EvilSuggestions 19:30, 22 December 2005 (UTC)
• Homer Simpson - Much like its subject, this article needs to lose some dead weight and get in shape. A loose collection of trivia with very little organizing principle. Inconsistent style. Is the quotes section necessary?
• Simon jones campaign
  • Moved to Simon Jones Memorial Campaign. NicM 12:54, 22 December 2005 (UTC).
• Kočevje - The article needs to become more uniform and the sections on the Gottscheer should be shortened and a new article should be created specifically for the topic. edolen1 17:38, 22 December 2005 (UTC)

December 21, 2005

• Yunmen Wenyan - page-long paragraphs, <blockquote>.

Moved all those koans out to a separate article (might want wikiquoting?), split off the biography. Still needs a lot of work, but could do with someone who knows the subject. - FrancisTyers 01:27, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

• Publicity - haphazard approach to orthography.
• Environmental Toxins and Fetal Development - I don't know enough about the subject to fix it, but it looks like a POV essay to me. Tearlach 02:23, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

Cleaned up references, made footnotes, sectionned, some grammar. Really needs an expert, not cleanup. - FrancisTyers 01:14, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

• Adam De La Lone: rem redundant & irrelevant retelling, with the olde French names, of Norman Conquest; decide whether what's left deserves article, or is worth merging with Norman Conquest, or should be AfD'd. (Note this started as 2-edit apparent genealogical vanity article by User:daniellane (contribs) who wonders who keeps changing "his page" on the 26-y.o. metal-rock specialist Daniel Lane.)Jerzy•t

In fact the whole thing needs fact-check-by-asteroid. I've been through various reference books and can find no verification of the existence of an "Adam de la Lone" as a commander in the Norman Conquest except for a much-copied and unsourced assertion on various family history websites. Tearlach 19:45, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

• Electrovalency - needs wikify, tone doesn't seem right and the table is confusing and ugly. NicM 18:00, 21 December 2005 (UTC).
• Reparations_for_slavery: May be important material and has a good base, but appears unencyclopediadic and emotive. Has been noted by others and already tagged NPOV but not many changes. Also needs references and citations --Sajendra 18:26, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

December 20, 2005

• Cognitive functions - Someone's put lots of work into these tables. Too bad they're full of completely inscrutable psychological jargon. It seems to have something to do with the Myers-Briggs test. rspeer 20:40, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
• Pibbler - somewhat confusing. Needs tidying up. Zav 19:36, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
• Chris Langham - needs tidying and reordering
• Salman Butt - POV issues. Primarily with overuse of superlative adjectives which lessen the factual aspects of his performance.
• Vagn Holmboe - Badly written (improperly punctuatated, awkward sentences) and could use some expansion as well.
• Caesar's civil war - Poorly written as is, and also desperately needs expansion if anyone has expert knowledge about the subject. The Chief 02:39, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
• Non-Muslims Interactants with Muslims During Muhammad's Era - needs to be renamed (to what I don't know), rewriting in encyclopedic tone, and more context. Johnleemk | Talk 09:22, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
  • I have set up the page Interreligious relations (which needs developing) which is probably a good starting place. Jackiespeel 13:01, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
  • Mostly done, just really needs moved to a better title. NicM 14:18, 20 December 2005 (UTC).
• Rabbit Redux needs a little cleanup after merge. Easy for someone who knows the book. Chris the speller 23:45, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

December 19, 2005

• Godzilla - POV, horribly bad grammar in spots (grates on the eyes), repititive... 203.115.177.114 16:53, 19 December 2005 (UTC)
• View Askewniverse - A fairly important and oft-linked-to article, but right now it's a mass of incoherent lists, incomprehensible writing, in-jokes and unexeplained references and abbreviations of limited use to anyone not already well-versed in the films.

--Misterwindupbird 00:26, 19 December 2005 (UTC)

• Material Cause - A quite stubbish article on an important Aristotelian term/idea. No links in article despite its being littered with related topics. I would clean it up myself but I am currently writing an essay in part on material cause and simply don't have the time.

--mswer 6:36, 19 December 2005 (EST)

• RLM numbering system for gliders and sailplanes - Needs tidying up, perhaps restructuring. NicM 15:57, 19 December 2005 (UTC).
• Arcbeetle - Barely survived AfD, needs wikifying and rewriting in encyclopedic tone. Johnleemk | Talk 16:15, 19 December 2005 (UTC)
• Peter-Ernst Eiffe - Needs wikify, copyedit, partial translation, etc. There is a substantial article de:Peter-Ernst Eiffe if any German speaker wants to add content. NicM 18:28, 19 December 2005 (UTC).
• William S. Farish suite: about 20 titles (including the 2-month-old C-u nom William Stamps Farish II), probably counting rdrs like WSF IV to WSF III, that are hits in [7]. See Talk:William S. Farish#Desperately Seeking Cleanup.Jerzy•t
• Abatwa - Someone added a conflicting viewpoint but didn't work it into the article. Contains the text "This is an incorrect reading of the myth of the Abatwa." -GregoryWeir 20:40, 19 December 2005 (UTC)

December 18, 2005

• Ego, superego, and id - A pretty important subject, yet the article is very short, inconsistent, and possibly incorrect. Only one issue (out of eight) on the talk page has been answered. Just a little knowledge is needed to fix it up. Twilight Realm 22:12, 18 December 2005 (UTC)
• Cameo-Parkway Records - confusing, poor grammar. NicM 17:20, 18 December 2005 (UTC).

December 17, 2005

• Eastside, Long Beach, California - Is this a real location? Alr 02:01, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
• Frappuccino - I orginaly made a red lnik to this article. After someone else started it I checked back and it doesn't look right. It is disorganized, leaves out vital information, and skips around alot. It is also under wikified. Tobyk777 02:19, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
• Education_in_Germany - it seems to me that parts of this article were translated by Babelfish or some other automated service. Additionally, some of the information (particularly in the "Situation today" section) appears outdated or incorrect. I work in a German Gymnasium and some of the minor details are blatantly incorrect, at least for our school! Mirandom 07:27, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
• Lyor Cohen - needs more copyedits, organized into subheadings. --Howrealisreal 21:44, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

I copyedited this somewhat, but it still needs a bit more work. Perhaps someone more familiar with the subject could organize it into subheadings? Molimo 23:54, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

• W. Patrick Lang - Needs references, copy-editing, and formatting.--Muchness 00:07, 18 December 2005 (UTC)

I copyedited this, but it could still use some references and formatting.

December 16, 2005

• Mail-order bride - Style, relevance, sources and accuracy need serious attention. See talk page. --The Famous Movie Director 00:54, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
• The Great Scandal - Original subject charges that both Protestant and Roman Catholic clergy failed to use their moral authority to condemn Adolf Hitler. This article presents it only as an accusation against Roman Catholics. Article came up for deletion a month ago: I voted keep and cleanup. The omission has not been corrected. Durova 16:05, 16 December 2005 (UTC)
• Telemundo - A mess created by the same user who did a bad job with MSNBC. ErikNY 15:54, 16 December 2005 (UTC)
• Folkies - An absolute mess. Alr 01:34, 16 December 2005 (UTC)
  • I'd vote for deletion. The title isn't right anyway. --The Famous Movie Director 01:04, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
  • I agree - the amount of work to make it NPOV would be excessive Jon Rob 15:09, 30 December 2005 (UTC)
• Gulf rupee - consists mainly of an excessively long article excerpt. Alr 01:34, 16 December 2005 (UTC)
• Toyota Aygo - A little messed up.
• Pangu - poorly formatted.
• Booster Chronicle - No formatting at all, unknown source of information, provide little to no information
• Axial Age poor formatting and style, perhaps POV. Had cleanup tag before, seems to have been prematurely removed. Joriki 17:27, 16 December 2005 (UTC)

• I did some cleaning up, could use a little more. Next editor, please do a little more, and/or remove the tag. Chris the speller 18:14, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

• I've done some more cleaning, but the original was not very clear. It needs sources, and cleanup from someone who knows more about the subject. NicM 18:35, 17 December 2005 (UTC).

December 15, 2005

• tripwire - Should be a disambig page I think, or atleast __ NOTOC __ added. --Unforgettableid | talk to me 08:56, 15 December 2005 (UTC)
  • Basically is a disambig page already. I would second that. Kntrabssi 18:18, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

December 14, 2005

This section left intentionally empty. Zsinj 22:25, 5 February 2006 (UTC)

December 13, 2005

• M.O.D. Needs a much better article tone Avador 19:53, 13 December 2005 (UTC)

December 12, 2005

• The_Fabric_of_the_Cosmos- "Greene's language is witty and irresistible" hardly counts as NPOV, among other problems. AustinZ 21:30, 12 December 2005 (UTC)
• Robert Siodmak - Seems to be taken from a book (I'm not sure). Anyhow, it needs to be wikified and also divided into sections to make it readable. (Entheta 18:38, 12 December 2005 (UTC))

• InterPride / IALGPC - Needs wikification and some rewrite. Not sure if article is notworthy as I know nothing about them, but google has almost 34K results listed [8] - PS2pcGAMER 22:37, 12 December 2005 (UTC)

December 11, 2005

• List of mesons - inconsistent use of <math>.
• Uberto Zanolli Seems partially translated from Spanish and/or Italian. I did some cleanup, but many words escape me - corrs, catedratic, ponencies. Chris the speller 19:29, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

Needs checking for copyright, being a close translation of the official website. Tearlach 17:37, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

December 10, 2005

• Hendrick Hamel - Two big sections look like they were copied from somewhere and are a mess. One of them is in another language. They look suspiciously like copyright violations too. wknight94 16:06, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
• List of fiction that breaks the fourth wall - the article contains extremely long lists without any uniform formatting of the items, making finding anything extremely difficult --Ilyag 17:42, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
• Željko Ražnatović - some issues were already listed on talk page, including poor grammar, bizarre claims and no sources whatsoever, confusing chronology, weasel word, and a questionable NPOV. --Quinnanya 04:52, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

December 9, 2005

• Senior Advisor - This article needs attention and expansion. I'm not sure if the various governmental posts it mentions shouldn't have their own page, and other examples ought to be given. Someone with an understanding of the intricacies of US government should take a look. -Tim Rhymeless (Er...let's shimmy) 06:13, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
• Linguistic modality - moved here from Grammatical modality. needs help from philosophers, linguists, languagers. – ishwar  (speak) 19:55, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
• spelling suggestion
• Max von Sydow This article is really messy, informal, disorganized, and may be in violation of copyright. Donbas 09:22, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
• Roland Clark is not very wiki. Looks real, not vanity, but ugh! Ronabop 09:29, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
• Yehia Hakki - Needs wikifying. Johnleemk | Talk 10:14, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
• Thad Matta - Copied verbatim from Ohio State's website. http://ohiostatebuckeyes.collegesports.com/sports/m-baskbl/mtt/matta_thad00.html User: Zach from Hoopeston 11:53, 9 December 2005 (UTC)

MESSEDROCKER (talk) 14:00, 9 December 2005 (UTC)

December 8, 2005

• Mervyns - Has major POV problems, among other things. --ApolloBoy 02:12, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
• Non-chronological Report - Poorly written, orphan, unwikified article, probably not at its best name. --Jake 09:43, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
• U-Haul - "Safety Issues" section is very poorly written. The Chief 16:44, 8 December 2005 (UTC)

December 7, 2005

• Queen's_University_street_parties Not a well written article.

Possible candidate for deletion I think. Ben Aveling 07:18, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

• Free to Be Dirty! Live Cmadler 17:49, 7 December 2005 (UTC)

December 6, 2005

• Philosophical views of suicide This is another well written piece in need of attention. Divided into arguments for and against, arguments for suicide take up over 95% of the article. Only 2 lines of text oppose it. Durova 08:01, 6 December 2005 (UTC)
  • A curious pairing! Mohamed Atta al-Sayed was acquainted with both topics. Metarhyme 20:36, 6 December 2005 (UTC)

December 5, 2005

• Isodiasphere needs fixing for markup, style, etc. It's something about chemistry but I have no clue what it really is about, my knowledge of the area is zero. Solver 22:44, 5 December 2005 (UTC)
• Buck English (Western outlaw (Calif?)): check for copy-vio; style; make ext lks out of "References"; be sure state/terr is Calif & say so.Jerzy•t
• Morgan Roadster - Many problems, such as inconsistent formatting, no background info (just specs), no sources, etc. Badly needs to be rewritten. PS2pcGAMER 09:44, 5 December 2005 (UTC)

December 4, 2005

• Expedition_1 - much text on the page appears to have been pasted from before the mission occurred; needs to be rewritten, but also checked to see if plans were carried out, etc. Bikeable 03:44, 5 December 2005 (UTC)
• Gaia philosophy - redundant material.
• Kamal Heer - Currently has terrible formatting, information should be presented in a more appropriate manner. --Spring Rubber 05:04, 4 December 2005 (UTC)
• Jianzi - I merged 4 articles into this and did some copyedit on "featherball" section, but the 4 sections need to be integrated, right now it's 4 views of the exact same sport. Chris the speller 17:19, 4 December 2005 (UTC)

December 2, 2005

• Achievement in British Education - Currently one long list representing one side of the case that British education is biased by social class. Needs sources (currently has none) and balance. --163.1.167.160 13:04, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
• Animal Crossing Wild World - This article, for such a popular game, needs some serious cleanup and expansion, including the replacement of rumors with actual fact, detailed information about the game, such as seen in Animal Crossing, and more encycliopedic language. --Spring Rubber 06:00, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
• Boolean data (practical & theoretical computing): My stub hopefully should become a redirect to wherever the subject matter is better covered, or be expanded if not. (See talk:Boolean data if you're outraged.)Jerzy•t
  • Well, there may be a difference between the Boolean datatypes (which are conceptual) and the zero or one (physically in the media) which is the boolean data. I thought about a redirect, then just put in a link, thinking physics vs. math is outta my league. Metarhyme 02:16, 4 December 2005 (UTC)

December 1, 2005

• The Greatest Show on Turf - says "tagged since November 2005" but I didn't see it listed here. Tightened up the language and corrected spelling errors. User: Uncle Bubba

November 30, 2005

• Stonyhurst College Pooly-written, uninformative, POV. The picture's nice, but is due to be deleted as it is not licensed for free use DavidFarmbrough 12:51, 30 November 2005 (UTC)

November 29, 2005

• William Russell, Lord Russell - it's from the 1911 Encyclopædia Britannica, so if I was to suggest that it was just bad writing, that would probably make me a philistine. Well, then, I'm a philistine....

  In January 1680, Russell, along with Cavendish, Capell, Powell, Essex and Lyttleton, tendered his resignation to the king, which was received by Charles with all my heart.

  Some of the references have become obscure over time, and some of the language is a little archaic, but more than this, I think this was just bad writing in 1911, and it's just bad writing now. TheMadBaron 09:48, 29 November 2005 (UTC)

• I've done some fixing; more is needed. Besides the archaic language, the original article assumed a fairly intimate knowledge of English politics (e.g., mentioning "the country party" without any further explanation). But Russell was an important politician, so the article is clearly needed (and should not be shortened much more, I think). John Broughton 21:41, 2 December 2005 (UTC)